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By : chy
  • From ANON - hieisfiredemon on July 16, 2005
    Yay, I like your story so much. Woot for Gaara/Naruto/Sasuke. By the way, it's not just the lemons, you're a good writer! And I had to review you to tell you that. I enjoy your whole story, not just the lemons. So keep it up! I wanna know what happens :)

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  • From ANON - Kayori on July 15, 2005
    *blushes* My goodness!! That's a REALLY long lemon ^_^;;;; XDDD

    Don't forget to email me again just to tell me that you've updated XD I can't
    wait till you update again!! *sighs* *bows* You are a MASTER of writing lemons!

    Update Soon~!
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  • From ANON - beetle on July 15, 2005
    nice....the fic is going great ive been following it scince it started i wanted to see where it was going with the plot and i have to say is coming out wonderfull . yes your writing has inproved scince the beggining of the fic and im looking foward to future improvements (chapter long threesome?? ^.^) . i think i know where your going with this and i cant wait to see if you completly twist it right out of my predictions cause thats always fun

    -beetle
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on July 15, 2005
    Very yummy! ^^ I'm so very glad that you updated, and yes, your writing has improved, lol. ^___^ Keep up the giood work!!!
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  • From ANON - Leasan on July 15, 2005
    OH MY GOD...This is one of the absolutely hottest lemons I've ever read...
    I can't tell you if your writing improves on the basis of this chapter, except smut scenes, because this is just one, sweeeeet, white-hot, mind-blowing lemon :)
    But lemons are SURE getting better XD

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  • From ANON - Sukara on July 15, 2005
    Yum! xD -Drools- Long long lemon. =3 -Lubs it- -Huggles your fic- Since it's such a long lemon, it was worth waiting for. x3
    Reminds me, got to get writing my chapter for my fic...-Is slacking- >.>
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  • From ANON - gatomon666 on July 15, 2005
    woot gaara and sasuke and naruto makes three geez i have seen many crossovers in my life but yours is good i have seen and it is so goooood.

    anyway your fic rulez sasuke-kun is so cool and gaara-kun is so possessive and naruto-kun is so horny.

    you rock this is the greatest fic on the planet

    just a little ego booster for you.
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  • From ANON - kkkkkkk on July 15, 2005
    WOOT! You're back to writing this story! I was worried for a while there.
    This was definately a good lemon, but the last sentence made me wonder...Exactly how IS Naruto going to break the idea to his lovers? And if he's the one in the middle, what's the order going to be for the other two? Heh, Gaara or Sasuke would have to be an uke, and that just make me start giggling like a tween girl when I start thinking about it...
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  • From ANON - Adri on July 15, 2005
    Omg your story is so delicious! Promise that you'll have Naruto with Gaara and Sasuke together!!!
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  • From ANON - kai on July 15, 2005
    yay, an update and a lemon, you rock!!! now bring in gaara for the threesome, sasuke did say he would do anything for naruto!!! XDD UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - yamiyugikun on July 14, 2005
    WOW! is all I can say. Chapter 2 was HOT! You've inspired me to write a lemon, which I'll stick soon in my sasunaru fic. One thing though, no oil or lube, that must of painfulO_o
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  • From ANON - yamiyugikun on July 14, 2005
    Hi Vampchic! Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading and reviewing your fic. I've only read the first chapter so far. I will post reviews for each one as I get through them. You got the characterizations down perfect, all the actions described well and stuff. No OCC as far as I could tell. As I read I could visualize the story in anime form in my head^_^ The part with Naruto getting aroused off the trees, that was great, lol. And cum cum paradise is a nice touch too! I can't really think of anything to critique(spell right?) besides maybe adding a little description. The pace and dialogued went well. Hope my review helps! take care
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  • From ANON - YJ on July 10, 2005
    Gods u're good!

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  • From ANON - alisha on July 09, 2005
    Chapter 11 Review

    Poop.....have to wait for you to update now...heh hope you enjoyed the spamtacular reviews all at once while I read your enticing story.
    I hope you update soon....and man the tension between Those 3 is great wow just ache for more....although I'm more of a Gaara fan(you just make Sasuke soooo dang cute with Naruto I like him too!!) Hehe can't wait to see what goes down with the Atakusika(nope, I cannot spell that one) and thier aquiring of Naruto.
    Hope you update soon...

    ~alisha

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  • From ANON - alisha on July 09, 2005
    Heh oh yeah teh first review was of chapter 6, the one after that 7, and this one is of 9, just noticed that it didn't say which one I was reviewing...so there you go just so you aren't confused, I'll post which one I'm reviewing from now on :)

    OMG you made me laugh sooooo hard with Ero Sennen!!! God I'm still laughing away tears!!! Oh man that was horrible!!!! OMFG that was sooooo awesome!!! You write humor really really well!!!! *cough*...not to mention lemons....GO GAARA!...*cough*....hehe in heat demons.....what more could I ask for.....

    Thank you review again when I get to where you last updated.

    ~alisha
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