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Reviews for Prize: The Heart of Konoha

By : kawaiikitsunethief
  • From ANON - jazzy on April 14, 2005
    Your story's not as grim as you made it out to be, its rather kind of soft in some ways. Whitch is not the least bit disapointing your doing a great job and I personally can't wait to read more. Though I was hoping that Naruto would have put up more of a fight and Sasuke could be a little more of a bastard, he's turning out softer than where the relationship warrants for right now, or the picture you were painting him to be in the first chapter or so.

    I mean you want him to be a BASTARD until there comes a redeeming point a breaking point like Naruto get's through to him that he doesn't need to be evil to be strong or something. Or being around Naruto seeing him remaining strong cracks him, forces him to reevaluate his behavior or having him finally break Naruto, forces him to deal with the hell he went through and how the hell is he going to fix Naruto and himself, returning them back to something resembling normal right??

    Love the creativity you have here and Welcome to the Darkside. MWhaha haha!



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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on April 12, 2005
    Yay!!! You updated!!! .....actually, you probably updated a while ago, but I've been busy lately, soooooo........... ^^ Thanks anyway, and keep up the good work!!! I can't wai to find out what happens next!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on April 12, 2005
    wow! your fic is so awesome! please update super fast! Your the best! Ever!
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on April 12, 2005
    (Ch. 6)
    Amusing. But too quick paced. Slow down a bit; the secne when Sasuke masturbates Naruto could have a whole lot more humiliating and sexual.

    Still, cool chapter.

    Until the next,
    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - lo on April 12, 2005
    I was at first wary when reading this story, but you are really creating something wonderful. THis is fantastic. I like how you are developing the story and the characters, and I fell that you are quite capable of moding and shifting the characters to this story. I am very impressed, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Letta on April 12, 2005
    I'm curious about this diplomatic meeting, wondering who all is going to gawk at Naruto. Sasuke has kind of a twisted soft side, but it works so well for him.
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  • From ANON - Bix on April 12, 2005
    wow. just WOW! I've been waiting for a fic like this one!!!!
    I LOVE it!!! you gotta continue...it's great! and you describe naruto so god damn pretty...
    ^^
    ~Love
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  • From ANON - Sukara on April 12, 2005
    Woot!! xD
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  • From ANON - Kativa-chan on April 12, 2005
    YAY! ^.^ Now, chapter 7 is the one I didn't read yet! I can't wait.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on April 12, 2005
    I like this Sasuke .
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  • From ANON - : on April 10, 2005
    Damn...this is HOT. I always ignore rape (or close to rape) fics, but this is different. I think it's the mood - dark, lustful, yet with a touch of hopefulness for a happy ending.

    I especially loved the way you described Sasuke - calm, stoic, and sexily dominating. I also like how there's hints of sincere love, but they're not overly fluffy or sappy like most authors tend to do.

    And since I absolutely adore Naruto, could you...not make him cry so much? ^^;;; I know he's extremely sensitive (well, more than the average boy), but c'mon! He's a really strong character and he wouldn't show his weakness in front of Sasuke of all people.

    Other than that, I LOVE this fic. The interactions between Sasuke and Naruto make my inner fangirl drool and giggle =)
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on April 07, 2005
    Wow.
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  • From ANON - Maz on April 07, 2005
    *waves her flag of yaoi and all things slashy*

    Yay!
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  • From ANON - T.K-kun on April 07, 2005
    who would turn back from the italics!? haha ^^ anyways. this is still such a good story. continue on with it! update soon, please XD
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  • From ANON - lo on April 06, 2005
    I must say that I was a little wary at first, but you are pulling this of beautifully. This is well written.
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