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Reviews for Follow the Beats

By : Wawa
  • From ANON - Nirkal on May 22, 2005
    Hello!

    Mhhh... I like your sense of humor and your plot isn't extremly innovative but is promising a lot of fun and implications :)

    I have had two problems while reading your first chapter. First from time to time I had problems to tell (indirect) speech and inner thoughts apart. It would be nice if you use more punctuation to accent these things. Second you sometimes like to extravagate immensly (don't you ?! ;)). It's alright because it's your style but in some passages you tangled my mind so I wasn't really sure what you had in mind or was trying to say. But because English isn't my native language too that could be the accumulated effect when a Spaniard (or at least Spanish speaking person) writes in English and then a German reads it :D

    Anyway, update soon, I'm eager to see to where this story leads. :)
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