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By : chy
  • From ANON - blisblop on August 22, 2005
    Sasuke will do "anything for him?",oh good god,I hope its be a triad with Gaara and Naruto!Its was better writinG and very hot.The only flaw was the use of the word "withered" ,that means dried and shriveled,I think you are thinking of "writhed "which means to twist and stretch repeatedly.Thaank you.
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  • From ANON - ky0kichi on August 22, 2005
    Yes yes. I loved this chapter..Both times I read it! It's so wonderful and I can't wait for the next chapter. This stuff is getting better and better! And your writing is great! Weee!! -is all excited and stuff- I'm not gonna give you a moment of peace until you put up the next chapter! Muahaha *Shakes fist viciously* I'm determined! Muaha! :PPP~~

    And I hope you continue to rely on me as much as you need too! You're hella fun to talk to! Hehe update soon >:D
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  • From ANON - SM on August 18, 2005
    Mmm the lemons do help but besides that it does seem like your writings improving. You could always get a reader to look over it for you *hint* *hint* Well in others words, please update! I love your fanfic!
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  • From ANON - Saito on August 13, 2005
    You are an excelent writer, and I look forward to future chapers!
    Keep up the good work!

    --Saito
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  • From ANON - Ky0kichi on August 12, 2005
    Mouuuuuuuu. Weren't you supposed to have a deadline young lady? :(

    Updateeeeee ;____;.

    And youy need to get on msn more so we can have conversations about multiple naruto pairings. heheh ^_^
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  • From ANON - Chris on August 08, 2005
    Wee~! Yay.. anything at all.. threesome with gaara, yes?

    As for you're writing, you are very skilled in that department. Lemons would be perpetually boring if not writen by people with skill, which you have. Your writing has improved very much since you first stared, and you still have room for lots of improvement.
    Also, remember, if a lemon is not writen well, it is boring. People don't only read your stuff because of them. ^___^
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  • From ANON - Reina on August 05, 2005
    WoW ...........
    thats all I can say for now *is drooling*
    ahem anyway *pulls up a banner* I want more I want more
    hee hee *smile *
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  • From ANON - alisha on July 31, 2005
    Review of Chapter 12

    "Yes, he would do anything his dobe ever wanted of him. Anything at all."-----I'm hoping that anything is 3 some with Gaara lol.
    No no I like your writing, and not just becusae of the lemons....but oh the lemons of greatness though!! XD Heh it was a loooong and ......hott lemon, but oh so juicy ^^

    Errr fine will shut up about your ammazing lemons!

    Oh btw, you are the lemon queen, NO ONE can take that tilte away from you!! HEHE!
    ...
    :)

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  • From ANON - lain on July 19, 2005
    OMG MORE!!!!!! *DROOOOOLS*
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  • From ANON - Midori Tachibana on July 18, 2005
    :: nudge, nudge ::

    Hey! This is good please write more!

    :: nudge, nudge ::

    I'll review more if you do!

    P.S. Ever thought of actually having Gaara and Sasuke, yah know (blushes) "teaming up"? I see a possiblitily of it but Man it feels so wrong saying that! No so much the couple as your the writer. I should be telling you what to do! Ah well, go write more, your doing fine. Just please let somebody down softly if you go that route.

    Love yah!

    Midori ^-^
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  • From ANON - miki-san on July 17, 2005
    naruto and sasuke rocks!!! such a sexy combo... i am such a lemony perv... kinda like kakashi!!
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  • From ANON - miki-san on July 17, 2005
    wow ur writing is definantly improving..... to tell u the truth... ur lemons are HOT!!! and its hotness radiats off into me.... hmmmm yummy... hehe
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  • From eiriyukithewriter on July 17, 2005
    ur writing is better that before. It's really interesting so plz update soon. I want to see what would happen to sasuke and gaara.
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  • From ANON - Angel on July 16, 2005
    Your story is great! I looooooooovvvvveeeee it!!!! PLEASE GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
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  • From ANON - ^^ on July 16, 2005
    of course your writing has improved!
    you got a wider range of vocabulary used
    and also
    it's getting more better type of lemon!
    heheh....
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