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By : chy
  • From ANON - alisha on July 09, 2005
    You BASTARD! Lol jk mate, heh good chapter..althought it does make my review of the previous chapter of its "kawaiiness" seem rather bleak.....

    So evil to poor Naruto.....that's okay I love my Bishonens beaten and hurt....pooor things.

    Will review more later keep up the great/evil work :P

    ~alisha
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  • From ANON - alisha on July 09, 2005
    OMFG!!!!! That was soooo kawaii I almost couldn't take it!!!! Awwww he Purrs! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!
    Hehe and Kakashi beggin for details.....so easily true......
    Yep just thought I'd review this chapter before I forgot the kakashi and purr kawaiiness...good fic......great fic!

    Oooo review more when I get closer the the end ^^ Thanks for writing it btw.

    ~alisha
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  • From kirameki on July 02, 2005
    hmmm, interesting. My vote goes to a SasuNaruGaara threesome. ;3 Can't wait to read more of this.
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  • From ANON - Ehwinn on June 29, 2005
    Hello! Sorry for my language, I'm french, lol (so, even if I could well understand your writing, I'm not sure for mine... Gomen for my mistakes and my poor vocabulary, hé hé)
    I love very much your fanfiction, though I don't read a lot of R-rating fanfic (I didn't think that it was possible to write so many lemons in the same story, lol), and I like your style of writing too (is it correctly, uh? :-/)
    It's clear that the characters are OOC (shade.... I love these charac' they are my favourites) but the story is cute... many sex, well... but cute! Except that I'm sad for my poor Gaara... Will Naruto leave him? And what about the many years of suffering? He has the right to be a bit happy, hasn't he? Buhuuu T-T (Ok... I prefer Gaara, and I think that Naruto and him are a better couple... But in your fic, he's so violent.... in opposite of Sasuke, who is sweat and gentle... Arf, why is this world so harsh??, lol)
    Well, I'm expecting for the next chapter, gnéé héhéhé!!!! I'm really impatient!
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  • From ANON - ^^ on June 28, 2005
    heh..heh....
    awwwwwwwwww..... sasunaru next? ok!
    hahaha.... sasu so much like so... calm. lol ^^
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  • From ANON - Kayori on June 25, 2005
    REVIEWING AGAIN because part of it was cut off ^_^;;

    O_O woah... this is... the most intense NARUTO fic I've EVER READ!! I congratulate you!!
    This is the ONLY Naruto fic that made me all TINGLY ... I dunno WHY I felt tingly but
    I LOVE THIS FIC!!! ^_^ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! And erm... *coughs* Will you be.. *coughs again*
    adding any 'thing' to Itachi // Naruto? *hint hint* I have NEVER read a VERY satisfying Itachi/Naruto
    'moment' SO PLEASE?! Instead of SasuNaru... How about a bit of ItacNaru!? ^-^ BUWAHAHAHAHA!!!
    If you DO~ I KNOW IT'LL BE REALLY SATISFYING!!! Pretty Please!? And I LOVE Garra/Naruto!!! Shall
    any of the OTHER pretty boys be appearing?

    ARGH!!! I need MORE!!!! ^_^ I name this as top 3!!! OF -ALL- of the fics I've EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    GO GARRA/NARUTO AND ITACHI/NARUTO!!! I like SasuNaru.. but... I've read so many of them
    that I've kind of lost interest in it >_< Not that I don't mind it all that much ^_^ Well... SEE YOU!!!
    Could you PLEASE EMAIL me when you update!? I won't know otherwise.. and THANK YOU!
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  • From ANON - Kayori on June 25, 2005
    O_O woah... this is... the most intense NARUTO fic I've EVER READ!! I congratulate you!! This is the ONLY Naruto fic that made me all TINGLY ... I dunno WHY I felt tingly but I LOVE THIS FIC!!! ^_^ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! And erm... *coughs* Will you be.. *coughs again* adding any 'thing' to Itachi // Naruto? *hint hint* I have NEVER read a VERY satisfying Itachi/Naruto 'moment' SO PLEASE?! Instead of SasuNaru... How about a bit of ItacNaru!? ^-^ BUWAHAHAHAHA!!! If you DO~ I KNOW IT'LL BE REALLY SATISFYING!!! Pretty Please!? And I LOVE Garra/Naruto!!! Shall any of the OTHER pretty boys be appearing?

    ARGH!!! I need MORE!!!! ^_^ I name this as top 3!!! OF -ALL- of the fics I've EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    GO GARRA/NARUTO AND ITACHI/NARUTO!!! I like SasuNaru.. but... I've read so many of them that I've kind of lost interest in it >_< Not that I don't mind it all that much ^_^ Well... SEE YOU!!! Could you PLEASE EMAIL me when you update!? I won't know otherwise
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  • From ANON - Ayasha Kitsune on June 23, 2005
    *blushes* wow..this is one of the best Naruto fanfics I have ever read...please continue!!! Please I beg of you
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  • From ANON - roni-chan on June 22, 2005
    YES i love it! keep going! aww this is so sad! poor sasuke. i hope naru chooses him.
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  • From ANON - Billy on June 21, 2005
    Hi!
    Just me not everyone, awesome going to bring Itachi in HOT!!!!
    That idea of Gaara+Sasuke good...
    How bout they go to test each-other to see if the others fit for Naruto.
    Sasuke going to Gaara to tell him off, and Gaara thinks he can smooth talk his way out of it.
    Sasuke takes the defence, then insults Gaara's sex or some shit, Gaara gets to close starting
    to proove he's worthy.
    Hey! Mabe Naruto walks in and is not angry but feels they don't want him anymore.
    And the 2 still in their horny states take him in willingly.
    Just some ideas for this story or another.
    Tell me what you think.

    not sure if I'll get your email but just in case I gave it to ya!

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  • From ANON - april on June 21, 2005
    ahhhhhhhhhhhh soooooooooo great!!! gaara and sasuke should come to an agremeant know what i mean???? wink wink
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  • From ANON - Akira on June 20, 2005
    I love your creativity! I could picture all this happening to Naruto. ^-^ I can't wait for the next chapter!

    ~Akira~

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  • From ANON - Caciquegoddess on June 20, 2005
    ooh! i love thisd story soo much! i just read throught the whole thing and i really shouldnt have because i think im going to die of blood loss! i love SasuNaruGaa! it's soo different and i wish i could write as well as you! Congrats on this fic and i hope you keep writing because with this plot i think that i can only get better! i cant wait until the next update!
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  • From ANON - Horizont on June 20, 2005
    WOW, great as ever! *drools cuz Itachi appeared just for a few seconds* I like him, kay? XD
    Poor Sasuke, this whole heat thing is so hard for him and Gaara uses his advantage... which, for a fangirl, is as good as it can get! ^_^x
    *still wants that 3some* :P

    I do have a brother, right, but he's not nearly as adorable as those Uchiha brothers...! ^^x
    ~Horizont
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  • From ANON - Leasan on June 20, 2005
    Oh god, sooooo hot!!
    Even though I'm a faithful NaruSasu fan I ADORE Gaara, so please, pleeeeeease a threesome :) and soon. Please? *grin*
    That would be just totally delicious !!
    Oh, and please don't put angst into it, all that confusion about whom to chose is enough, at least for me, in this absolutly gorgous fic :)
    It's so damn sexy, I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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