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Reviews for Teamwork 2

By : Askerian
  • From ANON - rolla on May 07, 2005
    nice story, funny too. i like the way u kept everyone in character... gr8 job....can't wait for the update... so plz update soon....cheers ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jiro on May 06, 2005
    Cuuute ^_^ I get the inkling that Naruto is more naturally attracted to Sakura, Sakura is more natrually attracted to Sasuke, and Sasuke is more naturally attracted to Naruto. Not that Naruto isn't nec. attracted to Sasuke, Sakura to Naruto, and so forth... it's just that there are little hints throughout the series, ya know? Or is that completely irrelevent to the story & I'm just seeing things? Or even totally ass backwards? Anyway, great job! Loved the Sasuke-Naruto banter "drip paint and die" LoL. Ino was amusing too. Update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on May 06, 2005
    so cute! great job!
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  • From ANON - PiPiNsSong on May 06, 2005
    I really like this story. Please continue with it

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  • From ANON - Liliath on May 06, 2005
    awesome chapter!! they seem so great together and I like how you let it progress slowly and all^^ please updte as soon as you can^^
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  • From Atropa on May 06, 2005
    Looking forward to read more of this story...
    I like the angst in the whole thing... very well written story..
    Keep the spirit up.
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  • From ANON - angelus2040 on April 29, 2005
    you know i can just see the birth:

    Naruto: It's okay Sakura just breath and push *looks extremly nervous but excited*

    *Sakura latches onto Sasukes and Narotos hands and squeezes with all her might*

    Sakura: (Inner Sakura coming out) When this fucking *pant* baby is born I'm *pant* casterating the *pant* both of you

    The two males pale.

    Well it could go something like that, but I can see Naruto being encouraging and Sasuke just standing uncomfortably

    Anywayz update soon
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  • From ANON - Liliath on April 26, 2005
    XDD okay, I read your first story and I loved it and now, althought its just the first chapter, I love this sequel too^^ update soon
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  • From ANON - jai on April 26, 2005
    *laughs* Great start to part 2! Ino's hysterical. =D
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  • From ANON - XD on April 25, 2005
    This was kinda funny with Ino and everything xD
    But man! I reallt don't like Sakura's mom --U Thought you did a goos job with the personality and everything!
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on April 25, 2005
    awesome! I'm so happy you're making a sequel! I loved the origional Teamwork! this is gonna be so great! And the first chapter was wonderful! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Caspian on April 25, 2005
    Just thought that I should take this moment to declare my passionate love for you. Normally I’m a yaoi/yuri only kind of girl, but I’ve got a soft-spot for Team 7 threesomes. It just works, y’know? You’ve captured it perfectly. I love your Sakura – she’s as familiar as if she’d lived in my skin. Sasuke is deliciously bitchy and confident and insecure, and your Naruto is pure sun. As for you being French… Damn. Your English is so much better than my French or Japanese that it’s laughable. Finally, as if all of this weren’t enough, your Teamwork sidefic “Foxplay” was one of the sexiest things I’ve read in a long time. I can’t wait for your next post.
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  • From ANON - Kaiyo No Hime on April 25, 2005
    Wow, I've been waiting for this fic ever since Teamwork was finished. It's really good so far, for an opening chapter, and I'm really expecting GREAT things for it. Plenty of.... whatever it was that I can't put my thumb on that made Teamwork such a GREAT piece of fanfiction.

    /me hands the author a glass of homemade lemonade and a plate of yummy cookies to help her write the next chapter

    ^.^
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  • From UbakeNeko on April 25, 2005
    Hi! I cannot remember if I reviewed Teamwork, but nonetheless, I loved the story. You made the characters real, in the best of ways. There was some minor OOCness in the original, but nothing that was not amply forgivable, considering the strange, but believable circumstances Team 7 was put into. Just wanted to drop you a line on it, I love the storyline, and am so happy that you are continuing!!! This is one of the few arcs that I can find myself really enjoying without the smut all the time. Bravo! Cant wait for the next chapter....

    Oh! Im sure you have already stated it, but yeah. Im lazy. Is English youre first language? If not, you have an excellant grasp of it. Your grammer and general flow of writing is exceptional. The only reason I ask is because your site is mostly in French. LoL.

    Much luv!
    Nata
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