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Reviews for Black

By : nickalexwb
  • From MiguelKaiLover on June 11, 2007
    i really like this fic! i hope you continue! this is one of my favorites! please update soon!

    ~Fly-chan~
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  • From on March 08, 2007
    o.O
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  • From ANON - BabyBlueRowen on August 03, 2006
    This is awsome. Hope you updat soon. Please e-mail me when you do so.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 08, 2006
    Where are you?????????????
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 01, 2006
    Weeeee! Love Oro!!!
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  • From ANON - Michy on July 05, 2005
    that was awesome dude! lol I shouldn't be readin it but it's like soooooooooo awesome....lol :P
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 28, 2005
    Chains Sasuke,Orochimaru.I'm hemareging badly here,have mercy,finish me off.
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  • From ANON - xxxx on June 19, 2005
    Paragraphs are good for understanding. Change paragraphs after someone starts talking.

    Ex. "I liked your story!" Sakura grinned.

    "But you could use some paragraphs." Sasuke grumbled, reluctant to say anything.

    "But OroSasu rocks!!" Naruto said, oblivious to the surprised stares the others gave him.

    Also, switch paragraphs when you switch subjects. For example, one paragraph describe how Orochimaru comes in. The next is about how he gets Sasuke on the bed (or wall!). Then sexy talking before sex, etc.

    Good job!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 09, 2005
    They got a bigger and better play room/s ,excellent,rubs hands,let the INSANITY begin yeah.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 09, 2005
    Call me desperate but I like it.You really do seem to have Orochimaru down,it is getting a little clearer what they are up to.Cool.Chains eh?OK! I luv it.Go nuts!
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  • From ANON - angelicyokai on June 08, 2005
    Its not a bad fic... Its actually pretty good, but with no breaks at all it is really difficult to read. If you can't do paragraph format, how about just leaving a blank every five or six lines?
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  • From ANON - Lolichan on June 08, 2005
    Thank you for updating.

    SO HOT! I love OroXSasu, hardly anyone writes it, but I love it none the less.

    Thank you, please write more!! ^_____^
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  • From ANON - Lolichan on June 06, 2005
    HOLY SHIT THAT'S HOTT!!!!

    Write more!!

    Oh, but please no Kabuto. He's so nasty. There should be more OrochimaruXSasuke fics.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 06, 2005
    It reads better the second time once the shock has worn off a bit.You crazy thing,I love you.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 06, 2005
    Well..I...well.I asked for this ,I have been bitching and moaning all over the place to get someone to do a semi pleasurable Oro/Sas or heh Sas/Oro and here it is so I am eternally grateful that you took it in your head to do this.Ummm,the part where he sits on Sas sure opened my eyes wide.Love ?Love??!!!That's really twisted and Orochimaru's name is too long to scream well but hey this is a start.Hell yeah.throw Kabuto in there and upgrade the bed chamber that sounds a little grungy for a guy as fond of himself as Orochimaru is,not to mention Sasuke,surely ninjas desurve 3oo thread count linen too:) Thanks for the fic.
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