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Reviews for Naruto Catches Sakura

By : SickkRickk
  • From ANON - BigQuise on October 09, 2006
    Damn, that was some hardcore shit. At least if it wasn't anal, it wouldn't have hurt so much.
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  • From ANON - John_912 on August 26, 2006
    I like your story I just wish there were more stories on this site with men having anal sex with women!:)
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  • From ANON - Josh on August 15, 2006
    that was harsh even if she is mean to him. What made him become controlled by the Kyuubi and what will happen next will he change her to be his or what will happen after everything is all said and done
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  • From ANON - eeep on June 22, 2006
    ILOVE YOU!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 08, 2006
    yo that was hot please continue
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  • From ANON - K-Pilot on May 01, 2005
    That was really short and fast. Try adding a few more descriptions and sticking to a tense. For example you wrote: "His hand shot out and yanked her panties down and off." a past tense sentence. Then later you write (in the same paragraph I might add): "Sakura is screaming and thrashing as much as she can." A better way to write the second sentence would be: "Sakura WAS screaming and thrashing as much as she COULD." Also start a new papagraph every time the speaker changes.

    I highly recommend a beta who would be able to recongize these errors and correct them or offer suggestions.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2005
    I'm about to pull a 'Simon' off American Idol:

    Absolutely dreadful, it was the was thing I've ever read in my life. Just plain horrible. I don't mean to be rude, but...this is the honest truth. I am sorry.
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  • From ANON - Erika on April 29, 2005
    OUCH...hell I don't even like Sakura that much but damn I wouldn't want that to happen to her...POOR Sakura (can't belive I said that...I usually like Sakura bashing but raping....is another story) oh well, I hope Naruto snaps out of it soon and comes to terms w/what he did...does he even know he did it???
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  • From ANON - Base on April 29, 2005
    The story was decent, but you need to work on your length. I hope it's not a one shot.
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  • From ANON - Nobody on April 29, 2005
    Crap! Crappity crap! The content isn't what's wrong with the story here, you just can't write worth beans. You must be one of those thirteen year-olds that the admins were talking about some weeks back. Learn how to write.
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  • From ANON - Tsuki Angel on April 28, 2005
    .....short.....i wonder what'll happen next.
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