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By : chy
  • From ANON - dragonkitty on May 16, 2005
    o.o I love your possesive Gaara. hmm...I wonder what's going to happen now.
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  • From ANON - evet on May 16, 2005
    Ah... it was really good while it was sasunaru ^^; I can't read anymore since gaara.... But I must say it is well written and I liked the first 2 chapters.
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  • From ANON - kieshar on May 16, 2005
    Great chapter. Just curious....have you read 'Shadows' by nekojita at http://catsdreams.nightpiece.com/fanfiction_b.html ...Uncanny similar feel to this chapter vs. that story. If you haven't you might get a kick out of that series.
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  • From ANON - NejiDreagon on May 15, 2005
    O.O oommgg i nearly fdell over when i read chapter 2 XD It was awesome. I love the way you write smut ^^
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  • From ANON - Maelik on May 15, 2005
    I'm gonna try and guess.........the only two that I can think of is Sasuke and maybe Kuuybi in human form, but hey, that can surely happen........I think......anyways, later and can't wait to see Gaara!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 15, 2005
    SasuNaru all the way!! buu GaaraNaru!! ....sorry... :/
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  • From ANON - Yami-Hikari on May 15, 2005
    I love this smut scene, much better than the last one.
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  • From ANON - Kativa-chan on May 15, 2005
    You rock ^.^ you updated so fast. This is so cute and funny. I can't wait to see the GaaraNaru lemon! But I'm still a die-hard fan of SasuNaru. *Waves SasuNaru flag* YAY
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  • From ANON - Kativa-chan on May 15, 2005
    You rock ^.^ you updated so fast. This is so cute and funny. I can't wait to see the GaaraNaru lemon! But I'm still a die-hard fan of SasuNaru. *Waves SasuNaru flag* YAY
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  • From ANON - FlameArchanist on May 14, 2005
    You have a very good start to this story. There are a couple grammatical and spelling errors, but they are not too bad. The only thing that would help this story, that I can think of at least, is that you get lost in the character's minds a little too much. Try letting the readers know the what,when,where as much as the who. I congratulate you on your smut though. Nicely done.
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  • From ANON - silverfox on May 14, 2005
    great fic please update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2005
    Please don't take this the wrong way, but you should get a beta. There are a lot of grammar mistakes and mispellings in your story. I know you're just writing for fun, but these types of things can be distracting. I almost didn't give your story a chance because of all the errors.
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  • From on May 14, 2005
    DAMN THAT WAS SO YUMMY!! *nosebleed*
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  • From ANON - Maelik on May 14, 2005
    Very nice job. Quite delicious really. Can't wait to see how they'll react towards each other the next morning and how Gaara's arrival will affect them both. Anyways, later ^_^
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  • From ANON - april on May 14, 2005
    oh god it was im soooooooooo looking forword to the next chapter does ther teacher find out and gives naurto points or the other???
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