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Reviews for Holiday

By : Sukara
  • From ANON - Uizu on May 04, 2005
    Uuuu... Intresting... pleas update soon !! xDD
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  • From ANON - T.K-kun on May 04, 2005
    this is a really interesting story and great plot! =D you do need some spelling and
    grammar improments. other then that, it's goin' good. =D update soon!
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  • From ANON - - on May 04, 2005
    It was good. It's a good story line, but please please please fix the grammar. The spellings are totally taking away from the story. "funs" instead of guns; "derection" instead of direction 0.o; That's just bad spelling (and there's many many more). At times, you've just hit the space bar incorrectly like "ont he" instead of on the. Sorry, but that's just frustrating to read.
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