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Reviews for Teamwork 2

By : Askerian
  • From ANON - Anon on August 04, 2007
    This was AMAZING!!!
    I waited for an update like some eternitys and this chapter really overgrow all my expections! Gods! You are the best! Can't wait for the next!
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  • From AmberRose on August 04, 2007
    what an original and interesting fic! the characterizations are great and i hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - boredwithlifeandlove on August 04, 2007
    Great chapter, amazing really!
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  • From Kikyousama18 on August 01, 2007
    Fucking AMAZING chapter!!!

    You stopped before the good stuff though... =) *laugh*
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  • From yeagerbomb on August 01, 2007
    i... i... i wanted that lemon. where's my lemon????? i am so mad right now. the whole time i thought it was gonna cut off, but it wasn't, so when i FINALLY started to believe i would get a lemon, it ENDS!!! i can't believe this!!! i really love these stories, and i can't wait for more, but obviously i'll have to. (and sadly it may take months.) i sat up for eight hours straight re-reading the whole thing and the last part. i am now going to bed, because it's nine in the morning. great job, i really love your character development and how you make the characters interact. naruxsasuxsaku is my fav 3-way, and this is my fav series of fics! well, one of my favs. anywho, GOODNIGHT AND GOOD JOB!!!~
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  • From Himoto on August 01, 2007
    I have fallen in love with your teamwork series since I was first fortunate enough to stumble upon your work. In fact, I have to say that your wonderful writings has finally motivated me to make an account and try my hand as well.
    Thank you for a wonderful chapter and an awesome series! I always check here in the threesomes section in the hopes you've updated and...the wait has been well worth it. Thank you again from the bottom of my heart for such beautiful artwork, you have this special way of making a scene stand out poignantly and I think you do justice to these three characters. This has to be my favorite pairing hands down since I can't see two without the other. They're the perfect trio!

    ^_^ Much love!
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  • From ANON - mirumototsubasa on August 01, 2007
    Yay! I was so glad to see a new Teamwork pop up in my inbox! So of course I just _had_ to re-read it...y'know, to catch up. };> I love your fics; lots of fun to read. Hell, you even got me to read a bit of boy-boy here and there and for the most part I only go for het. *grin* So, continue the fine work! Please?
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  • From fangirlqueen on July 31, 2007
    I love this series! I read all of them in one day and now im hooked! your a genius!!!
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  • From ANON - Korin on July 30, 2007
    I love this story I LOVE sasunarusaku (in no particular order):)
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  • From ANON - Fino on July 30, 2007
    I love you so much it isn't even funny an dI don't even know you. I love reading your stuff and my favorite part is the rants at the top, I just want to give you a high five every time. You are correct in that critisism is liked, but not flat out telling you how to write your story. Keep it up cause i love your work and i'm an english major who happens to be in love with Naruto!!!!!
    Did i metion i loved you? ;)
    keep up the great work cause it is!
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  • From ANON - Duggan on July 30, 2007
    You truly, truly are a beautiful writer, an amazing author. I've been waiting so long for this chapter, and it was everything I ever hoped for and more. Plus, it came out on my birthday to boot! I'm amazed, and I know that I'll be waiting on bated breath for everything else you have to write.
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 30, 2007
    Sugoi!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you. Worth the wait, ya!
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  • From plaawlod on July 30, 2007
    O_O wow... just ... wow... ^_^ Continue Soon!
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  • From PrincessKoriandr on July 30, 2007
    Oh my God~! You updated and it was so totally worth it. I have to admit, this story is one of my favorites as far as threesome's go. There's angst [which I'm a whore for], smut [which, still again I'm a whore for] and lots and lots of plot and character development thats just great to see in fan fiction considering plot and development is the first thing lacking nowadays in fan fiction. The story is interesting, believable and a true testament to your skills as a storyteller. I can't wait to see what happens next. ~ Kenya
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2007
    I really like your teamwork universe. To begin with, I don't think the characters are occ (you were bitching a lot about the guys who think they are). It all fits well into the storyline and their behavior is reasonable, given the circumstances. Also the additional characters are great like Sakura's dad. At first you got the impression that he is an ignorant fool about his daughter. But in the end he is a father who cares about her well-being and accepts her decision of lifestyle, although he doesn't like it.
    Well, to make it short, I appreciate your story and all in it.
    But now I was wondering, since you didn't update in quite a while, if you're going to continue the story. I know how hard a writer's block can be but it really would be a loss if you have abandoned your story, for it is really good and I'm looking forward to part two of 'The plan'.
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