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Reviews for Teamwork - The Night

By : Askerian
  • From ANON - Tokitoh on October 07, 2005
    OMG. I need a cigarette. And a shower. Yes. Yes, a cigarette in the shower. Uh, um, I forgot I don't smoke. Man, you made do that. +___+``

    "Okay, maybe he can sort of see the appeal. From afar. But women sure are freakily fast to get over it. And Naruto must be an alien. Or maybe it's a ninjutsu."

    And this line made laugh. Hard. For five minutes. Really.
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  • From ANON - lstdpnthght on August 31, 2005
    There's no sex in the main story (which is awesomely good, btw)... but this one side fic does it all XD.
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  • From ANON - You know who!!! on June 17, 2005
    LOL! I love the way the ending circled back around to the morning that Teamwork began with, except Sasuke's perspective.

    "He wants something to drink, now, so that he can forget his thoughts, or at least have a good excuse for them."
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  • From ANON - Yuki on May 15, 2005
    "That's his spot -- both of these are his spots. He's the one Naruto challenges and the one Sakura crushes on, and he really dislikes having his weight in the balance of their team suddenly disappear, and neither of them having the decency to notice." This is the best ever. The idea, the disgrunted surprise coming from a drunk Sasuke, and his reaction. I really like the mood and style you used with this, unexpected but it work very well in my opinion, the present tense definitely added to the whole thing. It made it obvious how caught up they all were in the moment and kept the description very real and immediate, no worrying about the past, no flashbacks, just what was happening right then. It was incredibly hot. ^_^ You also kept Sasuke's reactions to a minimum which helped the 'caught-up-in-it-all' feeling well too; he didn't question, nor was he terribly surprised by any of this, no time or brain power for such things. ^_^

    I really liked your description of their actions too, you kept away from the really graphic descriptions of the action one being inside another and focused on the touches and feelings of skin against skin. I especially liked all references to muscles flexing, tensing, rolling or anything similar against skin and Sasuke touching Sakura's back in the bathtub. That was the first gentle thing that had happened and the contemplative attitude fit well.

    This does make me desperately curious as to what Naruto thought during and after the whole incident though, he did get pretty rough and I think there would be a lot more turmoil confusion and fear than we saw through Sakura's eyes in the first chapter of Teamwork. *prays for plot bunnies to breed* Anyway, wonderful wonderful idea and wonderful wonderful writing. Such a rare marvelous combinations. You've also made me a SasuSakuNaru fan forever, even though I am not a SasuSaku or NaruSaku fan either... so... congrats?
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on May 12, 2005
    man i love this and i love you. You have got to update, A.S.A.P.
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  • From ANON - inuyashaman on May 11, 2005
    ......
    that was..... very porny
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  • From ANON - hinshihoushi on May 08, 2005
    Too funny. LMAO! Have to check to see if you have written other stuff.
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  • From ANON - Argento on May 05, 2005
    *makes sweet, sweet luv to this fic*


    Marry me?
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  • From ANON - Nudd on May 01, 2005
    This is so amazingly hot!!! I've read it twice already and it's still freaking awesome!!! Ah, man. So good!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on May 01, 2005
    Good that Its from Sasukes point of veiw,he must have been the hardest to write and Naruto,whoa ,wicked-cool.I want him like this,one over each shoulder,Yes!The Pro in the red light district calling Sasuke lucky,very funny,esp him getting it that way.Kudo,thank you for doing this!
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  • From ANON - ectweak2004 on April 30, 2005
    woah... that's the whole beginning to "Teamwork" but from Sasuke's perspective... niiiice! I thought I'd get all disgusted, cause I don't really like NaruSasu pairings... but this is too good to let that stop me from reading.

    YAY! 5/5
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  • From ANON - Ghonchi (not logged in) on April 30, 2005
    aww, another awesome fic *sigh*. Now I can die happy (nah, not really ^^b).
    glad you made more, since I've already read your other ones...
    Yay! Uke Sasuke! *squee!*
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  • From ANON - GBW on April 30, 2005
    Absolutely smexy. Damn. I know of no one that can keep up a sexual pace like your version of Naruto.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on April 30, 2005
    LOL, I absolutely loved this!!! Very good job!!! Although the ending did seem to be a bit.......anti-climactic in a way (no pun intended, I assure you), but it was still well done! ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Tsugath on April 30, 2005
    Just as good as all the other ones! I love the Teamwork series. I also visited your website, even though I speak very little French, I love your graphics!
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