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By : MistressofDragons
  • From ANON - Ointment^_Jar on November 02, 2005
    HAHAHAHAHA!
    Even loudest boy became muteness, he still wrote a lot of sentence even more than Hinata’s speech!

    Hey! Naruto may turn to be “Romance Novelist” like Jiraiya [^_~] (which he could easily “gathering information” cause he so quite now!)

    I like the scene, Naruto and Hinata in hospital. It was like in main story that Naruto encouraged Hinata to be more confident and brave (when she fought with Neji) even he still in unstable condition like that. That similar with their relationship in main Story.

    You could make Hinata return Naruto’s kindness by encourage or comfort him when he feel unconfident or depress.( Like the scene at training area in main story that Hinata encouraged him before he fought with Neji in final round of Chuunin Exam. )

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  • From on October 25, 2005
    Nice...I love how Sakura and Ino are all trying to figure out why Naruto was hurt. Great job!
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on October 23, 2005
    Oooh. Threesome! Sakura, you little perv! Ino, you big perv! I hope Naruto get's out the hospital and goes to kick some Zabuza/Haku butt! Or maybe convince them to join Konoha... I always thought it was a shame that Haku dies before he gets the chance to tell Zabuza he loves him, and Zabuza never realises he loves Haku until Haku dies... So sad... Anyways! On with the fic! May the river of your ideas never run dry!
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  • From ANON - kasumi-chan on October 23, 2005
    wooot! i always end of reading one of your fics cyber, at least once a week, i like this one the best!
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  • From ANON - Quichi on October 22, 2005
    Hurrah! Updates occured! *dances* I love the way you write Sakura-chan. Its so annoying when she's mean and tries to break Naruto and Sasuke up in some fics. And i love the thing about Ino keeping her hair! I can just imagein her hanging it up like a trophy or something. I can also imagine her teammates thinking she's weird b/c of it. lol! I eagerly await the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on October 22, 2005
    I wanna a SasuNaruSak threesome! Just one would be enough! PLEASE! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Yum on October 22, 2005
    As always a very good chapter... Sakura didn't give up yet ?
    For Sakura research, it should be easy. Just look on the regist for Naruto birthday and 1+1=2. Afterall, there is not many solutions : It's evident that Naruto's secret must come from his past... so it can be from his parents... maybe they will learn something...
    For Akatsuki, I would have believe they have spys in Konoha. And could you give us some hint about what happenned to Mizuki ?
    Continue, please !!! ^^
    *Hug the author* Thanks for all !! :D

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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on October 21, 2005
    I'm so sad, I had a whole loooooooong review written and something happened and it disappeared and now I have to try to write to whole thing over again and I don't wanna:'( Damn, anyways I'm gonna try to remember all of what I wrote though I'll probably forget most of it.

    Basically I love this story, it's well written and any grammatical/spelling errors there might be are very unnoticeable. The only problem I have with the story is that is causes so many questions but you only update about once a month. So long to wait, but I understand that you have a life and this story probably isn't a priority, more of a hobby. I was wondering that you were going to do about Naruto communicating with the rookie nine+Gai's team, are they going to learn sign language also or are Sasuke and Sakura going to be his interpreters? Also when you get into the major arcs, are you going to try to write them all in one chapter or are they going to be split up among many. You probably don't have this planned out, but the reason I ask is because I read a story recently that had single days split up into like 10 chapters. The only thing that helped was that the author updated about every 3-5 days. But if your story was split up like that combined with the montly, the anticipation would drive me insane. But I wouldn't give up on it because it's too good. I thought about the whole Haku thing and I remembered that Haku had been and Anbu in the mist village so that would probably take care of the communication thing since the signs he's learning are Anbu signs, so I guess I answered one of my own questions. Your story causes too many questions in my head. But moving on to things I like. I like Sakura's Hinata haircut (what I imagine it looks like). I guess she decided to do it early, so that's one thing that definitely won't be the same. Also the sharing thing is pretty funny, I guess she didn't mean what it sounded like she meant when she said that. I also like to see Itachi, he's one of my favorite characters in the series. Anyways I think this review is stretching a bit too long. Having to rewrite it brought up a few more questions but I think I'm bothering you with all the questions and your probably not going to answer them since I'm asking you to give away your story so I'll stop with the ones I've already asked. You said to be patient so I'm going to try, but I'm not very good at it. So please update soon, maybe earlier than a month. Please please please
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  • From ANON - Tezuka on October 21, 2005
    i like so far i keep telling my friends to read it and next time i well tie her to a chair and make her. any ways keep it up and update soon i really want to know what Itachi well do. i'm sooo excited!
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  • From ANON - Komikitty on October 21, 2005
    Wheee! Much goodness.
    I like this story very much.
    It began with Sakura just a tad too whiny but I like how she's started to come into her own.
    You crammed a little to much exposition in there but I can see how it would be hard not to.
    Other than that it's a very enjoyable story and I look forward to reading more.
    =^_^=
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  • From ANON - Lady J on October 21, 2005
    COOL. I'm liking this alot. good work!
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  • From ANON - Saske\'s Iris on October 16, 2005
    Wow this is a really unique idea. I actually have a hard time imaging naruto quite. Though I like that he uses sasuke a a plushie (makes me laugh every time). Sakura is annoying, but that is her character... Uhhh well i just wanted to drop a review saying how awesome your story is and how much I am enjoying it. I hope you get the chance to update soon :)
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  • From ANON - The Dark Child [Am a girl on October 15, 2005
    I readlly readlly like this story please please update asp


    THANKS
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  • From ANON - ki-ka on October 15, 2005
    whats the deal, you keep changing your names--are you still going to go as Song Min Dao over at fanfic or are you gonna to change that to because if you are you are yu are making one hell of a time to find your fic to read. It make one wonder if it worth to trouble to read if i can't find the darn thing. thats a shame i enjoy your fic tooo.
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  • From ANON - YJ on October 15, 2005
    Great job there! I can't wait for the rest of the story...^_^v
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