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Reviews for Surival Training, Team Work Skills

By : WhiteLiger
  • From ANON - akuma_river on May 04, 2005
    Nice set up of the story. You got a good plot going. Btw shouldn't Shinobi have one better then getting their food stolen by a bear? Btw is that a bear touching Naruto?

    Keep up the good work. coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Tsugath on May 04, 2005
    LOL, that's funny! Can't wait to see who was grabbing Naruto!
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  • From ANON - Baka_Tsu on May 04, 2005
    hahahaha xD That was AWESOME. but wtf is touching him then?!?!?! XD
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  • From ANON - Yurikai Kurosaki on May 03, 2005
    ARRGGGHHHH DAMN CLIFF-HANGERS!!!!....LOL...too bad Sasuke isn't the one touching him..(sigh)..héhé. No, seriously, i don't really like rabbit-jumping when there's no meaning to it either. But anyway, here's the real objective of this review : Who the hell is trying to abuse my dear Naruto scaring him like that!???!!^__~

    Hope to know soon...=)
    See ya
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  • From ANON - AkaiTsume on May 03, 2005
    Hey there! I loved Kakashi's line in the first chapter..for a second I thought he was serious, lol. I like that you decided to wait until it made sense to have them jump on each other. Most people would've taken your idea and had them just jump each other in about...oh...ten minutes after they got out there? I'm interested in seeing where you take this. The only suggestion I have for improvement is to make sure you space out the dialogue. It gets tough to read when the lines are scrunched together on the page. The first chapter was done correctly.

    Anyway! Continue soon, I want to see what happens. ^_^

    Akai
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  • From ANON - Baka_Tsu on May 03, 2005
    Haha xD I love this! The humor in it is really entertaining ^^ I hope to read your update soon =)
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  • From ANON - Yukiko on May 03, 2005
    not to bad for a first chapter. the idea is quite funny lol, and Kakashi idea .... I think it will happens
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  • From ANON - Rowan on May 03, 2005
    Hey, awesome fic, it made me laugh alot!, please keep it up and have a review soon!
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  • From ANON - Ezj on May 03, 2005
    It's good with humour and you need
    to laugh in life ^_^
    I would love to read more of it^^

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  • From ANON - GS* on May 03, 2005
    lol. funny. i really like the story line. i wonder how and when they will realize their feeling towards each other. hrmmm. lol. soon hopefully! *big grin* i was kinda thinking of naruto catching fishes and sasuke watching him and then realizing hiw good naruto looks. lol. i know its cliche and all but hey! sounds good to me. lol XD haha. looking foward 2 the next chappi!
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  • From ANON - lo on May 03, 2005
    Cute beginning. I can't wait to see what you do with this.
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  • From ANON - Yurikai Kurosaki on May 03, 2005
    Hey! That was awsome!!!OOOUUUUUHHH i wish chapter 2 would come out fast! Well, you got a great begining here so keep on going, it's REALLY GREAT!^_^
    Oh and by the way, i think my heart actually stop beating for a couple of seconds, i almost died from laughing with Kakashi's-passionate-love-makin-deal! That was funny...

    Anyway, your fic caught all my attention so PLEEEEASE...chp 2 fast...HÉHÉ =)
    See ya
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 03, 2005
    LMAO, that was sooooooo funny!!! ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter -- keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!!
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