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Reviews for Best Laid Plans

By : Askerian
  • From mabidiso on November 08, 2011
    Holy hell that was so perfectly funny! Perfect in every way. Spectacular angsting and hysteria and drunk scene on the bridge - perfect! Hot, hilarious sex at Naruto's place - perfect! Kiba telling Naruto that Sasuke is waaaaaay out of his league and getting his ass kicked by Sasuke - perfect! The pregnancy scare - beyond perfect!
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  • From Bloodlilly on November 12, 2009
    Fantastic Fic, I laughed so hard. Please write more like this one.
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  • From ANON - Kitty on January 13, 2009
    I really wish you would do a sequel to this story it just so good....
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on August 04, 2008
    Oh, funny! I don't usually read yuri but this was too funny! I think you have a cute idea.
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  • From atemuxyuugi on July 03, 2008
    Damn but I LOVE this story. Especially the yuri part. *drools* I just feel a little bit sad that you never shared Sasuke's revenge with us. I would have SO loved to see their roles reversed with Naruto in the girl role and Sasuke being on top. Any chance you might consider to write that little scene one day? Looking through you other stories I of course noticed that you seem to perfer NaruSasu over SasuNaru, huh? I have to admit I like both, because I both see them as stubborn and proud and they would both have issues to submit to bottom. *grins*
    Ah, anyway I just felt the urge to write you this review and tell you how much I appreciate the idea you had here. I am looking very much forward to future writings and artwork (I watch you on deviantart as well and I love your drawings XD).
    Best wishes

    Usagi-Atemu-Tom /`^_^´
    who you might, eventually remember as pharaohxyuugi from deviantart. XD
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  • From Imagy on February 16, 2008
    babe, I seriously think that you should keep going with this story
    or make a sequel
    It's just too damn good to be left an unattached one-shot
    seriously
    u_u
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  • From ANON - the one on September 20, 2007
    funniest....
    story.......
    ever........
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  • From ANON - yaoifansakura on August 10, 2007
    XDXDXD LOL!
    I liked how Sasuke explained his last idea! and the whole girl-thing is well-written (and interestingly confusing because they were still males but it looked like yuri)so..yay!!nice ^_____________^
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  • From ANON - mary on July 04, 2007
    Oh god please add another chappie!!!! my face hurts from laughing!!!
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  • From ANON - frank on June 26, 2007
    funny
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  • From ANON - snowecat on June 22, 2007
    Too bad this is a one-shot, I'd love to see where this would lead. What if they both wound up having children, how would they explain it?
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  • From Bishonen on February 19, 2007
    Wow that was...Good...Very I dont know what eles to say excpet two things that I didn't like

    1.Tsunade is hot and there should more lots of stories about her

    2. I've seen Shino's eyes and he is way better looking than Sasuke ever could be even as a girl
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2006
    BEST.

    FIC.

    EVER.

    In the whole entire world. I think I just died laughing. You pwn drunk Sasuke. You pwn dirty use of sexu no jutsu. You pwn everything. Ever. *gives you everything*. Just. Yes. Brilliant. *dead*
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  • From ANON - anonymus on August 17, 2006
    u should continue this its really good
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  • From ANON - Sarah on August 05, 2006
    Holy fuck, that was hot.
    ...Oh my god. I almost (*cough*do*cough*) want a sequel... >.> Sasque fucking sexy-no-jutso Naruto.. maybe a bit more female Sasuke on female Naruto..? It's just so incredibly tempting.
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