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  • From ANON - claire on January 07, 2006
    very cute!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Elric Maxwell on January 07, 2006
    Vamp, this is the most awesome Naruto fic I've ever read! I had to read all the chapters first; I couldn't stop! This fic had me laughing, saying 'oh shit!' many times, and saying coments to no one but myself. Please, write more! I really hope that our favorite blonde can *ahem* come up with a plan... -_^ That would be nice to see... EM

    P.S. : In case you haven't noticed by my own fic, for some reason, my perv ass just love threesome and more stories... *blushes* O_O;
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  • From chinohana on January 06, 2006
    XD update!!! if i don't get results soon, i will be affected by the pheromones in the air!!! XD bwahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! >w
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  • From ANON - powder07blossom on January 06, 2006
    Yummy...Funny...I love it...You're writing has improved since there is minimal mistakes in the last paragraph as compared to the others before hand...The consistent mistake almost all throughout the story is the use of the word "then"...What makes it wrong is that you use that word when constructing a comparative sentence, where you should use the word "than"...I found a lot of other minimal grammatic errors (please don't kill me) but I have found no reason to criticize your form of writing...You write a wonderful, catchy story that makes the reader impatient to read the next addition...Please continue with the story...i really hate authors who don't finish stories *stabs those authors with a knife*...Anyway, if you still need a BETA, I'm volunteering for the job...If you're interested, you can see my email add in my profile... :D
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  • From ANON - Neko-chan on December 30, 2005
    yes your writting is getting better. more discriptive. xD and DEFINATELY helps with the lemons. and i love how you put so much emotion into the reasons for the lemons coming about....so is naruto really just going after gaara because kyuubi prefers him, or is it becausee he feels almost as strongly twords him as he does for sasuke? and what the hell are itachi and kiisama (or something...>< i just like calling him shark boy.lol) doing? i mean i know they want kyuubi but why haven't they gotten naruto yet?.....it's probably because of all the fussing everyone's doing. stupid naruto whining about not getting any love. *rolls eyes* can't see how much the (wiser and better people for it) elders of the town love him? and the fact that the hokage has a soft spot for him should totally make him nuts with joy. lol oh well.....i do hope naruto/kyuubi's idea of aa 3way worx out before naru-kun is captured bye itachi shark-boy. YAY I SAID IT! *dagger barely missed me grazing cheek* o.0;.......gtg he's gonna come and kill me if i don't. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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  • From ANON - Tsukiyomi on December 22, 2005
    Damn!! That was a good story so far. I think it is really interesting. Your writing is getting better as you progress, not just the lemons, everything is. It really shows. It would be really interesting if after Naruto finally picks who he wants, the other person would end up with Kakashi. He has GREAT yaoi potential in this story. And I would LOVE to read a lemon with him. This is actually the first Naruto fic I have read. Keep up the good work. tsukiyomi_chan@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - KitsuneDragon on November 23, 2005
    This is such an awesome story!!!!!!!!!!! It rox, and the yaoi is incredible!!!! 10000000/10

    ~KD~
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  • From ANON - ;osthimagain on November 20, 2005
    Hay up date!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T-T I need it PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!T-T an up date......That's all I want....just a simple up date............
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  • From ANON - Todd on November 16, 2005
    omgomg omg lololo rofl lolol omg omg omg

    This is so l33t omg omg please continue lololololololololol
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  • From ANON - Someone on November 16, 2005
    Ouch,

    I've never read any heavier piece of crap.

    Please stop for the sake of everybody.


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  • From ANON - Indy on October 05, 2005
    Holy frick- this is SUCH a great story! Being a total Gaara fan that was the reason I started reading this but Oh.My.God. I am hooked. Everythign about this story kicks ass! THis has totally captured my attetntion and I cant WAIT till you update!!!! Err- I have a question... just maybe- maybe not saying you gotta but could you email me when you update? Its really hard for me to keep up with all the updates for the storys I read and this is one I def-in-it-ly! want to keep in line with. I REALLLY cant wait for a threesome!!!! *squeels* I have no clue how long or how your going to do this but all I gotta say is you'll do it and you'll do it your way... the good way. UPDATE PLLLLEASSSSSSSSSSSSE
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  • From ANON - Alisha on October 02, 2005
    Review of Chapter 13:

    WOOTNESS!
    I was very surprised with the Kyuubi scene...you made it ...hot though so yay!!!! Go blood...ooo precious blood..
    Hehe pheromones.....sweet pheromones to entice the 3-some!! WOOTT!!
    Thank you ever so much for the update!
    I shall review more later when you update again ^^
    Ja Ne until then!!
    ~alisha
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  • From ANON - chris on September 25, 2005
    ak;dsfhrie, continue..... ;___; I'm dying here.
    Uhm.. The part with the Kyuubi.. isn't that technally considered bestiallity? But you said he had hands, so i got a confoozed

    Lalala~ I'm kinda tipsy atm.. ploby have to read this again lattteeerezzzzzzzz..........
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  • From ANON - yurathewicked on September 15, 2005
    omg, i think this is one of the best yaoi fanfics ive read in a while. why? three reasons: 1) the lemons are amazing 2) the lemons are frequent 3) sasugaaranaru is totally in the works. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Billy on September 03, 2005
    Away for a while but back now.
    Very clever, Naruto W/ Kuubi... Don't really like the pairing to much but I liked that.
    Let me guess Jiraiya will be mostly watching, but what he does tell and teach them is ...... oh, how shall I say it?.........

    SEXY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    He ^___________^
    -Billy
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