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By : MistressofDragons
  • From ANON - harryhollow on October 05, 2005
    please don't end there i need more chapters to read!!! please pretty please e-mail me whenever you post your next chapter update!! I love this story heeheehee..... *teareyes* poor naruto *sigh* when he finally has something good going for himself then something bad had to happen but I like reading stories like yours that kicks butt!! *giggles* please update soon!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on October 02, 2005
    Eee! BAD Mizuki! BAD! ::stabs Mizuki plushie with kunai:: Poor, poor Naruto... Get better soon, and eee, SasuNaru-ness! More hugging and closeness and stuff! Great fic, please update soon! *^_^*
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  • From ANON - Hezzer on September 20, 2005
    I love how Naruto is so confidence boosting! Update as soon as possible!
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  • From ANON - Erika on September 17, 2005
    that was AWESOME!!! YAY!!! Hinata is so cool...so is this going to be Yaoi or is it going to be Het?? Don't really care either way, its a FANTASTIC story...THANKS:D
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on September 16, 2005
    how cute! I like this fic! It really puts a twist on things! naruto passes out almost every ten seconds though... it's kinda weird/funny/sadistically amusing. but I like the different relationships between the characters in this fic. It seems to me like their attitudes are pretty much the same as in the actual series but the motivation behind them is a little different. I don't know. It's late and I'm exhausted and I've been spouting nonsensible shit all day so, just ignore me! ^_^ I really loved the fic anyway! I cant wait to read the update!
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  • From ANON - Shadow117 on September 16, 2005
    Another great chapter, MoD! I always wondered why nobody ever asked why he was hated in the actual anime... I mean, you think they'd be asking questions when an entire populace loathes one certain person. Anyway, you did splendid on keeping all of them in character, have managed to be one of the few to get me to read a Shonen-Ai (If it turns out as one, that is.), and have me curious as to what awaits them next. Good work.

    P.S. - Do you plan on doing any of the anime/manga arcs? (A simple yes or no will do. Unless you just want to leave me hangin' in suspense!)
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  • From ANON - Maelik on September 16, 2005
    Can't wait to see what will happen next. Love your fic, by the way. Though it is kinda weird to imagine Naruto quiet...but it's still good.
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  • From ANON - silverfox on September 16, 2005
    great chapter keep up the great work update soon
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  • From ANON - madnarutofan on September 16, 2005
    hmm, I thnik the story kicks ass. Really, it's a great original concept! I notice that there's some leaning towards shoen-ai with Sasuke. I hope you don't go down that road. It'd be great if they were friends maybe, but not that. There's just too much yaoi out there. Anyways, I'm really looking forward to seing the advancing teamwork and new jutsus of NAruto. We never really see many of the stealth oriented jutsu because Sasuke and NAruto are more of the overt destory-all types. I can't wait to see their teamwork improve with the anbu style training and code either. Good stuff to look forward too. I hope you update soon. I't be great if you'd send me an e-mail alert, but I won't be surprised if you don't. I'd like to b e bale to keep up with the story's progress. if you also have some time, check out my developing story at ff.net . madnarutofan is my penname too
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  • From ANON - Yum on September 16, 2005
    Thank for the answer... That more clear like that !!!! :D
    I've a question (annoying one) : why didn't Sakura ask why the adult hated Naruto directly to him ? She stayed all morning with him. She was quite bold when she asked to Kakashi without a thought of what Naruto could have felt to be speak of as if he was not there.
    Honestly, if someone knew, it would be more certainly be Naruto..;
    Anyway that was an AWESOME chapter !!!! Can't wait for the next one !!! ;D
    Ganbatte !!!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Leasan on September 16, 2005
    What a sweet fic! I love it so far, especially the way Sasuke acts and the way you change facts according to Naruto's state. Great job! I hope to see more SasuNaru moments :)
    Update asap!
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  • From ANON - vampchic on September 16, 2005
    I seriously love this fic. Cant wait for the next update. I'm very curious to know if Sakura and the others can figure out why everyone hates Naruto and if they do, how they will react to it. Though I think that they'll think nothing of it and wonder why the adults made such a big deal out of it. Anywho, update soon please!
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on September 16, 2005
    Actually I forgot something, I know you said you don't really have pairings in mind and either way they wouldn't be central to the story but even a background romance in nice to see in some stories. So I wanted to beg for a SasuNaru pairing just because I see the potential there, not only because of what Ino and Sakura think, but also because of the way they are acting towards each other. It's so cute and I could really see them toeghter.
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on September 16, 2005
    Hey
    This characters well written as always. I really wish that the chapters would come out quicker, but I understand that life comes first for most people. I'm not sure if I've said this before, but I think your story is a very unique plot. I've actually looked but I haven't been able to find any other stories with Naruto being mute, I've seen mute Sasuke stories but none with Naruto. I guess other people aren't up for the challenge of writing Naruto without his big mouth. But so far I think you've done a very good job, Naruto still seems like Naruto despite the fact that he can't talk. So I was wondering if you were going to keep the story going at this same basic pace or if you were going to speed it up after a few chapters. Cause I wanna see Gaara and Neji and in the series they don't come til later. I can see bringing Neji into the story now because they do live in the same town and they probably would see each other but we probably won't get to see Gaara until the Chuunin Exam:'( Are you planning to keep the major events in the series the same in your story, meaning are you planning to have them all happen and happen basically the same? Like how is Naruto going to cuss his way into getting a C class mission if he can't talk, and if he does do that how is the Wave Mission going to change? Is Naruto going to save Haku, are they still going to have their conversation without Naruto being able to talk? Damn now that I've started thinking about these things I'm going to wonder and wonder until your next chapter comes out. Damn, I really hope that the next chapter doesn't take too long. I don't really have to say anything about your grammer, spelling, or writing style because they're great as always. Anyways enough questions and comments. I'll just end again with great story, great chapter and please update soon. Really soon:)
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  • From ANON - Danny on September 09, 2005
    I LOVE your story. i cant wait until the next chapter. please write more.
    THANKS
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