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By : chy
  • From ANON - eternal on June 11, 2006
    Uwwaaahhh that's a great chapter! Love LOTS of stories BUT THIS IS THE COOLEESSSTTT. Can't have enough of the possessive Gaara, You even made KYUUNARU! Now that's something or what? Tell you been lots of trouble to find the new web add. of this aff. But its WORTHED to find this fic! And now i'm wondering about Sasuke about Naruto's idea of threesome! CAn't WAIT! Thanks you made it a good while for me. THIS IS A GREAT STORY! And you didn't make me confuse about the character and could easily imagine them in the role of the story! Really nice piece of work
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on June 08, 2006
    an update! *gives you muffins* i've been around since the beginning and i plan on seeing this through to the end. jiraiya should invite sasuke to their little training session then leave so that the boys can work thir issues out but naruto has to convince the two that they should all be together first. anyway, nice chappie. looking foward to the next.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 07, 2006
    Where are youuuuuuu!
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  • From ANON - pill-popper on June 07, 2006
    Damn, there's like a freakin' lemon in each chapter! (No commplaints about that) But yeah, I like your story, it feeds my inner perv. Heh. Keep it up! ^^
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  • From Inuzuka on May 27, 2006
    Finally, one of my old favs updates. :D

    Ah, I have to re-read this thing, methinks. I *think* I've reviewed before, but that was pre-account. Either way, it's a great combination of an actual plot, great dialogue and writing, and...smexy smut.

    Overall entertaining. Awesome job.
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on February 04, 2006
    OMG!!!!! *glomps you to death!!* i love you!!! your fic....its amazing!!!!! god, youre a great writer *envious glare* yeah!! finally more GaaNaru!!!!! omg! i need MORE!!!! *begs and pleads!!!*
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  • From ANON - R.E. on February 01, 2006
    um when Naruto and Sasuke were doing the nasty, (sex)(reviewing first chapter) was that real? curious? chasing naruto was awesome, just needed to say that.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on January 19, 2006
    Where are more chaps? Need more chaps!
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  • From ANON - NerNer on January 17, 2006
    OMG~ the first time I read it I thought my eyes were gonna fall out and my heart was gonna go on a marathon
    This is a very hot story, but also has a plot with the struggling of Naruto between choosing Gaara and Sasuke
    Personally, I would choose Sasuke, because the eyebrow-less thing really bothers me~
    PLZ PLZ update soon~
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  • From ANON - SylviaCapone on January 14, 2006
    Nice. The heat gimmick is, well, a gimmick, but dude... it's a fuckin' awesome gimmick. Never mind that male animals don't go into heat, they go into 'rut' or 'musth'- heat is just a cooler word, though. Never mind my technicalities, I'm a professional animal trainer, so I notice these things. Nice writing. You need to work on your dialogue tags a little- sometimes who is talking or whose perspective the reader is seeing is unclear. Rated it the top rating.
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  • From Darknessoftrees on January 11, 2006
    Omg This is awesome and hot.. I would perfer it being only gaara and naru but I Sauske makes naruto happy then I shall accept him
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  • From ANON - da_yaoi girl on January 10, 2006
    awesome...
    more chappies please!!!
    nd more pairing???!!???!!

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  • From ANON - :) on January 09, 2006
    I read through this entire story today. I love it! The plot line is great and to top it off it has some excellent lemons. Please update soon! Possibly with more Gaara? My vote is for an intense "talk" between him and Naruto.
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on January 09, 2006
    finally! the trees! and the Naru/Gaara/Sasuke! w00t! I can't wait i can't wait! *passes out from excitement* Update super fast pleeeaaaase!
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  • From ANON - Billy on January 07, 2006
    sTILL LOVE THE STORY...
    Keep up the great work...
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