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Reviews for My new Family

By : SasukeB
  • From ANON - KiraDouji on April 20, 2005
    あのう。。。その話をまだ読んでいませんけど沢山その話のレビューもう読んでいますから私はあなたのことについてちょっとまごまごしました。たとえば、日本人だったら、“Ｎｉｈｏｎｇｅ”を使わなかった。　“Ｎｉｈｏｎｇｅ”は日本語の言葉じゃないから。たぶん、“日本語”を使いたいですか？でもその言葉のいみは日本の言語です。それから、あなたは日本人じゃないと思います。

    ―　きらちゃん
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  • From ANON - The Empress on April 19, 2005
    O_o...I...just...don't really know what to say about what Sasuke did to Naruto. *shakes head and then sighs* I almost cried......poor Naruto. Luckily, Shikamaru is going to help Sasuke out, or is he.....hmmmm. *evil smirk* Anyways, I liked it even though I'm now disturbed by Sasuke's behavior. Nice chappie. ^_^
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  • From Tremalkinger on April 19, 2005
    Demo, nihonjin ga yoku eigode jozuna tsudzumas ne.

    Soushite, 'nihonge' te nan desu ka.

    It's spelled 'nihongo' ^_~
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  • From ANON - dorkie on April 19, 2005
    hrm outta character a little, but im just really curious what would happen if sasuke even had the notion that naruto was leaving him. The broom thing was not expected at all, but i loved it when sasuke gets back to sappyland. Makes me think sasuke's the abusive bf type. Heh but grammar is a lil off but curious to read the next chapter........SO HOPE THE NEXT CHAPTER COMES OUT SOON!!!!!!n goodluck!! and good job!!
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  • From ANON - Puma on April 19, 2005
    This story is just awesome. Sugoi! blah blah and I love Shikamaru and a bastard Sasuke and I can undeerrstand it enough to tell what's going on. GOOD JOB!!!!! //
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  • From ANON - Sukara on April 18, 2005
    *Rubs Narutos ass-cheecks* I feel sorry for you Naru-chan xD
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  • From ANON - The Empress on April 15, 2005
    This is a very interesting story. Sasuke is really disturbing me, but that's ok. =) I can't wait till the next chapter. ^_^ Could you email me when you put up a new chappie? Please. ^_^
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  • From SasukeB on April 10, 2005
    lol we Japanese people do not use the word "Japanese" , we used Nihonge, so forgive him if I spell it wrong!!!! Japanese is an American word.
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  • From ANON - Kitty-kun on April 10, 2005
    If by 'Janpesse' you mean 'Japanese' then your full of crap. If you were Japanese, then you'd at least be able to spell it correctly...And the characters are WAY OOC...I can't believe you can even say they aren't. You really can't write, I'm sorry, but this sucks a lot. The only reason that you get nice reviews, is because people just want to read lemons, which also sucks by the way. Jeez, do us all a favor and delete this piece of crap.
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  • From SasukeB on April 09, 2005
    ok Kativa-chan I am Janpesse and I have seen all of the Naruto show from 1 to 129 and can't wait from 130. I do not feel that my Characters are out of Character and I have an A in my English class.
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  • From ANON - Kativa-chan on April 09, 2005
    To start off, this isn't a flame. This is constructive criticism.

    First of all, everyone is Out of character(OOC) there's no doubt about that. There are many spelling and grammer errors. Is English your first language? Because it doesn't seem to be. Also, have you seen the entire series so far, or have you just read the American translated manga? Another thing, the spacing is makes it very difficult to read. Also, are you at a young age? Because the so-called 'lemon' scenes weren't written very well. It's one to be writting your first lemon, but that was just plain bad.
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  • From ANON - Sasukeb on April 08, 2005
    Hey koyote, it's me Sasukeb. I wrote My new Family, anyway I know that you did not "bother reading the whole story, Because the Characters are one dimensional and utterly unbelievable, paragraphs chunky, there's a distinct lack of flow and the plot is juvenile and clichéd" but I wrote Chapter 5 with what you said in mind . So I hope that you read it and let me know if that chapter does anything for you? I hope it help you to see why my Naruto and Sasuke act the way that they do, will Chapter 4 will tell you why Sasuke acts the way he does so read both 4 and 5 and please tell me if it is to your liking and do post your reply on my story's Reviews pages or whatever it is called. ok bye from now Sasukeb.
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  • From ANON - - on April 08, 2005
    Waiii you're so right. I really thought that chapter was the saddest and the cutest... awww cute Naruto-kun :) Wow, so Sasuke wrote that poem for Naruto eh, that's really s-weet. So I guess, even b*stards have their nice moments ^^ Go NaruSasu! weeeeeee!
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  • From ANON - Sukara on April 08, 2005
    Awwws!!! *Starts snifflinf* thats sad ;-;, but very good work ^_^ Keep it up, ne? ^_^

    Ja Ne
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  • From ANON - Rosemary on April 06, 2005
    Nice chap 4, I love a possessive Sasuke, but will there be some ShikaNaru, too? That pairing is kawaii!!
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