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Reviews for Teamwork 2

By : Askerian
  • From ANON - Aupa on June 22, 2006
    Awsome x3 Looking forward to the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - meliny on June 21, 2006
    i will admit that i am not really into the whole guy/guy relationships but i do gotta admit that this story is really good. and i mean good.
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  • From ANON - nARIA on June 21, 2006
    Holy crap! I SUCK!! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed yet!! >_< I've been drooling over this story for the past few months and I just realized I had it on my comp and never reviewed!! OH MY GOD!!

    Just wana let you know...this is good stuff! I LURVE the relationship here!! I 'specially like Naruto! ^_^ He's so cute! I normally don't care much for him, but he's perfect for this family! EEEE!!! >u< Naruto's family!! You're keeping with the characters and that's GREAT!! Sasuke is SO not the type to be like "I've seen the error of my ways and now I admit undying love to BOTH of you!" NO WAY!! He's going to angst about it becasue that's what Sasuke does! But you've added a bonus to that, MATURITY!! I LOVE IT!! He's angsting, but still trying to handle it like a mature person! GOOD STUFF! Same with Sakura! I can't beleive anyone would diss your work! This is a masterpiece of NaruSakuSasu happiness!! I want you to continually update, my friend! I can't WAIT!!
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  • From ANON - koyote on June 21, 2006
    Hi
    Just read chapter 3 and it all was pretty good except for the last bit with Iruka. It sounds forced when he asks Naruto about the 'heat' thing, especially since at this point in the story having Iruka babble about the why's and how's of Naruto going into heat isn't logical is pretty inconsequential (a.k.a. it's not something that I find myself overly concerned about). I suggest changing it to having Iruka just ask about Sakura.
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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on June 21, 2006
    Ah, I love this series. I hope you'll continue to update this! :) I am so happy that someone is doing a longer Team 7 fic!
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  • From ANON - LilyDraken on June 21, 2006
    Wow... this last chapter was... amazing. I've been a fan of all the segments of this story, but this last chapter just had me completely enthralled. Just fantastic. I can't wait to find out what the idea is. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Mageblood on June 21, 2006
    I love the whole Teamwork universe you have created so far and will be looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    So please update as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!

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  • From Wraithguardstar on June 20, 2006
    Asuka, you know i love you ^.^


    more updates for the win!

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  • From ANON - galerian57 on May 30, 2006
    cool story please update soon.
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  • From ANON - ShadowLilly on February 03, 2006
    I can not wait until the next chapter. I adore your writing, you show a very good aptitude into the characters that makes it seem as though the series is continuing within your story. I love this paring, there needs to be more fics made with them all in it.
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  • From ANON - oral fixation on January 28, 2006
    Oh my goodness, I'm freaking hooked! I love a tasty well written threesome and these three make the perfect 'couple' for me. Fabulous story!
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  • From ANON - Kitten on January 22, 2006
    This story is so great. I never really cared for sasuxnaruxsaku, but, I changed my mind.
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  • From ANON - lilly on December 18, 2005
    I just read three of your teamwork stories. I love them Please continue and update soon. I can not wait to read more. I love the idea of Naruto/Sakura/Sasuke stories. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - hmmm.... on December 14, 2005
    i really wanna know who was bigger.....
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  • From ANON - Lady Moon on November 28, 2005
    Please update soon!!!!!!!!!
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