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By : hawkmun
  • From ANON - Sakura-Laurel on July 11, 2006
    I love you. Seriously. This fic is one of the best Naruto fics I've read so far (not many yet, but I'm working on it). Do you have spell-check/grammar-check on your computer? If not, I think there's one on google.com somewhere. The only thing I can find wrong with this story is the spelling/grammatical errors. Other than that, I find it creative, original, and not too terribly blown out of proportion. You kept the characters as close to their actual character's personality as possible, whilst still justifying the subtle and not-so-subtle differences in your story. I hope to read more, and if you would: please add me to your, undoubtedly, growing list for updates as aff doesn't have them? In case my email doesn't show up, it's sakura underscore laurel 6 6 6 at yahoo dot com. Thanks again for the awesome read!
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  • From ANON - Nolah de Fanel on July 11, 2006
    Really wonderful. I love the characterizations and the way the relationship is working itself out...I worry about Naruto's emotionless-ness and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Natsume Beavoir on July 10, 2006
    I like minna ^^(really love)
    I have more naruxsasu fics in my homepage:
    http://www.fanfiction.net/~natsumebeavoir
    I'm a brazilian girl...sorry for my bad english >.
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  • From ANON - Charis on July 08, 2006
    As you now know, I have sent you a buddy request for msn! ^^ Please say yes! Granted I'll soon be hitting the hundred mark (okay not really) in buddies but you have to add me!!!!!!!! I absolutely am addicted to your story! Don't ask... I'm a complicated (okay just weird...) person... But seriously, just something about your fic... it's just so plausable ( I think that's the word). What I'm trying to say is that it makes sense. It's not just another "we seemingly hate each other but let's do the nasty anyway"! I mean not to many people can pull off the whole m-preg scenario. It's usually a big hurdle to overcome. GAH! But I must go now! Onto being nagged! TTFN!
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  • From ANON - Skyrail on July 08, 2006
    I loved this fic, please do continue it - you're past 200 reviews now, as you hoped for. I don't like the flashbacks in the last 2 chapters, not really sure why. Probably just lack of fluff. I don't really understand the random asterisks in chapter 15, I assume they're to show Naruto's mental instability, but I don't particularly like that as a technique. As I said, I love this fic, I don't mean to be harsh. Most people are very reluctant to give criticism even if it is constructive, so I thought I'd give my 2 cents. Skyrail.
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  • From ANON - chelzi on July 07, 2006
    *sighs* okay, the stupid thing hid my e-mail, so here it is: authress16@yahoo.com
    please send me a notice when you update!! i love this!!~
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  • From ANON - chelzi on July 07, 2006
    ARGH!! why would you end it there!??! i'm so sad... no fa-air!!(whining) i'm leaving sunday! no contact! for THREE WEEKS!! how could you...*sniffles* oh well!^.^ i really love this story, but i have been noticing major mistakes. you keep using 'then' when you mean 'than'. like, you say 'rather then', but it should be 'rather than'. i had an example from the story, but can't find it now... but you've got talent and i really do love this story. i would appreciate emails on updates, you would, pretty please????? thanks!^^~
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  • From ANON - Pinderpul on July 03, 2006
    One of the best fanfiction I have ever read! Please write more!!
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  • From ANON - EbOnY-LyCaN14 on July 02, 2006
    Just finished reading the entire story, and I must say, WOW! This is one of the most well written and interesting fics I have read. Sasuke and Naruto, sweetest yaoi couple ever. What's more, they are expecting a baby, I love Mpregs!! Keep up the great work, please, continue soon, this story is AMAZING!
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  • From ANON - Raven (aka bittenbyyoaibug) on July 01, 2006
    this is good. really really good. though i had to skip ch 14 i think it was due to the torture of the baby,... well i guess nothing else could be expected since i myself am 6 months pregnant. This is very interesting disregarding that little chapter and i can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Sirius on June 29, 2006
    what can I say? I read the first and got addicted, and just spent an hour reading all of them. this stuff is great, and so close to the actual characters, other than the half assed stuff I see more and more these days. your a brilliant writer.
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  • From ANON - Stace on June 28, 2006
    Oh mi gawd! I read the entire series none stop, it was getting so late that i had to finish it now. Wow, just...wow. It's amazing. This is the best story i've ever read. Hurry up and write the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Mimi Hyuuga on June 26, 2006
    Wow...ok, so here I go. I've read a TON os SasuNaru (maybe too much, but it is my OTP, so yeah) and i've even read a couple of Mpregs - which was short lived since the whole idea just isn't for me, which is why I never gave this story a glance past the summary.

    BUT...

    I really regret that now, since after finally getting over my inhibitions, I discovered that this here is one hell of a story!! It's sweet, cute, and is making me fall in love with this pairing all over again. You've made Naruto's pregnancy seem real and genuine, while keeping him in character through it all. I love the pace you're going at, not rushing in to anything but not dragging it along either. Showing what happened between the two after Sasuke's return is much appreciated, since it makes the reasoning behind Sasuke's actions that much clearer. I'm wondering, is that package of clothes from Naruto..? I bet it is, hehe, that's so cute! I'm excited about them living together, since I know that's gonna force them to get closer. I'm glad Naruto has recovered from Itachi's torture (which was heartbreaking!!) but I know that he's gonna come back eventually, I just hope it's far off from happening...like really, really far off. My boys deserve to be happy for at least a little while, ne?

    Well, I look forward to reading the next chapter. Take your time and keep kicking ass ^_^
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  • From ANON - Vixenia on June 26, 2006
    YAY this story is awesome. UPDATE. XD its really good
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  • From ANON - angel on June 25, 2006
    i read all of your chapters and let me tell you something it is so damn good e-mail me when you post the new chapter please
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