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By : eardell
  • From Vague on February 29, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

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  • From ANON - mel on November 23, 2006
    Ok, I am really liking this story. I have to know though, are you pairing Sakura with Gaara or Kankuro? or possibly both? I like Sakura/Gaara myself. Update again soon. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Paintedbutterfly on November 21, 2006
    I have loved reading your story, its been fun.. just one problem... chapters are too short!!! ;) hehe Keep up the good work.
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  • From on November 17, 2006
    OMG! I just love this so far! I read all 10 chapters in one sitting. XD It's just too awsome. I wonder what'll happen now. hehe, I can only imagine...that is, until the next update.^o^
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  • From ANON - Breath on November 16, 2006
    *Tosses celebratory confetti and squeals with fangirl joy*
    You Updated! Huzzah!
    *confetti is still raining down*
    I was so disappointed when there were no recient updates (I feared this story abandoned and left for dead).
    First off, Yay! You and your story are not dead. Secondly, I love your portrayal of Gaara in this, very sweet, very believable. And thirdly, I really like the way your story flows, it's an easy and very enjoyable piece to read.
    Keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - Lore on November 16, 2006
    I really like your story and I hope you will post your next chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - orchidee on November 16, 2006
    "Gaara, put your goard in your room!"

    ROFL

    you rule. :D
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  • From ANON - Sam on October 22, 2006
    ack!!! You can't just leave it like that come on!!! where is the rest!!! PLEASE update!!! SOOONNNNNNN! I'm loving this story
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  • From ANON - shattered919 on October 08, 2006
    OMG! i laughed SO bad when i read the part where gaara cried! wow that was ........weird. but funny. i cant read anymore that was just too weird. its just so ungaara-like although your probably right about him liking romance movies. id bet that even in the show he'd secretly like them cause they showed what he wished he could feel. lol funny funny stuff. ;)
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  • From ANON - shattered919 on October 07, 2006
    the characters act real OUT of character it bugs me. try to fix that instead of making them all 'oh happy happy wonderful world' bullshit it freaks me out. -_-
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  • From ANON - Lorien on September 24, 2006
    THIS IS AWESOME! What are the pairings tho? I was hoping for TemSas SakKan and Narugaa....but if not ill live. This is a truly awesome story! PLZ UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Whispers in the Wind on January 17, 2006
    *Eye twitches* You WILL be finishing this, yes? If not then bad things will happen to you. *Eye twitches again* You are not allowed to leave off with a cliff-hanger like this. *Voice goes into 'Goddess' mode* WRITE MORE!

    *bows* *Leaves offering of Jolt cola and chocolate*
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  • From ANON - Ehwinn on September 12, 2005
    Waw... Heh, it's really really good!
    The beginning was already interessant, but now, it's great!!! I love your writing.... it's a bit sad, but I like the way it comes... and the characters too!
    Please, update soon, I'm waiting for the next chapters, and I'm very impatient!!!!!
    Your Gaara is terrific, I love him this way!!!! And Naruto too!!!
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  • From ANON - The Empress on July 17, 2005
    Argghhh! Evil Cliffhanger! Curses!! Anyways, I love the story and I can't wait till you update. I'm dying to know what's gonna happen next. =) Please email me when you update. ;)
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  • From ANON - alisha on July 10, 2005
    Chapter 1-9 review

    You!!!!! You.....I....grrrrrrrrrr...You......sick.....meany :'( No fair leaving it as a clif hanger!!! GAAAAAAA!!! I wanna know what happens!! Gaara hurt everybody noooooo, but its okay they all will still love him, hope he doesn't beat himself up too bad :(:(. Go Naruto! Naruto can fix it by being himself...poor Gaara though.

    Oh and well you write well.....errr I'll tell you how good a writer you are after you update again....*cough* so if you want praise update soon...*cough*(As if me begging so hard for more isn't praise enough ne? :P)

    ~alisha
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