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Reviews for Dark Melody

By : NightWolf
  • From ANON - dragonboy on November 25, 2006
    Nice. More Please!

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  • From ANON - Vague on October 27, 2006
    I dont mean to flame and i can even get what made you write this as i too own all the books in he dark series though i personally prefer sherrilyn kenyon's dark hunter series more.

    the thing is though christine is very pickyabout her stories. as iyts ongoing and she's trying to introduce new authors, so sshe has extressed disapproval of thosewho write fanfiction about her. honestly, even if you had tht note at the top if she ever found out about this she could withn her legal rights sue aff on the grounds of plagarism which is a major offence internationally andalso onm the grounds of disrespecting her wishes which is vry well known.

    aff cannot police all stories but they would be liable not you so please think about it next time.
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  • From ANON - Whispers in the Wind on October 18, 2006
    I really hope that you're not going to be ending it there. I really do wnat to find out what happens to Naruto and Sasuke. Please continue your story, you really have my attention piqued.

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  • From ANON - Draconayzia on October 09, 2006
    You've got me all curious. I'd like to read more.
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  • From ANON - A fan on February 04, 2006
    -fwaps you continuously for not updating such a good story- It needs to be continued --;
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  • From ANON - kijo kasumi on June 02, 2005
    O.O I'm in loooove. and yes i've read Mrs.Feehan's book DARK MELODY and as far as i can see you are true to Mrs. Feehan's work. Just don't over do it on the plagerism and watch out for grammer errors. Till next updated, ja.
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  • From ANON - kallipso on May 31, 2005
    Your doing fine please don't listen to the flamers there just sore asses about everything. There are a few grammar mistakes that can be fixed but that is okay. It is also okay to use things as an outline which you did and the flamers are not reading well because you set it up to be different circumstances than dark meoldy with a few different twist. Please don't stop just becasue of them. I eargly await your next update. You can use my email to have some one beta for you if you want. I will try to check it often.
    Sincerely a big fan,
    Kallipso
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  • From ANON - kallipso on May 31, 2005
    Thank you God!! Thank YOU GOD!!!! I love your writing keep it up!!! I can't wait for you next chapter. You kpet it true to Dark Meldoy yet with enough of a twist to malke it your own. Please update soon!!!!
    kallipso
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  • From ANON - Kuroneko on May 31, 2005
    AAAAAHHHH!!!! OMG i loved it this is the first time i've seen ths type of crossover. i'm a huge fan of both naruto and feehan's series. i'm so happy you wrote this story. i cant begin to tell you how excited i got when i came across it. i hope you continue to write and i'm most definitly now a loyal fan.
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  • From ANON - vampchic on May 31, 2005
    I cant believe I'm going to do this. I am righting a flame. I never do that. But I have no respect for people who steal others works. And Christine Feehan is a great autor. Its fine if you are inspired by her works and want to write something similiar, but stealling her work and changing a few names isn't going to cut it. If this is only what you are going to do, then I suggest that you quit writing right now.
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  • From ANON - AllThatJazz (logged out) on May 31, 2005
    I understand that sometimes it's hard to get inspired to write, but you should try your hand at writing something yourself. I can't really say "Great fic," becuase it's not really yours. *sigh* Well anyway besides that it is an intersting story. I think I'll check out Christine Feehan's books. Aside, does Sasuke think Naruto is a girl?
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  • From ANON - Remi on May 31, 2005
    I have every single one of Feehan's books and I have to say this, those of us who write do it because
    1:we love too
    2: even though we borrow characters from naruto our stories are literally our own imagination at work
    its wrong to steal something someone works so hard to write then try to claim it as your own.
    Feehan is one of the best authors I have read, and those of you who like Vampire should read her books...

    Though I am kinda instrested to know how you were planning to get past the baby part, seeing as how its a BIG part of the story.
    you should try to come up with something on your own... maybe in feehan style but something of your very own, instead of stealing her story.
    sorry but I couldn't stay quiet an author of Feehan's caliber deserves to be stood up for.
    enough said

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  • From ANON - Jem on May 31, 2005
    I noticed at the end you were calling naruto 'her' was that just a slip up or does sasuke think hes a chick? -slightly confused-
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on May 31, 2005
    Very good but near the end, you had Naruto referred to as a "she" and "her" instead of "him" and "his". Besides that, a very good beginning. Looking forward to your next update. Ja!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 31, 2005
    Dear Nightwolf... while your author's note says 1. You're new to fanfiction and 2. The story is by the Feehan woman. I think as a fanfiction reader one should point out a few things out to you.

    1. Copying someone's work word for word is called plagiarism and is frowned upon um... EVERYWHERE not just the fanfiction world. It doesn't matter if you are copying a published author or a fellow fanfic writer, it's just wrong.

    2. Stating that you aren't making money from this doesn't mean squat. You are still deceiving people who may have not read the books or your hastily written Author's note.

    3. If you want to write fanfiction ... why don't you try writing something from your own brain and not from others.
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