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By : arora1
  • From ANON - mike~ on February 09, 2006
    wow. i dont really know what to say after reading your fic.

    but most of all, i'd like to congradulate you on a fic well written. really well written. i was teary-eyed all throughout the fic; the scenes were horrific, graphic, and very detailed. sometimes, i was so absorbed into the plot and scared sh!tless of what was happening that i mearly scanned the text and glazed over some of the more gruesome scenes. but im still glad that it was so detailed, it put much more depth into the plot. i have no personal experience with any of this, both on drugs or rape, (and for that i feel quite lucky), but after reading your fic, i often feel that i've been given a glimpse of the mindsets of all those who've fallen under the influence or have had their lives brutally shattered. very enlightening, ansty and again, amazingly written.

    the only bit of hope, from koshi (sp?), was the only thing that kept my spirits up when reading. i really do hope they get a realitively 'happily ever after' ending, considering what both sasuke and naruto had gone through. the thing w/ oro/naru was definately unexpected - but it also definately made the plot so much more significant. oro's such a bastard... lol.

    also, i was hoping that later in the future, i'd get to see more sasu/naru scenes, when they're both sober and mentally stable that is. i guess i'll stop my blabble now, update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kiara on February 07, 2006
    Yeyyyyyyy! Sasuke is back to being the responsible (for lack of a better word) person from being a junkie! I felt so bad for Naruto. Anyway, good work and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lanier on February 07, 2006
    Wow that was a close one. I thought for a moment there that Naruto was gonna die and that the story would end. I am glad that Sasuke was able to bring back some small glimmer of hope in Naruto. I am afraid that hope wont last long. I cant wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on February 06, 2006
    You shorten the whole Kimon incident...GOOD! The old verision bored me!

    Can't wait for the escape and then into the part with Gai's team and company!!

    Please don't change anything from the whole 'Gai's team and company' part too much! Add extra details but don't change the main parts! They're SO good as it is!!

    PS I still think Shino is jealous of Naruto and Sasuke's relationship...
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  • From ANON - FallingStAr on February 03, 2006
    why wont you update! First you write a story and never finish it then you rewrite it and NEVER UPDATE! WAHHHH! update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanna know what happens because I can't rememeber!
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  • From ANON - #1HackerGurl on January 30, 2006
    Hey man why aren't you updating.
    Are you dying or just dieing?
    Are you snoozing?
    Or just boozing?
    But whatever I'm just reviewing!
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  • From ANON - Lanier on December 26, 2005
    Wow they are in a real jam now. Great work.. cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lanier on December 10, 2005
    Wow that was an awesome chapter. I am glad that naruto got out but I fear that his freedom will be very short lived. I cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - yaoilover12 on December 07, 2005
    *Sigh* I almost wish you hadn't gone back to re-edit the stories, since that means I'll have to wait awhile to get to the point where the fic originally left off at. Ugh, stupid cliffhangers. Anyway, great fic. Loved the sex scene and the plot. The characters were also pretty in-character. Good job.
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  • From ANON - LadyApollonia on November 29, 2005
    This fic is amazing. You do the torture scenes so well and actually show that there is a level of pain where a person is, for a moment, willing to do anything to make that pain stop. I'm going to definitely keep up with this fic. Your style is fantastic and the way you describe things is captivating. The only problem I have with your fic, and I have to admit it is very important, is that you need a beta reader. Normally when a fic has so many spelling mistakes, I can't read it because I get distracted wanting to correct it so badly. I should be majoring in English honestly. But your fic wouldn't let me abandon it. I'm completely caught in it.
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  • From ANON - Nova Alexandria on November 28, 2005
    This chapter was a very good remake and much beter then the last one. I am devided on the Rut 2 part. I liked the first one and the new one was also good, if a little longer. I could go either way with it. Anyhow, I eegerly await the next chapter. One thing I could see happening to add to the strain of Sasuke and Naruto's relation ship later on would be for Kyuubi to go after Neji when they meet up. You had strain between the three already (I have read the orginal before you started to repost and enjoyed it very much) but that would really test their relationship. I could see Kyuubi being into the Hyuuga since Neji is powerful and feminine enough looking. Sasuke could come in and get Kyuubi off of Neji, or just end up trapped to. This would cause Naruto to slid backwards, but if Neji and the others forgive him it could give him a great push forward and he could vow to have beter control over Kyuubi, making it harder for Kyuubi to break out. Your call of course and I am certaintly not telling you how to write your story, like I said I enjoyed it before and and greatly enjoying the repost, but as an author on FF myself I know how helpful suggestions can be.
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  • From ANON - Lanier on November 28, 2005
    Poor Naruto being forced to give in. Being reminded almost to the breaking point of what was thought about him. Poor Sasuke being abused and so confused on who he was and what he wanted. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on November 27, 2005
    I like the old lemon scene better...but keep the end with the finger-f*cking. I actually like that scene. Just give us old version and when you get up to Sasuke crying about not protecting his orifices, end it with that finger-f*cking scene.
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  • From ANON - ally2002 on November 27, 2005
    much better!!! i love it this chapter-as creepy as that sounds. i was reading this fic up until you started to edit the whole thing-so sasuke had already OD in the presence on gaisensei and neji. about how long do you think it will take to get back to that point or are you rewriting the whole thing?
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  • From ANON - Zim on November 25, 2005
    hey there, this is there first time ive reviewed your fic broken but ive been reading from almost the very begining (and thats before the re-write) and ive loved it since the first chapter all those months ago and have been sulking and eagerly awaiting each new chapter. but id just like to say that all of your re writes have been fucking fantastic and this latest chapter the kubi/sasu, i dont no how you did it but some how you improved on a master.

    PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!
    WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!
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