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By : hawkmun
  • From ANON - EmitheEmoEmu on January 10, 2017

    I know that you haven't written on this site for 10 years now, but your story is really very good. I'd love to see you finish it. More about Sasuke's past after his return, and how they came together as a team again, as well as more on Naruto's pregnancy. I've only recently begun reading on AFF but have found some amazing stories; this is one of them.


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  • From Vague on February 28, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

    I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.

    Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.

    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

    Emi Baptiste
    Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.

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  • From Katheirne on February 13, 2008
    hey i love your story will you be continuing it anytime soon? please....
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  • From Dreamfool on January 19, 2008
    At first I thought this story was going to be a CRACK fic and as I was in the mood for comedy I started to read. After the first three chapters I quickly realized it wasn't. But it was so good that I was hooked and so I continued to read till the last chapter. It's good and deserves an update. However it looks like it's been over a year since it was updated so I don't hold out much hope. Shame, it's a good story.

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  • From kotikiz on October 29, 2007
    ammm... do you have new chapters or you broke up with this story...
    I hope to see updates soon!! Like this story a lot!!!
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  • From oohshiny on October 12, 2007
    NICE JOB SO FAR!!! now i really have to see the next chapter, huh? ^^ email me whn you update, please? my email's deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From Chria on July 02, 2007
    In the beginning the characters were a bit ooc for me to be so emotional. I imagined them more pissy than anything else but your latest chaper is the bomb! It shows exactly how it became that way. I understood why Sasuke was so open and understanding and it was because of the mistakes he made as well. What Naruto did was so wrong but now it makes sense why Sasuke forgave him. I thought that was weird before since he's the type of guy to hold gruges but now it feels more natural. Letting me inside Sasuke's head really helps the story seem real.
    Reading how Naruto looks down on Sasuke as being weak and stupid was so good to see. And I loved how Sakura and Naruto treated him being back on the team and how Kakashi helped him out on the side. Hmmmm
    Even though Naruto has Sasuke's forgiveness I think you should give Naruto a hard time. Cause I haven't forgiven him! lol
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  • From brook13baby13 on May 22, 2007
    I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY...plz dont drop it or anything....Hmmm SOO u better update really soon i have ur story on my fav's just check out my profile....and see that this STORY IS LOVE BY ALL.
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  • From Hakugirl on April 03, 2007
    This story is really good. I love it. Normally I HATE Mpreg but I tolerate it in this fic cause it actually makes sense unlike the other ones I read where naruto gets pregnate just by anal sex. I mean Its unstandable that the Kyuubi(I think I spelled that wrong) can cause prengnancy but through anal omg it that was possible than chicks should be able to get pregant the sameway too. ya your version makes sense. Naruto turns into a girl then has sex w/sasuke and the Nine Tails allows him to have a child. Great fic. Love it
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  • From on March 14, 2007
    Also, THIS STORY IS AWSOME
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  • From on March 14, 2007
    I know someone probably already said something but baa-chan means Grandma
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  • From Gwyllion on February 22, 2007
    Aah...please do continue this fic. I find it more and more interesting as I jump from one chapter to the next. Hope the next one will be longer. Will be watching this post. :D
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  • From Sisco on January 20, 2007
    Hello! My best friend introduced me to this fic and I must say, I'm in love with it! X3 I can't wait until you update. Also, may I be added to your update list? lol. Use the one shown if you add me. ^-^ Once again, Great fic!
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 09, 2007
    PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Would you update!!! I'm begging like you be for reviews. I really enjoy your work. Would you tell me when you update (email shinimegamisan@gmail.com ) I cant wait until you get out of the past and get on with the story. I'm so excited XD. Pretty please update soon. *tries cute naruto puppy eyes*
    Thanks for your wonderful story
    Kat
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on January 09, 2007
    *bubbles with love*

    Ah, I just found this fic on page 52 o_O. IT'S SO AWESOME! I'm actually quite enjoying the Sasuke-flashback ^^. You've done an amaaaazing job with the story, so pleeeeease tell me you're updating it! *love love*
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