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By : BadSam
  • From ANON - errr on October 10, 2005
    just a tiny suggestion, get a spell program
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  • From ANON - nicole on October 08, 2005
    i like plz update

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  • From ANON - YourASS on September 16, 2005
    IF YOU FIX THE FUCKING SPELLING MISTAKES THEN YOU'RE GOING FAR! I'M BEGINNING TO SUSPECT YOU'RE 7 OR 9! COULD BE EVEN 6!
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  • From ANON - YourASS on September 16, 2005
    OMG THIS STORY SUCKS! IF YOU CAN'T SPELL THEN DO NOT WRITE A STORY, GO SCREW YOURSELF IN HELL YOU DIPSHIT!
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  • From ANON - kijo kasumi on June 04, 2005
    very good for a start. as a rule of thumb- reread your chapters they could use alot of work. I bet you are trying to type these chapters as fast as they come to you and your mind gets a head of your fingers. you have good content. just go back and reedit your first two chapters then go from there. If you can.
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 03, 2005
    you have a really interesting fic going on here keep it up make sure to watch out for spelling errors there were minor ones in the chapter. other than that this is a very good fic keep up the good work. update soon
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  • From ANON - raphael on June 03, 2005
    good, very good, in fact... I'M STILL LUVIN IT!!!! XD NEXT CHAPPIE ONEGAI!!!!
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  • From ANON - vampchic on June 03, 2005
    Pretty interesting. I like how you made team seven into a four man team. I also like how you make Naruto and Naraki so close. Its cute how protective Naruto is of her. If you do do pairings, will they be m/m or m/f, cause personally, m/m is the best. but I'm not the writer here. Its your story. cant wait for the next chapter.
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on May 31, 2005
    not bad, your grammar and spelling need a little work but other than that its pretty good. Keep up the good work and consider a beta.
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  • From ANON - vampchic on May 31, 2005
    I must admit, I didn't think that this was going to be very good, but you proved me wrong. You did have a few spelling mistakes, but they can be easily fixed.
    I'm interested to know how you will take this story. Do you plan on having any kind of pairings? Or is this just going to be a relationship between brother and sister? And if so, what kind of relationship? Do you plan on following the main story line? Or are you going to take things a different direction?
    I hope that you update soon, I really do want to read more.
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