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Reviews for Hush

By : MistressofDragons
  • From ANON - blisblop on September 04, 2005
    Oh,I read in a reply to a reveiw the petting and sleeping in a pile would fade off.Thats a shame,its why I like this fic.Its AU anyway isn't it?Sasuke may take Itachi if Naruto helps him!That beating lead him straight to Sound I'm sure.
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  • From ANON - Temari\'s Fan on August 28, 2005
    Soo cool! This has to be the best AU story I have read EVER! Keep writing or um...er...just keep writing! Sore wa sugoi ne! :D
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  • From ANON - Mar on August 21, 2005
    HI!
    this is my first review!! ^_^;
    Just wanted to tell you that I love your story!
    um... other than that i really don't know what to say! heh heh
    i'm waiting for MORE!!!! ^_^
    well,
    laters!
    Mar
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  • From ANON - Emina on August 19, 2005
    This story is such a 'breath of fresh air'... I've never read a storyline like the one 'Hush' has, which makes it unique, and I love that ^^

    I almost cried in the eariler chapter, with Konomaru and Naruto... so sad.

    I love the wordplay and details, and how you manged to stay true to the anime's storyline even with that such drastic changes.

    I can't wait until you put out another great chapter... This is probably gonna be on my 'Most Watched' List for SasuNaru fanfictions ^^

    Even though you changed Sasuke's personality abit, I'm quite sure the story called for it anyway, plus, it's extremely cute ^^ I don't mind at all... what I really don't like, is a 'uke'ish Sasuke... he's OBVIOUSLY not that personality type and I hate how some put him into it.

    Oh Oh! My absolute FAVORITE part. was when we all found out how much of a Yaoi fan Ino is...
    omg, I was giggling so much...
    I always knew Ino had potenial, aside from Stupid Sakura(she can't never take a hint and leave Sasuke alone). I was cute when Ino was spying at Sasuke and Naruto in his private spot, and she's exclaming all these things and what they were doing, saying how cute it was...

    You made Ino into an awesome character, when normally people would just throw her along with every female being of Konoha into the 'Homophobic Bitch' catergory.

    You rock... seriously.

    Anyways
    Like, I said, hope you update soon, you've done an amazing job so far ^__^

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  • From ANON - no one nose on August 19, 2005
    I love your style of writing and the tone. The story base and the plot are stong and there are no typos. But most of all, You actually know how to parenthasize! IT'S GREAT! NO EYE STAINING FOR YOUR READERS! Just wanted to let you know your efforts are greatly appreciated.

    P.S: Your fic is like pocky. It's that addictive.

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  • From ANON - silverfox on August 18, 2005
    lovely chapter keep up the great work adn update soon
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  • From ANON - Yum on August 18, 2005
    Ah.... Super !!! You update !!! I was happy to re-read this chapter, You're an Awesome writter !!!! I'm so damn tired !!! My sister just gave birth to my first nephew and I've not had a minute for me since then... Pfiou... But fortunetly you update !!!!
    I've a question thought... I was thinking (That's very difficult because I'm tired as hell) Isn't it a little bit strange for Kakashi to give 'solid' food to Naruto knowing that he will be unable to eat it ? Isn't it a lil' bit too obvious that Naruto won't eat it and thu give it to Sakura... (he wouldn't give it to Sasuke and wouldn't let it waste...) ?
    Plus, I would like to know if Naruto had eat or drink since the Academy's episode ?
    Continue your Hard work !!! :D
    GANBATTE !!!

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  • From ANON - vampchic on August 18, 2005
    Damn this fic is good. I look forward to the next chap. Things really are getting interesting. Update soon please. Love your writing skills.
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  • From ANON - Annoyance on August 18, 2005
    Hey, excellent story so far. Anyways, I'm mainly just putting this in to ask if this could be in a more m/f sexual relationship. I don't mind minor m/m. Also, if you do choose for it to be m/m can you just not have anything important happen/be exchanged during that time? Thanks
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  • From ANON - SWoD on August 18, 2005
    I really like this. It's very different and original, and written well. I can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Biokinetic on August 18, 2005
    YES!You updated and it was a long, beautifully written chapter. Gah, I love this, this entire story and the plot and the quiet version of Naruto and quietly worried version of Sasuke and the jealous Sakura who Naruto only wishes to have a sisterly relationship with. I can't WAIT to see how this wonderful godsend story progresses in the future chapter, or the next chapter for that matter! Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Erika on August 17, 2005
    that was an AWESOME, I LOVED that bit w-the 3 of them all asleep like puppies:D I just thought that was so bloody CUTE!!! THANKS:D GREAT chapter:D
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  • From ANON - SilentInquisition on August 17, 2005
    You finally updated! I always have liked the ones where something happened so Naruto wasn't so much of an idiot. Sure it's part of his charm...but I'm a sucker for the quiet competant ones. Lol. Anyway, you have a plot line, that while not entirely original, is still very engrossing. And I'm glad that Sakura isn't such a bitch anymore. Could you maybe make her useful too. I know that later in the series she gets much better, but in the beginning...god. I mean is it too much to ask that she at least fling a kunai in the general direction of the enemy instead of sitting there like a statue. Sorry. It's one of my rants. I'll stop now. But please, update soon. I'll be anxiously waiting. Ja.
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on August 17, 2005
    God I love your story, it's one of the favorite stories that I'm reading right now. Just wish it was updated as often as some of the other ones. But that's ok, I'm just that your updates are long also. Your story is the only one that I've seen of it's type, not many people want to make Naruto a mute it seems. Anyways I think that the quality of writing is really good and your grammer is also really good, especially compared to some of the other writers there are. Though sometimes I wonder if I might be slightly desensitized. But anyways I like where the stories going, I know you said any pairing would be secondary to the story and that's ok. But is it ok to still make a request? If so I would like to request that there be a SasuNaru pairing and if that's not going to happen then there not be a SasuSaku or NaruSaku pairing. Ok so I end with a good job and please update soon, soooooooooooooooooooooooon. Like tomorrow
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on August 17, 2005
    That was nice...sibling love everywhere...UPDATE SOON!!
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