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By : chy
  • From ANON - sa-chan on May 30, 2005
    INCREDIBLE!!! it's so hot! Gaara was hot but i love Sasuke more. Naruto is for Sasuke only! Bwahahahahahahaha!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 30, 2005
    Heh..... *restrains herself from glomping you again* ...sorry about that...... ^^ Thanks again for a punctual update -- this chapter was...interesting, to say the least........ *cough*Jiraiya*cough* ^___~ I can't wait for a bit of Sasuke/Naruto interaction, and not just the yummy kind, lol! I'm looking forward to seeing how you make this relationship "evolve" between the three of them.....without one of them getting killed, that is!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - steel lotus blossom on May 30, 2005
    first i really love your story. second i just adore your writing style, the way you portray the chracters and GaaraXNaruto, SasukeXNaruto love triangles so obiviously i am always overjoyed when you update. but i am terribly worried someone will get their heart broken and i just could not bear it if they do. although i would never tell you how to write your story; i know i hate it when people do that to me(:P). i just wanted to say angst is all well and good but happy, or at least moderately happy, endings are nice too. listen to me nattering away. what i wanted to say was please take good care of them(naruto, sasuke& gaara). not that i have any right to tell you what to do.

    p.s. could you possibly e-mail me to let me know when you've updated? if so that would be majorly great.

    p.p.s. i sound so crazy don't i? nningh, what is anybody gonna do about it?
    (large orderlies dressed in white burst though the doors of the evil* lair followed by timid men in lab coats)
    hey...what are you doing in here? i demand you leave immediately!(orderlies catch ---- struggle ensues)Nnoooo!...i don't wanna go back...the pills make me see spiders(-----hits orderlies with anime-esque mallet that mysteriously appears from behind her back)...did you hear me? great big, black, hairy spiders(orderlies lay stunned at ------'s feet, while the lab coat men mill about uncertainly)...no,not again(---- leaps into emergency escape hatch) you'll never take me alive suckers!...(hatch is slammed theatrically shut)muhahaha.

    *well more exsaperating and smelling faintly of banana bread than evil really but an exsaperating lair? come on, don't even get me started on the banana bread.
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  • From ANON - Nesikin on May 29, 2005
    There really isn't enough Gaara/Naruto out there. Hell, there's not enough Gaara/anyone out there! I think you're doing well though, the only real *errors* I've noticed are a few spelling ones here and there, but certainly nothing that takes away from reading. I want to know what happens next!! You really have a nice story going, along with that well placed smut!

    Oh, and I really love how you've made the two relationships so different. Sasuke/Naruto is the more romantic, laid-back relationship, and Gaara/Naruto is more fast-paced, and well, energetic. lol

    Again, I can't wait to see what happens next!! (silently cheers for more Gaara/Naruto action)
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  • From ANON - Helaine on May 28, 2005
    i love ur fic!!!

    update asap please! i like it very much! >.
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  • From ANON - Billy on May 28, 2005
    I love your story so much!!!!!
    So creative fusing the animal insticts into Naruto.
    Sasuke sure has competion.
    Lav Ya!
    -Billy
    )^_____^(
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  • From ANON - Kai on May 28, 2005
    YAY!!!!!! (btw, the way to tell the diff between us is i always say love ya! or love it! at the end of my review, and, i'm the younger Kai)
    WHEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! GAANARU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    LOVE YA!!!
    Kai
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on May 28, 2005
    Poor Naruto. Torn between two guys. Well not exactly since he seems more keen on Sasuke. But I don't like to see Gaara hurt so I do hope that you have a satisfactory ending for the three of them. Heheh Jiraiya is really perverted ne? Lol. More onegai?
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  • From ANON - germaine(still 2 lazy 2 sign in) on May 28, 2005
    okay....I still hate naruto....just dump Sasuke if you're going to fuck your brains out with gaara....god...I never thought I would hate him this much...
    And Gaara seams so fucking possessive...I dunno, but it dosen't seams like he gives a shit about Naruto's feelings....hell, I hate them both in this story...-___-...

    I mean...I don't even hate Sakura in this fic...and that's a bad thing....cause I tend to hate her in every fic I read/write....oh well....continue soon....kill naruto if needed...seriously, you should....kill him slowly!

    I really need to read something to make me love him again..TT__TT
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  • From ANON - kai on May 28, 2005
    aww...poor gaara! and sasuke! XD yes, now naruto will find out whats wrong with him!
    yes, there are 2 kai's! XP
    UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on May 28, 2005
    I admit it was lacking.... but maybe only in length. It was still a good chapter and am looking forward to your next update. Keep up the good work. Ja!
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  • From ANON - Sukara(Again) on May 28, 2005
    Make that Naruto-san!!! I got mixed up. @_@ *Has bad memory* @_@
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  • From ANON - Sukara on May 28, 2005
    *Pokes Gaara's now deceased body*..Gaara-san...*Pokes again with a stick this time* GAARA!!! *Does CPR*LIIIIVVVVVEE!!!
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on May 28, 2005
    Oh snap. Man this is going to turn out real bad.

    I am hoping for a shared relationship with Naruto and Sasuke and Gaara, perhaps a 3p?

    Love the story. Want a happy ending. Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.
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  • From ANON - angel of darkness on May 28, 2005
    -ish passed out from major bloodloss with nosebleed-
    Gaara: -pokes her with stick- pathetic human
    me: Am not!!! oh and great story!!!!! cant wait for next chappie -glomps Gaara-
    Gaara : damnit get off me!
    me: -anime tears- but gaara i luff you!! -gives author naruto plushie- here for doing such a great job didnt she gaara
    Gaara: sure whatever just GET. OFF. ME.
    me: fine long as you compliment the story
    Gaara: fine, -turns to author- your story is the best story in the world.
    me: i luff you gaara!!!
    ehhhh yea im crazy but i luff ure story!!!!
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