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Reviews for Teamwork 2

By : Askerian
  • From ANON - trigram64 on January 27, 2008
    Thank you. I've loved both T1 and T2. Good pacing and i enjoyed the POV swapping. It's an interesting reading of Sasuke's emotional problems without making him a basket case or normal. Also, Sakura seemed like a real person and if her portrayal fluctuated a bit (as you said in one of your prefaces), i actually thought you would fluctuate and wobble a bit in such a situation. I kind of liked the arcana seal concepts. I's one of the things I think is cool about the Narutoverse hospital where patients are on IVs in the middle of complex seals. It seems to me somewhat AU with regard to the kyuubi because conversations with Chiya (old lady from Sand, I may not be spelling her name right and I'm too comfy on my sofa to look it up)and implications from Akatsuki imply that there are only 9 tailed beasts total and only one of them is a fox. So although the lot seems to echo the foxes in Japanese folklore, in Naruto's canon world there don't seem to be other kitsune. But it doesn't bother me the way off canon seems to bother some people whose comments I've read. I think of the fanfics the way I think of a movie adaptation of a book. It isn't the same thing, or even the vision I have of the book- my question is always is the movie good in its own right. I don't know if that's considered the correct attitude, I've just started reading fanfics and this is one of my first comments- I've been afraid that I's say something dumb. But, as stated at the beginning, I wanted to say thanks- and when is T3 coming out?
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  • From yaoilover07 on December 16, 2007
    This is one of the best sasusakunaru stories that i have read in a long time. can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 21, 2007
    Please write more. This story is fascinating, and I would really like to see how it ends, and how the baby looks with Kyubbi chakra, whether it's Sasuke's or Naruto's.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2007
    I don't mind the long chapters, really! D=
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  • From ANON - Linsang on October 04, 2007
    In some ways, your Naruto world fascinates me much more than the manga one. Congratulations, and I eagerly await Teamwork 3.

    Also the hot sex scene you faded to black on. That'll be good, too.
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  • From ANON - boredwithlifeandlove on September 23, 2007
    Great chapter! Kakashi at the end was really funny!
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  • From ANON - Lefty on September 18, 2007
    Awesome mane. I've followed the story the whole way. I would just like to ask, for one of your interludes or whatever, to post a chapter with the kid in it.
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  • From yeagerbomb on September 17, 2007
    again, i want to say this is a great story, and you're doing a great job! can't wait to see more!~
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  • From Kimra on September 15, 2007
    Yay! Hugs!

    I only look into the 'threesome' section on the off chance that you've posted and I'm glad I did today.

    Love ya work!
    Kimra
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  • From ANON - yaney on September 15, 2007
    hey when the fuck are you gonna write some good smut? you really suck and I hope you know that. dont bother replying in your authors notes cause im not gonna read this story ever again. DONT bother. you suck.
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  • From EnchantedFaery on September 08, 2007
    OKAY, SO I READ UR AUTHORS NOTES...WHO CARES IF THE CHARACTER'S ARE OOC?! IT WOULDN'T BE FANFICTION, IF THEY WEREN'T! IF YOU KEPT THEM IN CHARACTER THEN YOU WOULD JUST BE WRITING THE SAME STUFF THE CREATOR WROTE! WHEN IT COMES TO THEIR PERSONALITY TRAITS, THEY DON'T SEEM TO OUT OF CHARACTER AT ALL! EVEN KAKASHI'S PERSONALITY MATCHES THE MANGA! SO DON'T LISTEN TO THE IDIOTS WHO TRY TO TELL YOU WHAT U DID WRONG...OBVIOUSLY ALOT OF THESE PEOPLE HAVEN'T READ THE MANGA OR WATCHED THE JAPANESE VERSION OF NARUTO, THE ENGLISH VERSION SUCKS! ANYWAY, I LOVE THE STORY AND THAT'S SAYING SOMETHING CUZ I'M NOT NORMALLY INTO 3 SOMES (WITH NARUTO CHARACTERS) SO WHATEVER YOUR DOING, KEEP DOING IT, CUZ ITS GOOD!

    EF
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  • From morwen4re on August 12, 2007
    Yay! I had almost given up on this fic... I love 2 in the morning conversations! They rock out loud! and yay for the limish lemon at the end! now, are you ever going to tell if the baby is a boy or a girl? and who's kid it is?
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  • From ANON - TheLittleWhiteRabbit on August 11, 2007
    I am glad to see that you've found inspiration again, however long it did take. Of all the Naruto fictions I've read involving these three characters, I have to say that I've never read an author save one that has such a firm and steady grip on keeping them perfectly in canon and in sync with the storyline. I simply couldnt stop reading both Teamwork 1 and Teamwork 2, and read both over the course of two days. The story itself is enrapturing and alluring, and I very much love all the plot twists and turns that you've made, and I have to say that one of the main things that I really enjoy about reading these stories is the perfect sense of realism they contain pertaining to Sasuke, Sakura, and Naruto and the world in which they live. Sasuke's very real fear of Itachi standing over his child's crib in one of your drabbles, and his decision to alter his own life to the role of Protector rather than Avenger really stuck with me, and I very much enjoyed that one as well. Its very inspiring to see an author that has as much range, depth, and command of the Narutoverse and I very much look forward to reading your next installment no matter how long it takes. ^__^
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  • From roxnroll on August 09, 2007
    That was really great. I've been reading this for a while now. Can't wait to see what happens next.
    Rox
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  • From ANON - Lostcode on August 05, 2007
    I'm really enjoying your story. A threesome is an extremely hard story to really develope personal relationships without turning them all into fuck-buddies. You totally need to congradulate yourself on such a success this story has become.

    One point I want to stress to you is to not blow up on someone if they give you a review you may not like. Not everyone has to like your story. Stop and think before you get extremely angry and actually look at what the person has to say. It may help you more than you think. If they are insulting your works or being a total n00b/newb...THEN flame them straight to hell. Cause those people really need to die. Of course, you don't have to do this and you don't have to listen/agree with what I have to say....nor do i want to start a fight with you. I just want to help you out on becoming a better writer, not that you need much improvement because you're doing so well :) Feel free to message me if you wanna talk about it.
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