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By : Sukara
  • From ANON - name on May 26, 2005
    you sud make one shots , its easy to finish it off and garaa x neji
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  • From ANON - Sekkei on May 26, 2005
    It's A for me!
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  • From ANON - Chibigirls-Lin on May 26, 2005
    A)Continue on with the story. CONTINUUUUUUUEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! It's a really good story! ^__^ SO CONTINUUUUUUUEEEEEEE!!!!!!! But do a good job. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Germaine(2 lazy 2 sign in) on May 26, 2005
    So why do you need a beta? I can't be your beta cause I would probably make it worse...since I'm from sweden....hehee...^^;;;...well I hope you can continue ASAP!^^

    Hugs n'love

    ~Germaine~
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  • From ANON - LaiN on May 26, 2005
    I'm gonna be your beta-reader. ^-^ Well if you accept me of course, send an email oh and if you have msn tell me so we can contact faster. Wawa~ ^O^
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  • From ANON - from me to u on May 25, 2005
    oh please please please continue writing this!!!its so cool!! i wanna see sasuke screw naruto damnit!!!....oh yeah, i went there...okay, please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on May 25, 2005
    Hmm.

    I do want you to continue the story. But I don't think I will be the beta. I offered once it ended in disaster.
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  • From ANON - pyro on May 25, 2005
    I choose... A!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEEEEEE UPDATEEEEEEEEE FASTTTTTTT!!
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  • From ANON - mitsune on May 12, 2005
    kukuku... cant wait for the next update pls post the next chapter soon cant wait what "task" naruto would be doing for sasuke, pls addd a hot long lemon on this fic cause im sure sasuke would deserve it in the end, hope naruto anf kyuubi arent an item cause a pissed off kyuubi could cause trouble, good luck on the next chapter and make it a little longer ne? ja! ^_^.
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  • From ANON - yukiko on May 09, 2005
    ouuh ouuh next chapter soon ?
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  • From ANON - kari on May 08, 2005
    Wait! Thats not the end is it?
    Its just the end of the chapter, right?
    Hope so.
    Great story so far keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Saki on May 08, 2005
    The story for now was pretty good.However, you might want to reread everything and work on the spelling and grammar on some of the parts in the chapters. As far as I've been reading them, it's still pretty good, though a little confusing when Neji was looking at himself for some reason instead of Chouji. That's all for now.Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - T.K-kun on May 08, 2005
    it's not like i don't enjoy reading your fanfics though. i'm not trying to be mean.
    if i came on a little mean, sorry! don't discontinue! ;_;
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  • From ANON - T.K-kun on May 08, 2005
    wish that last part would have flowed better. once again, i offer my help as a beta reader!
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on May 08, 2005
    Interesting. You have a lot of misspellings throughout the fic. some words are being skipped or added to a sentence and it doesn't make sense.

    The plot is an interesting one, but it keeps shifting from place to another. It's not a smooth one either. It seems to be skipping alot of things.

    Other then all that, it is an interesting story. Work harder on it, and it will be loads better. Keep up the good work and make it great. coolsa.
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