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By : bean1498
  • From ANON - hina-chan on May 30, 2005
    i like your story. I hope you update soon!!! i wonder what happened sasuke very much...

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  • From ANON - ione_girl on May 25, 2005
    FINISH IT!!!!!! I WANT TO READ MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - Dev on May 22, 2005
    Fantastic story! You have a compelling plot that has a lot of potential. You have also done a wonderful job of keeping both Sasuke and Hinata in character, but also appropriately changing them since they are older. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - lee on May 22, 2005
    so good
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  • From ANON - lola on May 16, 2005
    so good plz update!
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  • From ANON - xpotionnerd on May 13, 2005
    Ohm. This is a really good fanfic. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - wawa on May 10, 2005
    i love it ! plz! update !
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  • From ANON - Dragon Ryder on May 08, 2005
    Loved it. Just loved it. Hinata's on of my favorite characters I love it when people make such a great story about her great job.
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  • From ANON - sgtcrackers on May 07, 2005
    YAY!!! I love this pairing the most. Update, update, update soon plz. Poor Hinata, pregnant with twins, but no husband to be there. Geez, your mean. Anyhow, Who kidnapped Sasuke?
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  • From ANON - TobySeer on May 06, 2005
    You weren't wrong when you said we would hate this chapter! But you weren't right either. I like it, but to imagine Sasuke gone-- uhhhhhhhh.... THAT SUX!!!

    It's like that person you were riding with on the motorcycle just turned away into a different lane... and now you're lost in LA traffic.
    Bring back my pink lemonade! Bring it back!!!

    Write this new chapter as soon as possible. I will be waiting...
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  • From Atropa on May 06, 2005
    Ohhh, it's getting better and better...
    Romance with a plot - can you ask for more?
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  • From ANON - empyreal on May 05, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this fic. Poor Sasuke, finally has what they've been hoping for and he doesn't even know. Ideally he won't be gone too long, although it would be even more dramatic to have him return to find two infants when he'd only left a wife. And I like how you have Hinata both strong but also soft. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - allyluv17 on May 04, 2005
    omigod!!! you are awesom!!! i love the chapters. especially this one part --> “Does he make out a strategy every time you make love?” she asked snickering. She pulled her legs up and placed her fingertips together like Shikamaru did when he was thinking. “Let me think a minute,” she said in a fake male voice. “Hmm, yes, I think I’ll touch her here, suck on that, and pinch this. If my calculations are correct she should orgasm in five minutes.” i was laughing so hard! it made my day!!! please update more soon.
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  • From Atropa on May 04, 2005
    Just what I needed before I head for the bed....
    I really love this story, sweet and gentle... and now a plot in it all too.... a bad guy/girl....
    You have something here... something that I desperate want to see more of so keep up that writing spirit of yours!!
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  • From ANON - TobySeer on May 03, 2005
    WOw! Never thought that one!!!
    Totally worth it!

    Please continue it's that strangely good. Like drinking pink lemonade while riding a Harley in black leather...
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