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Reviews for Protect me, I'm yours

By : Liliath
  • From ANON - Anon on May 26, 2005
    oh, and btw, there are some errors, but they really aren`t that annoying/noticeable. The language, style and writing seems to me rather excellent compared to (tto many) other fics sharing this particular space, and anyways the story is too good to let oneself be bothered by such petty details.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 26, 2005
    OMFG!!! This is hilarious!!!! When Naruto pounced on Kakashi I just had to read over again. And laugh. This is a very refreshing and much- needed original fic; you`re a genius. i`ve never bben much into KakaNaru fics, but I just ma after having a such a delicious taste. Thank you.
    Now this is not a painting of mine, but I saw it today and it was the first thing I thought of after reading your fic; this must be how Kakashi felt like

    http://www.deviantart.com/view/7411848/

    Anyway; pleasepleaseplease update soon!!
    *sits glued to the chair*
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  • From ANON - silverfox on May 26, 2005
    wow naruto moves fucking fast for just meeting some one
    any way great chapter. there were still a couple ? but not that many
    keep up the good work. can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on May 26, 2005
    LMAO. Talk about an introduction. lol
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  • From ANON - yasu on May 26, 2005
    awww thats so nice and cute and funny XD. please update soon ;_; please~~
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on May 26, 2005
    umm..nope..still some question marks in there....wanna see SASUNARU scenes **pout pout**
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  • From ANON - Dhampir on May 26, 2005
    This is pretty interesting, but there's a lot of errors.. "Board shoulders" is the one that stuck out the most to me and then there's this problem with every ' "" and , becoming question marks instead.

    Other than that, it seems to be well written, but can you check your chapters after you publish them for any problems like this because it makes it extremely difficult to read.

    --Dhampir
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  • From ANON - Kitty ^^ on May 25, 2005
    *smirk* heehee nice love your story "chibi" ^^ I didn't know you had an account on here oh well ^_^ Your story is really good ;3 Me loves it ^^ Anyway I'll be on Aim Tomorrow, so I'll talk to ya tomorrow ^^ nighty night chibi *glomp**huggles*

    *kissys*
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  • From ANON - Yum on May 25, 2005
    Okay okay I review you don't have to bow nor beg, it's quite of bizarre !!!
    Interesant story Will we know how Naruto was 'found' by his 'sensei' ? And how he meet that 'very' dangerous missing nin ?
    I can't wait to read his reaction when he will meet Sasuke, He will have a shock !!
    Please continue !!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Stormraven on May 25, 2005
    Woohoo! Let's hear it for Slutty Naruto!!! Hot, steamy, mmmm mmmm finger-lickin' good...........more please?
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  • From ANON - Momochi Zabuza on May 24, 2005
    The comment got cut off...

    I meant to say that:

    I love the KakaNaru pairing! And you did a great job writing this first chapter!

    You can find me on FF.net... I'm known as Momochi Zabuza... check on me sometime!

    Update soon okay? Sankyuu
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  • From ANON - silverfox on May 24, 2005
    HELL YES A SLUTTY NARUTO YES this is a great fic but y so many ? makes me confused oh well
    UPDATE THIS FIC DAMMIT can't wait to see what happens next oh and make all of them do naruto except
    sakura, gai, and choji k other than them i'm kool with it
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  • From ANON - Momochi Zabuza on May 24, 2005
    Ooh! This looks verry good!

    KAKAxNARU please? KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU ! ! ! ! ! !

    I
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  • From ANON - wee on May 24, 2005
    itz a nice storii but y iz there so many ? marks? itz kinda confusin @_@
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on May 24, 2005
    SASUNARU of course! I think it would make a nice little triange between Sasuke and Itachi..whoohooo. The grammar needs a lot of work but it's pretty good for a non-native speaker. Is it supposed to be question marks instead of apostrophes? I like the idea of a slutty Naruto..kekeke..he's hot.
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