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Reviews for The Problem with Sand

By : Evilchiapet25
  • From ANON - shawna on January 23, 2006
    WOW that was hot i love neji and gaara they are hot. that stoy was sooooo sexy!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - LauRa on August 25, 2005
    Waah! I absolutely loved this! It was so hilarious! It was also extremely well-written. Good use of words, images and descriptions. Grammar, mechanics and punctuation; all *perfect*.

    *support group for the ‘I got my ass kicked by Naruto, and it changed my life profoundly’* - LOFL! Maybe Sasuke could ask to join too. It’d have to be a special membership, though, ‘cause his case is kinda different……

    I loved the subtle bits of humour you interjected all over. * Tenten had dropped a few not-so-subtle hints about wanting him to come over and have sex*. Tee hee!

    The sugar thing was a little weird at first….. then I realised it’s probably to keep himself awake and prevent Shukaku from laying waste to the world in one cataclysmic sweep. Yeah. :D

    Characterisation was really good too. I love how you did Gaara, especially when he deadpanned that part about Neji having sex with Temari. And he was so frank and bland when he proposed sex…… sooooooo Gaara. Our little Hyuuga was good too. Sexually frustrated Neji and creepy (but cute and eager!) Gaara is so kawaii, and makes for excellent smut. At first I imagined Neji being the seme since he has more experience, but you’re right. Gaara can’t, and won’t be dominated by anyone.

    I laughed myself silly when I read Gaara’s note to Tsunade. I heart this.

    Excellent work here! Quality smut like this is hard to find. Thanks for sharing, and I hope you write more like it! :-)

    ~Sahara Storm


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  • From ANON - blah on August 25, 2005
    "Neji was actually afraid Gaara might bite them off"

    OK, this might not have been meant to be funny, but it completely cracked me up anyway. This was a really nice fic, very funny, and I hope you write more stories like this in the future. XD
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  • From ANON - Corvin on August 03, 2005
    YEAH!! THAT WAS AWESOME!! lol, the ending rocked!, and a support group! tee hee!
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  • From ANON - ecchi on August 02, 2005
    Whoot! MOREMOREMOREMORE! You just made my day a whole lot brighter. I was getting sick and tired of all the smut and waff. I loved this, had me laughing for hours! btw, sand in Neji's pants, Gaara has that sandy eyeball jitsu right? *hint hint*
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  • From ANON - Rei on May 27, 2005
    That was really, really, really good. ^^ Loved every minute of it.
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  • From Shikamaru on May 22, 2005
    LOL! I love this story, I wish you would continue it ^^ and that thing with Neji getting sand in his pants was really amusing, to be honest I didn't thought Gaara would be the seme, but I like it that way, so....well, I hope you'll update, and thanks, this story made my day!
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  • From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in) on May 20, 2005
    that was so freakin funny. and i like the part (Neji=screw). this is pure genius here. mad props to ya^_^V
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  • From ANON - just_me on May 20, 2005
    "Are you going to beg?" My God, Gaara can be dense if he wants to be. I nearly fell off my chair, laughing and wearing this huge sweatdrop.
    Anyway, good story. No sap, just raw monkeysex. I luv it.
    Is this going to be a one-chapter story, or are there going to be more chapters? After reading this, I just love seeing Neji tortured. *grins and glomps a glaring Neji*
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