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By : hawkmun
  • From ANON - just a reader on June 15, 2006
    this story is very good. i like how it grabs my attention. usually, there are stories that start with the sex and lust thing, and although you did that, you made it more. you gave it content instead of two hot guys getting it on. you've caused me to tear during naruto's emotional turmoil post capture and i like the insight you give sasuke because it isn't to the point where he's no longer sasuke anymore.. keep on writing (even tho i kno you will) because its vastly intertaining and i want to see the end.. particularly an ending where we get to find out how the baby looks and the personality he has.. and how they'll behave as fathers..
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  • From ANON - nette on June 15, 2006
    hi, i just started reading this today and found it very well thought out. i like it and can't wait to read more. although there can be some editing with double typing words and saying "he" instead of "she" for some of the characters but other than that it was good can't wait to read more.
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  • From Wraithguardstar on June 15, 2006
    i like it, update or die!
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  • From ladygizarme on June 14, 2006
    i can't believe this story only has 190 reviews! *shock* it's sooo gooood! m-preg is my guilty pleasure, but it's hardly ever done to my complete satisfaction, but you're writing it very well!! yours is most definitely in my top 5 of EXCELLENT m-pregs, and most likely the first ever naruto one that gets that title from me lol

    the pregnancy is moving along in stride and naruto's not becoming OOC simply for the sake of being pregnant and "moody/emotional" (i hope the rest of the pregnancy progresses as a "normal" one would, with all the right indicators in the proper timeline--having GONE THROUGH a pregnancy, one of the big disappointments in m-preg is people screwing that up); i liked the way naruto got pregnant while using oiroke no jutsu (but still turned back to his male form right after--after all, that's the *point* of m-preg ne??!! pregnant-yaoi!), and sasuke not knowing but being drawn to "her"--and that lemon was SO hot, i was astonished i actually liked reading an m/f lemon with sasuke lol (of course naruto being the girl in this particular situation probably helped with the non-squickiness :p); it's also kinda refreshing to have sasuke not know right away how he felt about the situation (even though, of course, we're all rooting for him to come to his senses about loving our fav blonde boy..), because then we can watch him fall for him rather than "oh! sudden realization--i love you too! *lovelovelove*" lol

    and besides that, you have other STORY going on too, and that is awesome! i love detailed fics, they have more drama! and itachi with akatsuki coming after naruto while naruto is carrying sasuke's child who will be the heir and continuation of the uchiha line that itachi has disposed of everyone else--well how much more drama can you get than that??!! and the torture naruto went through from itachi's mangekyou sharingan was graphic yet fitting--it was so something he would do, to make naruto watch his unborn child be pulled from his body and killed over and over; that's gonna be quite the mental trauma, surely, and i wonder how it will further affect him later on.. poor naruto :( (and sasuke..)

    it's interesting now in these past couple chapters also, to see what happened just after sasuke was brought back from sound, though i have to admit--i hope it doesn't last toooo much longer and we can get back to the present soon XP

    this is just such a great and detailed story! i love you! can i say that without weirding you out? :p

    i do have a couple concrit for ya, if ya don't mind, though..

    1) how old are they supposed to be? in the 2nd chapter, Kiba said Naruto was 19, but then when Naruto was telling Sasuke about Kyuubi, he said 15 years ago--but Kyuubi was put into him just after he was born (put into a child whose umbilical cord had just been cut) so this confused my timeline for the story (also the fact that i thought it had said in the beginning that it had been a year since sasuke had woke up in the hospital after naruto brought him back, but then the start of these flashback chapters said 2 years ago.. maybe i'm remembering wrong, but i read this all in one afternoon today and am pretty sure that's what it said in the beginning.. *scratches head*)

    2) you corrected yourself for later chapters, but it'd be nice if you went back to chapter 2 (i think it was) and change "jitsu" to "jutsu" (you had also spelled "kunoichi" correctly for the key, but spelled it "konoichi" i believe, in the actual story)

    3) there are some word confusions you have on a regular basis, such as "then" instead of "than" (such as you say "rather then" when it should be "rather than") and "passed" instead of "past" -- i realize these are things easily missed, especially when most writing is done late at night/early early morning, and even easily missed by a beta or even a spellchecking program since both forms of the words are spelled correctly, just used incorrectly; so i'm trying not to be too nitpicky and list them ALL, and it's not really *that* big a deal but i thought i'd mention it anyway..

    other than that, the story is excellent.. i hope you have more for this soon, and would love to be added to your list of people to email for updates, onegai! email: ladygizarme@yahoo.com

    arigatou!! keep up the great work! *cookies*

    ~ lg
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  • From ANON - coolj on June 02, 2006
    this a great story please update soon
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  • From ANON - Mikkie on May 26, 2006
    OMg Omg you HAVE to finish this, I almost never see the end of story's with my beloved male pragnency (really tis liek a dream come true, if males where really able to cary baby's... would been the burden of us woman.. XD ) anyways please pleaase please go on.. I love it how you put sasuke and naruto in this story, its the best, it really is... (not to mention female naruto... sweet idea, I swear)

    once again, pwease go on
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  • From ANON - Shadow on January 20, 2006
    uhm...okay what the hell happens later in the series is really what I'm wondering, I've seen up to episode 149 and read only the first seven manga so I'm a little lost on the whole bring Sasuke back thing. Anyway this is a really well written fic and the idea that there aren't instant kiss and make-up stuff helps. WRITE MORE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - vegeta's slave on January 16, 2006
    Awesome!!!!! Keep on writting, please.
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  • From ANON - Stupidity Unleashed on January 16, 2006
    I love this story so much...PLEASE CONTINUE!! For the sake of my fellow readers DON'T RUN OUT OF GAS IN THE MIDDLE OF A HIGHWAY! I hate it when that happens...especially on road trips. Sorry if this annoys you, but will there be any lemony goodness in the next chappie? (ducks behind a desk) Please don't hurt me!
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  • From ANON - ZheM on January 13, 2006
    Very, very good story. I love the way this is going and I can't wait to see what will happen with our two favorite boys in the future. I'd love to get an e-mail reminder when you're able to update if it's not too much trouble. Thanks in advance and very good work.
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  • From ANON - Alaria on January 12, 2006
    Awwww, poor Sasuke!! I feel so sorry for him now.
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  • From ANON - Azana on January 11, 2006
    *grins madly* and who might be the lucky person to watch Sasuke? hehe. As usual it's fantastic n_n Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kyra on January 11, 2006
    I really really like this story. I was wondering if you could put me on that mailing list that you mentioned, my e-mail is kyra_0202@yahoo.com. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on January 10, 2006
    Not that I don't love this chapter but what was the point??? I don't under stand it at all!!!!!!!! I mean it's cool and all but it dosen't seem to fit!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!^^

    -The Update Monster
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  • From chinohana on January 10, 2006
    *tears running down like a bucket* awww...
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