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By : Saro
  • From ANON - 123 on May 27, 2005
    We love insaneSasuke, yesh we do!

    Sasuke's giggle/cackle is very creepy. I feel disturbed just remembering it. When you get around to the smut, please, for the love of god leave it out.
    Anywho, very entertaining chapter. I loved both character's POV (especially the bits about submissive Sasuke and Naruto's...err, half-want), and for some reason, glad that you've made Naruto realize that this is not Sasuke. It was all very well written, and your imagery is very well done.

    Somehow, I have the feeling what Naruto just did was not a good idea. But we shall see, ne? Horray for awkward moments the next time they meet!! I'd like to ramble on about how good it is to see a new take on the NaruSasu relationship...wait, another pointless comment/question that you may be able to answer. Are Naruto's new "feelings" for Sasuke from the Kyuubi, from the whatever that's now inside Sasuke, or something thats been on the back of his mind? (I don't mean mushy lurve, but an attraction) Or a combination? Hehe, anyway, great story!

    Remeber, ukeSasuke>all
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 27, 2005
    OMG, that was AMAZING!!! *glomps* Absolutely, completely amazing -- I loved it!!! ^___^ I can't wait for the next chapter -- more submissive Sasuke, perhaps? Or an insite into what is going on? *rubs hands together in eager anticipation* ^___~ Keep up the good work, and thanks for the update -- ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - kieshar on May 27, 2005
    O.O I am amazed how well you described the feeding. Perfect. This is most definitely the best chapter yet. You captured me twice. I had to reread this chapter just because I enjoyed it so much. AND....CLIFFHANGER......sigh...I will wait....BUT I really can't wait until the next update....am I making sense? :)
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  • From ANON - Suiri on May 27, 2005
    Aw hell! I can't believe where you left off! *mutters* I'm not going to be able to sleep because I'll be thinking about what's going to happen next. Darn it! This is an awesome story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks a bunch for writing!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 26, 2005
    Yay!!! You updated!!! *glomps* Go you!!! ^^ I really, reeeeally liked this chapter, and I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! So keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? ^___^ Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - mE on May 26, 2005
    This sounds so good..I can't wait for some SasuNaru action!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on May 26, 2005
    I find the abuse of Sasuke getting very hard to stomache.I hope he eats them all.He is the only even faintly likeable character.I can not beleive Neji would hit him instesd of finding out what was different and if he knew what was wrong he should have removed himself.Nope I hope they all die painful deaths after being amusing sexually except for the totally nausiating Sakura who should just be stuffed down and outhouse and buried alive for crassness.Hit the guy in the throat,tease him and drag him out to get in trouble,what truly stupid and uncaring behaviours.I have never hated a version of Naruto before but this one is such a prig I hope he f's off and dies.Clear?
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  • From ANON - sorviball on May 26, 2005
    Love it!! ::sigh:: You make Neji so sexy, even if he did just punch Sasuke in the neck and sounded kind of like an ass. Anyway, I don't know why I really liked this chapter. Nothing too eventful happened, yet it was strangely fulfilling to read. I think it was the setting, the type of day that you described. You did a wonderful job conveying the type of atmosphere, the weather, the subtle interactions. And then Neji of course. Yes, I had fleeting images of Sasuke and Neji together in my mind. I really love how this fic is progressing. Keep up the great work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on May 16, 2005
    It sounds like he has the worst of being high and the experiance of some withdrwl all at once.YUK.Poor Sasuke.The authority figures and lots of his peers sound selfish, very straight laced,self satisfied,stupid and they rat,...eat 'em Sasuke!
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  • From ANON - Tsubasa No Koe on May 10, 2005
    Fox eyes...and some dream Sasuke had....I would go crazy if I dreamed what he did....fox eyes....hm.....AHHHH great chapter! I need the next chapter! hehe please update when you can! =)
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  • From ANON - Kireiko on May 10, 2005
    Nice. Liking the detail. Storyline is progressing more and more. Keep up the good work.

    Awaiting the upcoming chapters...
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  • From ANON - sorviball on May 10, 2005
    Wow, this chapter was so good. You can describe all the sensations so well. The dreams that you wrote about are exactly what dreams are like. All the details and descriptions felt very...animalistic, which was good. You have a talent for making the reader see exactly what is going on. I can't wait to see what happens next. This fic is so different than other fics that I can't help but get addicted to it. And the suspsense...I like how we only know as much as Sasuke knows. Are we getting some hot and heavy sex later on? Haha, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 10, 2005
    *blink* HOLY SHIT!!! That was AMAZING!!! XP I absolutely LOVED this chapter -- thanks for the quick update, and keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Kireiko on May 09, 2005
    Really interesting so far, Saro-san, I must admit, I am hooked! (I wonder if Sasuke looks hot when he's in that vamp/kyuubi-esque mode ne? *wink* ) Judging by the other's here, I must admit, it seems I'm the only one that likes vamp fics, but this is an interesting turn you've taken. I'll definitely be waiting to read more from you. Keep up the great work. Great storyline so far.


    ^______^
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 09, 2005
    Oh, yum! This get more and more interesting every chapter -- I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! ^___^ Thanks for the update, and keep up the good work!!!
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