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By : arora1
  • From ANON - DevilLived on June 15, 2006
    :D I have to agree with Kiba, Sasuke does seem nicer after he gets laid :D:D/

    Awesome chapter, once again! I'd say more but I have to run so update soon!
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on June 15, 2006
    YES! YES! YES!

    You're finally finished re-editing! Everything's new after this! YIPPIE!

    PS I want Benisato/Koshi to come back...it'll make things a lot more interesting later...

    PSS I still think Shino is jealous...:D
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on June 07, 2006
    i thoght naruto was going to give up a couple of times. those totures were awful, well cant wait till you update again. hope you keep upt the good work

    ja ne till next time
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 07, 2006
    Hey.I loved the last chappieso much I thought I'd tell you again.Where are you?
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on June 05, 2006
    I liked that last part, it was really good. Hell, the whole chapter was awesome!

    I had missed some chapters so I had to go back and read them. I like how you write your story.

    Liked how you described Sasuke and Naruto's kiss in this chapter, it was sweet. Well, until Naruto freaked out, but it was cute when Sasuke started stuttering.

    Can't wait until you update again, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - demiean on March 10, 2006
    the doc karata part was funny
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 13, 2006
    So sad i cried when Sasuke goes to see naruto in the training room
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  • From ANON - JadeTiger on February 13, 2006
    WILL you hurry up and get all these edditing chapter out of the way so i can read something New!!
    PLEASE hurry!
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  • From ANON - Lanier on February 12, 2006
    Wow, that was incredible. I cant believe it, Orochimaru is dead? Where will Naruto and Sasuke go? I cant believe that they wont go back to Konoha. What of their friends? and What about Iruka sensei? Cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - mike~ on February 12, 2006
    thx for the chapter!

    im so glad things are finally looking up for the guys! and oro's dead! woohoo!

    and naruto to the rescue of sasuke's molestation by oro was a great scene. the irony of oro dying by his own sword was good too.

    update soon!
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  • From nocturne on February 12, 2006
    omg. oo; finally! they got out! yay! ^---^ so. update? XD
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  • From ANON - dawn on February 12, 2006
    .............oh my god... catchs breath i love it by the gods hurry soon well as soon as u can when the server things come back on lol me can't think
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  • From ANON - Kiara on February 11, 2006
    Wowwwww!!!!!!!!! That was outstanding! The final fight was amazing, original and had a natural flow to it, even the techniques you created suited the characters accordingly. I totally loved it. Of all the fictions that I have read, this one has the most awesome description, natural flow and twist of plot! I can hardly wait to read the next chapters and wonderful writing! Bye!
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  • From ANON - death of angels on February 11, 2006
    omg thats really good.. the story is really good in my opinion... but hurry and write MORE... lol.. pls.. i wnat to know where they are going.. KAY CYA n tc..
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  • From ANON - DRagon Slayer on February 10, 2006
    FIX THE DAMN STORY IT'S ANNOYING TO HAVE TO SCROLL BACK AND FORTH JUST TO READ TEH DAMN THING!
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