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Reviews for caught in a cage of sand

By : AprilC
  • From ANON - kkkkkkkkkk on June 03, 2005
    I'm happy with the developements of this chapter! I'm not really sure which pairings going to be the main one in the end, but right now I'm just anticipating the confrontation. How's Sasuke going to react to this? Not to mention how will NARUTO react? Good luck with the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Shadow on June 02, 2005
    Well, it's good so far. try spacing out the paragraphs and you might want to try and add more detail to make each action flow more easily.
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  • From ANON - Kayla on June 02, 2005
    Cause this was a mean cliff hanger. Hope this is updated soon =^.^=
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  • From ANON - Green eyes on June 02, 2005
    Mmm, I like. Can't wait to find out what Naruto's reaction will be to find that Gaara has taken him away. And what will Sasuke do?? Hope you update soon. I really want to read more. Also, you might want to concider getting a beta, the last two chapters where kind of hard to read and and you had some grammer and spelling errors. Other then that, I like!
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on June 02, 2005
    I like this fic...but you'll get more reviewers if you stop with the long paragraphs. Our eyes are bad enough as it is, we don't need you to make it worse!! UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 02, 2005
    great chapter man that was interesting keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Kai on June 02, 2005
    I would like to be Gaara's toy......except.......sand gets EVERYWHERE, y'know what I mean?
    Heheh......Sasuke's not gonna be too happy about this, no he won't!
    Keep up the good work!
    Love ya!
    Kai
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  • From ANON - vampchic on June 02, 2005
    poor Naruto. The village really does treat him like shit. I wonder what Sasuke's reaction will be when he learns that Naruto was taken. And Naruto's reaction as well when he wakes up to find himself in Gaara's possession. Hope there will be plenty on GaaNaru action coming up! Mmmm, me love Gaara! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on May 29, 2005
    Bwahahahah! Sasuke at the end...that was fucking funny!!! Knock him out...BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
    "Then the door opened to show Ino with a spare key. Where had she gotten that? He only had one key to the house!
    Then he remembered one day he had lost his key and Ino had 'found it' and
    given it back, but for that night he had to stay with Naruto." That was funny! Ino is such a coniving bitch...i hate her!

    Damn! Gaara is a complete pychopath in this! YAY! I love it! And the 3 days cut to 6 hours...hahahaha!

    The only thing that bothered me was the format, or whatever...The paragraphs were separated wrong...it was a little distracting while reading...Not terrible, just a little annoying...It's an easy fix though. *wink* I hate doing that shit too...it's a pain in the ass fixing. Heh. Can't wait to see what cutie Gaara has in store for Naruto! And SASUKE! WEEEEE! Let me know when you update! you know where to find me!
    Later then sweetie!
    DeadUchiha
    d(^-^)b
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  • From ANON - silverfox on May 27, 2005
    good chapter
    can't wait to see what happens when
    gaara gets there keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Kai on May 27, 2005
    OMG!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU SAID THANKS!!!!!!!!! YOU'RE STORY IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER LOVEY!!!! XOXOY(Y=GLOMP ^^)XOYXOYXOYXOY
    XOYXOYXOY
    if ya want more compliments please IM me, I'm ElfenPrncss, i'll be on for a couple hours, i love talking to my fave authors!!!
    xoy,
    LOVE YA!!!
    Kai
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  • From ANON - vampchic on May 27, 2005
    nice! Sasuke sure will be mad when Gaara appears, wont he...
    and i wonder what Naruto will do when he learns both boys are after his heart.
    continue writing, me like it. want to read more!
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on May 27, 2005
    Hey! Look at this! A very interesting angle! The story is begining to take shape! I wonder what Gaara has in store for Sweet little Naruto? MWAHahahaha! Oh sorry...hee hee...I'm a bit sleepy right now...Long nights in front of a computer will do that...bllaaa.... *big ass bubble pops* Oh! Hey! Yeah! So back to it then! Noticed a couple of spelling errors, but can't go back and look at them to see what they were so i'll just continue on like i said nothing prior to this sentance that i'm running on even as i sit here and type this. AHHH! OH! Chapter three is looking good! I wanna see where this is headed...Let me know when chapter 3 is posted so i can check the whole thing out...you left it at a radical midsentance cliff hanger in your email! Grrr!!! Sheesh...I need to go to sleep now... Until later then.
    SQUEEEE!
    d(^-^)b
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  • From ANON - yukiko on May 26, 2005
    *cough*gaaranarusasu*cought*

    no it's not that bad so far, can't wait to see Gaara when he'll get that the village hate naruto, and not the inverse like he thought.

    and sasuke .... loll
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  • From ANON - Kai on May 26, 2005
    WHHEE!!!! YAY!!!!!!
    LOVE IT!!!
    Kai
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