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Reviews for Dark Melody

By : NightWolf
  • From ANON - anon. on May 31, 2005
    Because I'm feeling evil... from Amazon.com:

    Editorial Reviews
    From Publishers Weekly
    In the 12th installment in Feehan's paranormal Dark series (Dark Symphony, etc.), she again creates a richly evocative fantasy world in which immortal Carpathian males search for their "lifemates" and battle soulless vampires. When young telepathic widow Corinne Wentworth walks into the bar where Carpathian Dayan, of the legendary band the Dark Troubadours, is playing, he immediately recognizes her as his lifemate ("He heard the soft murmur of her voice, and at once his world changed"). Difficulties lie ahead for the couple, not the least of which is that the men who murdered her husband are hunting her and her sister-in-law, Lisa. Corinne's weak heart is also a major source of conflict. The question of whether it will be strong enough to withstand her transformation from human to Carpathian may leave readers with real doubts as to whether a happy ending is in store for this well-matched pair. Though Corinne's delicate condition forces Dayan to treat her with extreme care, their love scenes still sizzle. Feehan's prose is occasionally melodramatic and her descriptions cliched ("Dayan resembled a sculpture of a Greek god"), but this may be her most emotionally engaging installment to date.
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  • From Liliath on May 31, 2005
    um...O_o..wow...really interesting, kinda got my attention but I don't have the slightest like what the hell is going on in there ^^ che...update XD
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  • From ANON - sara on May 30, 2005
    Oh I forgot. Everone who is reading this fic and want to know how it's going to end well all I have to say is read christine feehan's book called Dark Melody and to the anthor this is not a flame I love christine books and do not like running into a blant copy right. I don't mind whan the writer uses the outline of her books and ideas. But come on. This is word to word from the book. oh and from the frist review i agree with you.
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on May 30, 2005
    Interesting start for what looks like a vamp fic.

    Just a few points: there are some grammar mistakes within this story. If English is not your first language, then I suggest getting a beta. If it is, then read the story out loud. You'll pick up the mistakes easily that way.

    Also the format is hard on the eyes. Break it up into a few paragraphs with linebreaks.
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  • From ANON - sara on May 30, 2005
    Well I have got to say you have a lot of guts to copy right from chirstine feehan and to also the books name. But more than likly nobobys read her books and would'nt say anything. Oh well I'am pretty sure you will be changing the story soon and it will not appear to be a ripping off of her books.
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  • From Kerowyn on May 30, 2005
    I think it's a really good start. I like the concept of a lifemate. Very cool. Keep it up! I wanna read more! ^^
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on May 30, 2005
    wow! that was so beautifully written! I cant wait to read more! please update fast!
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on May 30, 2005
    oh my what wrong with Naruto and what is Sasuke? good start to your story
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  • From ANON - Reviewer on May 30, 2005
    You know... you shouldn't post a published novel, even if you do change the characters names, etc. It's not fanfic, its not original. Please don't do that...
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