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By : hawkmun
  • From ANON - Ketchup on January 09, 2006
    *lol*
    I was one of the ones for which "Two years, three months..." didn't quite click in.
    It threw me on a loop for a while until I re-read the previous chapter.
    I thought I had stumbled into another story.
    (BTW, in c17, should it be "It was definitely more of a question...." instead of "defiantly"?)
    Anyways, it was a good chapter, always interesting to see Naruto give Sasuke a good slap down when he deserves it.
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  • From ANON - Astra on December 23, 2005
    well I admit I was abit wary of this story at first. Mpreg never did anything for me. I was curious though and so kept reading. Highly impressed with what I've encountered. The flow of the story is only getting better as it progresses. A few typos now again, but nothing major. I like how you made Mpreg reasonable with Kyuubi involved. The story isn't even finished yet and I can already see a sequel following baby naru/sasu/kyuubi. I'm looking foreward to updates and if you do decide to email people updates please include me.
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  • From ANON - Kiara on December 21, 2005
    Wow, really great story! I totally love it! Please, e-mail me for new updates and continue updating! Happy Holidays!
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  • From DrapedInBlack on December 20, 2005
    I love this story. It is one of my favorite. It's so well written and addictive. I can't wait to know what happens next! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!! PLEASE!!! The horrid thing is...you leave it on such cliffies... None the less, keep up the kick ass work!

    -Black

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  • From ANON - Mally on December 20, 2005
    *gives all the reviews* Ok. Reviewed....^^ Are you going to post more? Tis so good! The chars are like real people, with a little and understandable OOC....but not much. And so very fluffy and cute! ^^ I alos love you're writing style, clean crisp and very easy to understand. So pleaaseeeeeeeeeee write more? Cause I want to know what happens too! ^___^
    ~Mally~
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  • From omnichild on December 20, 2005
    Enjoying it. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - on December 20, 2005
    Awe.
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  • From ANON - electramyers on December 18, 2005
    OMG! I just found this fanfiction a few days ago and I couldn't stop reading until I finished!!
    I love it! =^.^=
    And now it seem there will be some "home comedy" at the uchiha mansion yay!
    I wonder, with all the ramen naruto usually eats... what'll happen when he gets cravings? ;)
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on December 14, 2005
    Update pleasenessnesse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I beg you!!!!!!!!!! I really want to know what happends!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    -The Update Monster^^
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  • From ANON - nanomi on December 14, 2005
    Awww...:D This fic has been so cute! I luff all the fluff
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  • From ANON - anonymous on December 11, 2005
    This may be my first time reviewing on AFF. This is a great story, and I hope that you continue until the end. Everyone seems to be in character, and while there was torture, there wasn't any "this is the apocolypse" or "I have nothing, not even a soul" or anything along those lines. Thanks! ^_^ sincerely, anonymous
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  • From ANON - akiravadel on December 09, 2005
    NOO!!! How can you end it soo!!! I love your story and I'm so happy you posed again. Keep it up! What well he say? Well he go into denial? Hm... or become very overprotective... I see the Uchiha clan as possesive people...because well....their symbol is on...everything ^-^!

    ~Akira~
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  • From ANON - silver-eyed on December 08, 2005
    Love, your fic! I found it tonight and began reading. I've been on AFF.net for awhile reading a lot of stories and yours is the first I've gotten the courage to actually review. (Has it ever occurred to authors that most people don't review, even though the fic was great, that people like me don't know how to review?) ANyways, heh, here goes. So far, I love the plot. I've read a billion diferent nausasu or other pairings from Naruto, and yours stood out as unique. I like your take on Naruto and Sasuke. I have no problem with the writing style as I'm pretty open minded about that and how people write. I can read just about anything. That's not to say that your grammar is bad. It's good and the story flows really well.
    There was a point though, and I can't remember if it was in this chapter or chapter fifteen, but from the mental torture, I thought perhaps Naruto would be a bit more damaged than he was. I mean, it seems like he got over it pretty quickly, with only a few words exchanged between him and Sasuke. One thing that did bother me was the asterisks around certain words like: he *was* happy. I'm not sure why you did that or maybe it's just the formatting and it didn't turn out right. Oh, well. I hope this spurs you to write faster :smile: And, I'd like to get an e-mail to know when you have updated. Thanks and keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Myst on December 07, 2005
    Wow. I'd totally forgotten about this story until I saw the update today. I'm glad a new chapter was up. I'm anxious to see how it all comes together. I'd love to be added to your 'notify/update' list, if you don't mind adding me.
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  • From ANON - Azana on December 07, 2005
    Hmm I was happy to see another chapter up but, why would Sasuke feel uneasy about taking care of Naruto, especially after spending the night? I guess I'll just have to wait and see n_n great job otherwise.
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