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Reviews for As Long as it Feels OK

By : hawkmun
  • From ANON - ki-ka on June 24, 2006
    Nice insight on the flash backs, especially on the actions and emotions of the characters with in the years following sasuke's return. ^_^ very nice plot line..i started to read your storie b-4 until AFF when and change everything..love love on the storie..-U-luck on the next chappie..
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  • From ANON - Takayu on June 24, 2006
    I really, really, really, really like this story! ^_^
    I'm not sure if I have to be a member or not to be added to the up-date list, but, either way,
    could you just drop me a line when you get a new chapter? If that's too much to ask though,
    that's okay, I'll just check back now and then on my own. ^_^

    And, um, just an itsy bitsy bit of advice (I know nobody likes perfectionists but, XD),
    perhaps you should be just a tad more watchful of word errors?
    Like, I noticed in another chapter there was a part that said
    "The paint was so intense" or something like that. It made me crack a smile for a moment
    at the randomness of it but, lol.

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  • From ANON - alex756 on June 23, 2006
    I really like what you've done with this story (too bad AFF doens't seem to have any sort of an alert feature for updates) but I really like how this is working. It may be in a rather overly done genre of naruto, BUT ... and here is the important part .. you do it well. I really am looking forward to updates on this.
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  • From ANON - Erika on June 23, 2006
    Baa-chan means "gradma" Baa-baa means "old hag"
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  • From ANON - sarusa on June 23, 2006
    great story!!!! I would love to see more updates soon! The new arc explaining sasuke's side of the story is a real nice change of pace. please keep up the wonderful work! hope to read more soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Starry on June 22, 2006
    Starry can't see why you have so few reviews. I enjoyed this fic very much and look forward to the later chapters.
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  • From ANON - Yaoi_maniac on June 22, 2006
    Hi..! First,I must thank u a lot 4 writing this fic..I have just started reading this..And I think,it's a great fic,really..Keep up your good work!And,please don't drop this fic..I'll be waiting 4 the next fic.Jya mata ashita!
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  • From ANON - Shadow on June 20, 2006
    Its a great story man i cant wait for the next chapter
    plz hurry
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  • From ANON - mscs3 on June 20, 2006
    Hello! Love your story and I'm looking forward to updates! Me
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on June 17, 2006
    ...I think I've read this some were before and what happend to Naruto being pregent? I'm so lost! T-T
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  • From ANON - dancingkitsune on June 17, 2006
    Hm....I wonder what Sasuke will say- yes or no.... probably yes xD;; Now that yer showing us all how Sasuke was when he came back from Orochimaru, it kind of makes Sasuke seem pathetic [man, I feel horrible saying that o o;;] But yeah, I want to see more on it, see how he went back to being Naruto's friend and becoming accepted again....

    I await anxiously for the next chapter!! good luck!!
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  • From ANON - scribbles on June 16, 2006
    This was surprisingly good. i don't normally read over on adult fan fiction, instead reading on fanfiction.com, but this had something that made me want to read it. I think how you used the fox's own motivation in to explain the improbablity of a sexy no jutsu having this outcome and that it didn't just magically turn everythig happy happy.


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  • From ANON - Anon on June 16, 2006
    I just found this story and read it from start to latest chapter in one go. You had me hooked. I really like that its not a simple Naruto and Sasuke fall for one another and one is always dominate to the other. It seems more like a real give-take relationship. I can't wait to see what the child is like and what happens with everyone else finds out.

    As a small criticism, I noticed that certain words were misspelled consistently, like "defiantly" instead of "definantly". If it was supposed to be "defiantly," I apologize, but I would still have to say that would be an odd word choice in certain areas.

    Waiting eagerly for the next chapter,
    A new fan (
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  • From ANON - Miyabi Sumi on June 16, 2006
    This story deffinitely deserves reviews! I started reading this last night, and I just finished it last night- I have to say, this is the only time that I've read an mpreg and didn't hate it immediately. It was done in a very tasteful fashion, and I have to say, I pretty much love this story! So write more, ne?
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  • From ANON - Katie on June 15, 2006
    I love this story. You are a great writer. Please write more, as I'm addicted. ^^
    Also, if you need extra help editing, give me an e-mail (I love editing, prolly b/c of all those damn years of honors/ap english...)
    Thanks so much for being awesome enough to share this story!
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