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Reviews for As Long as it Feels OK

By : hawkmun
  • From ANON - Muraki Asato on May 16, 2005
    UPDATE SOON PLEASE! I think I know what's going on but I can't be sure until I read more...of course.
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  • From Narutootaku on May 16, 2005
    KEEP WRITING!! I LOVE IT!! I hope you win the M-preg contest!!
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  • From ANON - Jadej.j on May 16, 2005
    oh dear I think I see what going to happen now and what going to happen now to Naruto and Sasuke...:P
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  • From ANON - spikemyangel on May 16, 2005
    i like this story, yay for updates. chapter 7 has a lot of spelling errors though.
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  • From ANON - neko on May 13, 2005
    just dropping by to tell you that i like you r fic. do continue updating.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 12, 2005
    Thanks for the update -- this is getting more and more interesting with each chapter you post!!! (duh... XP Hey, I'm tired, what can I say?) I can't wait to find out what happens between Sasuke and Naruto -- are there going to be some "symptoms" anytime soon? ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - fan on May 12, 2005
    Write more please !! it's so good ^^
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on May 12, 2005
    Hawk this chapter is great. I didn't see any big mistakes if any at all.

    So what's going to happen next?
    Poor Naruto, he fell in love with Sasuke. What about Sasuke's part?

    Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
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  • From ANON - vampchic on May 12, 2005
    hmm... the solo was good. liked the solo.
    so sasuke does want to get close to the blond. but does he want to get close to naruto the way that naruto wants??
    and too bad naruto wasnt paired with sasuke, but then again, naruto probably wouldn't of paid much attention to want he should of been doing.XD
    cant wait to read more. update soon!!
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  • From ANON - dark mousey on May 12, 2005
    interesting going so far. and i do wonder how sasuke will handle the issue of who naruko is whenever it comes up. up date soon. ^_^

    this part in this chapter here, "Temari with Rock Lee to combine their range and taijutsu. Which leaves Sasuke with Temari.”, one of the temari's is suppose to be tenten, right? probably sasuke paired up with tenten?
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  • From Narutootaku on May 11, 2005
    NOOOOOOO!!!! MUST READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on May 11, 2005
    Interesting transition chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    Just one point: one typo, Akatsuke --> Akatsuki.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on May 09, 2005
    Sasuke is more Mangaish,not the near mute most of fandom has him..I like that he likes girls who take what they want.Yeah.
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  • From ANON - Kireiko on May 09, 2005
    Wow. That's one pretty interesting read you have there, Hawk-san. I'm not really interested in yaoi or MxM pairing's (*gasp* I know... for shame!! heh. ) but every now and again, I do search the the yaoi, and shonen-ai and male pairings-based stories to see if there are any good reads, and I must say, yours' is one of the more well written ones out there. So keep up the good work, can't wait to see more from you!! I do have to admit though, a little shonen-ai or yaoi, when tastefully done, as you seem more than capable of doing, never hurt anyone....

    That Naruko is one hot smutty babe though ne? *grin* ( Poor Sasuke, never stood a chance did he? ^____~ )
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 09, 2005
    ^^ Thanks for updating!!!
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