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By : Liliath
  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on June 09, 2005
    Ha! That was very nice indeed! MT did a good job! And YAY! Naru/Sasu-ness Woot! I just LUVS it! You did a realy good job with the Naru/Lee fight scene and i thought the Gai interation stuff was hilarious! Neji, as always, was great! and Itachi....heh...what can i say about him?? Ha! YUMNESS!!!!! Damnit now I'm all mad because i want the next chapter!!! Grrr....Anyway...Graet job! Woot! Looking forward to your next update! Sheesh! So hurry it up already!!!!
    d(^-^)b
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on June 09, 2005
    Hehe you have no idea how happy I am to see a new chapter from you. Hot! Hot! Hot!!!! Heheh love the Itachi X naruto flashback. Hehe and you left it at a mini cliff hanger!!! Hahah I wonder if Naruto will get his kiss. I burst out laughing when I read that Lee, Naruto and Gai has a threesome and lived happily ever after. I know that both Lee and Gai are nice guys, but the thought of them with Naruto just makes me shudder in fear. Lol. That was Neji's first time?? Wow~ hehe we just have to see how Neji would try to win Naruto over. Where's Iruka??? Heheh Kaka X Naru is hot as well. Hahah Gaa X Naru too. I know what you mean. So many combinations, so little time. Heheh Am looking forward to your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Erika on June 09, 2005
    1st WOW!!! that was GREAT LOVED that...just WOW!!! and second what do you mean that Kakashi is going to have a run in w/Naurto's sensei...and they way you said it was kinda ominous....this is going to be all kinds of interesting can't wait..THANKS:D
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  • From ANON - riversprite77 on June 09, 2005
    Your so sexxxxxyyyy!!! ;D A Neji/Naruto/Sasuke pairing would be very hot!! You could even make it into a nice threesome relationship, all three of those boyz are in serious need of some cuddling and lovin'!!! I think you could definitly make the pairing work, your soooooooooo talented!!
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  • From ANON - minjin00 on June 09, 2005
    oh man, a cliffhanger! that was a pretty good chapter having us guessing and some flashbacks of itachi. cant wait until you're out of school and able to write some more awesome chapters.
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  • From ANON - licorice on June 09, 2005
    best fic i have read in a long time, plz continue
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on June 07, 2005
    "…Gai naked Gai naked…Lee and Gai naked going at it like bunnies……ewwww…" BLAAAAAAAA!!!!!! YUCKINS!!!! *retch**gag* Oh! Hee hee....the rest of it was VERY tasty!!! I love your Neji! He doesn't creep me out at all, like sometimes he tends to do in other fics....heh... Very superb chapter! Yumness!!! Naru-chan is soooo cute! I love the way you write him! *HI FIVE!!!* I hope that you will you will let him get *ahem* Seme on Sasuke though...Sasuke needs the cock. Sasuke needs the cock very bad! Damn you for only having 4 chapters!!! I want more! NOW!!! AND MORE FUCKING LIKE BUNNIES!!! Nice job on your first time BTW! Sigh....time for me to get to work on my own nasty writings...sigh...let me know when you update so i don't miss it!!! *ULTRA MEGA GLOMPS!!!*
    d(^-^)b
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on June 07, 2005
    Oh my gosh! You said like BUNNIES!!!! I have to be short with this review....i have go check out the BUNNIES!!!! YAY NARU NEJI GOODNESS!!! d(^-^)b
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on June 07, 2005
    *Drops to knees* AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! That was absolutely splendiforous!!! I soooooo much want to glomp your Naru-kurva!!!!! And the KISS!!! MWAHAHAHAHHAHHAHA! Yummyness! Yay! I love you. So great! I can't imagine how absolutely perfect this will be after it's been beta'd!!! Well I'm off to the next chapter!!!! *places a tender kiss on your toe before rising and running off to read chapter 3* d(^-^)b
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  • From Kusachu on June 07, 2005
    LILLIATH!!!! YOU BITCH!!!! YOU DIDN"T EVEN TELL ME THAT YOU WROTE A STORY!!! I SHOULD HAVE READ THIS A LONG ASS TIME AGO!!! GEEZ!!! OMG!! I only got through the first chapter right now...and GOOD GRIEF!!! I SUPER FUCKIN LOVED IT!!! NARU-SLUT-CHAN!!! WOOT!!!! YAY!!! You are a remarkable girl indeed! Again, *fans herself* YAY!!! Just awesome. I can't believe i haven't read this yet...I feel like such an ASSHOLE!!! And i was missing out on so much!!! *Cries* I'm going to read the rest of this very soon...and i will shower you with more love than you would have ever thought possible...Oh yeah...that reminds me...I have a matter that I'd like to discuss with you...Yes, it's about an orgasm...*snicker* I will be emailing you soon...heh. *SUPER GLOMPING YOU!* ~ALL HAIL LILLIATH-SAMA!!! GODDESS OF NARU-SLUT-CHAN!~ Oh! P.s. I love the way you wrote Naru's sensei! Uber cool. Yay. d(^-^)b
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on June 05, 2005
    Mmmmm.....yummy!!! ^___^ I really like this story -- very interesting idea! Oh, and your characterizations and descriptions are great!!! You do have a few grammar and/or spelling problems, but nothing that can't be fixed........ ^___~ That being said, I'm volunteering to be that beta you asked for. I'm a beta for several of my friends, as well as for DeadUchiha -- just recently, though, so you'd have to read the last chapter of either "If it went this way..." or "Tease" in order to get a sence of my "beta-ing skills", lol. ^^ So let me know if you're interested, ne? Oh, and keep up the good work!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on June 05, 2005
    oh my, the kinkiness of this! and i absolutely luv it to bits! haha, nice lemon by the way. do update soon! the fic was addictive!
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  • From ANON - Chimi_Tenshi on June 04, 2005
    Oh my mother fucking god! Me loves your story to bits! XD
    At first, I was a little weary on how Naru-chan slept around, but I love the relationship he and Itachi shares! XP
    And yes, I have come to realize, a slutty Naru-chan is also very entertaining! Keep writing!
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - angel of darkness on June 04, 2005
    Holds up score card with a large 10 written on it. Perfect!!! -drools slightly- cant wait for more lol ^_^ im favoriting this story!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 04, 2005
    This is the perfect sexual tour of leafs boys,perfect.I hope he just teases the green ones,but ,who knows ...that would be soooo strange,perhaps icky.Sasuke YES.Extra Itachi...Oh god, yes.Flash us,please. I like reading about the moves he puts on Neji,how do I seduce you,let me count the ways.Solid.
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