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By : bean1498
  • From ANON - akasha on June 28, 2006
    by the gods i hope that you update soon!! this story has been a "page turner" for me, and i can't wait to see what the next chapter will bring after such a long seperation! i usually don't go for heavy ooc, but your version of sasuke is a nice change from the norm. you're quickly becoming one of my favorite fic authors! you inspire me to finish my own uncompleted story... please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - db on June 28, 2006
    Keep up te good work! I look forward to each new chapter.
    I like how you write.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 28, 2006
    nice story, thanks for sharing it. i like the gradual development of the relationship
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  • From on June 28, 2006
    OMFG THEY CUT OFF MY REVIEW? DIE!
    continuation of my review: anyways, if u didnt get it the first time, i REALLY like this, so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue (im assuming sasuke's coming home's not the end cuz it doesnt seem like it) and who gives about betas if thats whats slowing you down, those last few chappies seem fine to me XP SO PLEASE UPDATE!
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  • From on June 28, 2006
    OMFG YAY HES HOME!!!!!!!! but dude what happened to ichiro / jiro freako twins? and wtf was with naruto being semi-attracted to hinata! omg that better be resolved somehow... like either it being nothing or naruto finding his special someone or SOMETHING cuz it'd totally ruin everythign if he had a thing for hinata >
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  • From ANON - rayn on June 14, 2006
    Hello
    This is a very good story and i hope you continue with it.
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on May 22, 2006
    I still love this. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Mariam on January 29, 2006
    ‘I hope you had a nice day with Naruto. –Hinata’. He smiled when he saw the little happy face she’d drawn on the note

    That cracked me up.
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  • From ANON - priestess123 on January 28, 2006
    Oh I love this story so much! I hope you get a chance to update soon! It's so wonderfully different!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2006
    yey for chapter 6! keep um coming
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  • From ANON - sasuhinafan on January 14, 2006
    I'm surprised you don't have any reviews, this story is the awesomeness!!
    Hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - Hokai Amplifier on December 30, 2005
    Omg this is just beautiful. I'd really appreciate it if you could update. ^^
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  • From ANON - ashley on December 22, 2005
    this a great story please update soon with many chapter. can wait for the next chapter. i love hinata and sasuke stories keep writing them .
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  • From ANON - jlynnd86 on December 22, 2005
    Great Great Great Awesome Awesome Awesome Story

    I love the whole alternate pairings thing... especially Sasuke and Hinata. It's freakin' beautiful to me. I've been waiting for... well, forever for you to update. It's my fav. Sasu/Hin fanfiction so far. I love how you brought them together. I mean, yeah, Sasuke seems a little "nicer" than he normally is, but he can't be a hard-ass for his entire life. I'm sure he gained it with years of kindness and love from his dear friends :P Sappy huh? Anyway, keep up the excellent work. PLEASE don't have his twins grown up and hate each other. It would be great if he made it back soon though. I kinda want to see his reaction to the whole Hinata missing him so much and him having twins thing. Plus... the longer it takes for him to get back... the smaller his chances of "gettin' his freak on with his wife" gets... unless you plan on having him do some "alternate" positions with Ms. Hinata :) It's completely up to you. You're rockin' this story so far. Keep up the great work... and good luck with chapter 7.

    *** Please don't wait another couple of months to put out another chapter... pretty please!***
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  • From ANON - xgirlrogue on December 21, 2005
    hey it looks like you got there and settled in
    do you still want me to beta for you? just asking
    anyway so glad you're writing again - I've needed some quality smut
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