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By : arora1

From ANON - wendyghost on July 03, 2006
thank you for the gift, i been looking forward to an updat for a long time! it such a great story, you are so good with emotions and i love the kyubii like this!
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From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on July 03, 2006
That was a great chapter. I can't even remember when I started crying, but I know that it stopped around the time that Sasuke and Sakura left the room. It's good to know that Kyuubi trusts Irukia, but I kinda felt bad for him when he was jealous of Naruto. All those thoughts about the blonde has everyone by his side, but no one would ever love him. Well yeah, he's a demon. But it was still so devastating to read. Poor guy. I hope he doesn't go crazy when he see's Sasuke.

Good luck with your next chapter ^^

Ria
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From ANON - kirafics on July 02, 2006
this my most favoretist fanfic eveerrrr the chapters are all nice and long (you know like in takeing more than five minutes to read) and its also so very well writen unlike some of the other stuff out there, the plot is like just...... awsome theres no other word for it. ya'no anuf with the shitty compliments just keep upthe good work, keep writing (I will aaaalllllwaaays be a fan), and KEEP UP DATEING. OR I WILL BE FORCED TO TAKE DRASTIC MEASURES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok now i'm good. Please continue doing........... whatevert is that you happen to be doingi'm done now........going to stpo talking any minute now........any minute......
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From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on June 30, 2006
I leave you rediculously long reviews all the time, so this one will be short. Just for the sake of your sanity. I have to agree with what Kyuubigirl said. I'm so paranoid right now that it isn't even funny. I think throughout that whole chapter I've been dreading with tears thinking that someone was going to die. Especially with stupid Kyuubi trying to be Naruto. *shakes head* It was so smart of you to have had Tsunade make ANBU watch over him. She is a sennin and everything, but I thought that you would have had her as the type of person who would have been so glad that Naruto was alright that she wouldn't have caught that abrupt hesitation that he had with her in that first encounterance. So glad that Iruka is finally mentioned. And what's this? Him and Kakashi? You know, I have to be truthful and say that I have NEVER really read a KakaIru story. Do you have any that you recommend?

I'm not worried about Sasuke's operation only b/c I know that he has really responsible ppl in charge of it. Like Shizune.

Good luck with your next chapter ^.~

Ria =^-^=
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From ANON - Emma on June 30, 2006
*wipes away tears* wow....each and every chapter of this fic brings out so many emotions.... I can't find the words to say how much I love Broken, so I'll just second what kyuubigrl said.
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From ladygizarme on June 30, 2006
fuck, this is such an amazing story, i couldn't stop reading it for the past 2 days! all the details and ordeals and violence and pain and emotion you've put into it all just has been one crazy, sick, amazing, breathless, breathtaking, (and at times even sweet) ride!! the way everything has come together so far is like... not at all what i expected, but oh so much better... and now i've come to chapter 25 and i don't want to stop!! i want there to be more now! much much more!! i have to know what happens next and i feel like waiting is going to be unbearable.. i'll try to deal though :p but i really do hope there's more soon!!!!

~ lg
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From ANON - Neko-Chan on June 29, 2006
*tears!* IRUKA'S STiLL ALiVE!! yes!! i was heartbroken over his death ^^;; i really hoped he hadn't died
Kyuubi and emotions, interesting concept ^_^
Great chapter! hope for more soon!
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From ANON - kyuubigrl on June 29, 2006
Woo yeah another chapter. You're so damn reliable, and of course it's the first one I'm gonna read today! Ok, so OMG, speaking of unpredictable, I was like alright, author's going a little soft, letting Kyuubi know what love is all about, and then Iruka comes along and wow, total traumatized Naruto meltdown that broke my heart because once again Naruto (well Kyuubi) has to relive those horrible memories, which now makes me wonder what if Naruto's trapped in this one particular memory as he's stuck inside being all comatose. GAH! And then there's hope, because at least poor Naruto might be able to feel/tell that he didn't murder Iruka, and so Naruto can be all better now, right? WRONG. Then he's going to go kill Sasuke? Nooo! I think I went through eight hundred emotions within that one chapter and now I have to go sort of cry and be confused somewhere. But now at least Iruka can watch over him and maybe Naruto will come back, but it doesn't help the situation with everyone thinking the kyuubi is still a threat! Please don't let Sasuke die in surgery! Now I'm paranoid, or what if Sasuke's all like, oh Naruto would never want to live like this so I have to kill him. BAH. No! Let them adopt some injured bunnies and create a better tasting, long-keeping instant ramen cup or something, and the Uchiha clan magically repopulates even though they live together! Oh, I mean I'll read another fic if I want a super happy ending... woo, next chapter! YOU ROCK!
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From ANON - DevilLived on June 29, 2006
I'm so glad you updated!! Awesome chapter, I really enjoyed it.

I like how you wrote the Kyuubi and about how he tried to sort out his emotions. His reaction when he figured out that he loved Sasuke was very realisic.

Can't wait until the next chapter so update soon, alright?
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From ANON - dakara on June 27, 2006
I love this story, you made my sadistic and perverted mind happy, wee, please add a new chapter soon
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From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on June 25, 2006
If my message cuts off again, then I'm giving up T^T

Sorry for the story of a comment I�m making here. I have this thing where once I start a review, it takes forever to get my fingers to shut up. eheh. . ..gomen.

I hate the way the damn villagers still think. It pisses me off beyond words. And here I thought that they�d be so happy to have their blonde back. Damn assholes. Makes me want to chidori their asses. I was very unprepared for what Sasuke willed himself to do just for Kyuubi to listen. It wasn�t really surprising, but still. Definitely wasn�t expecting him to do something like that when he was so seriously injured. But what happened after was no shocker. I knew something bad was going to happen to Sasuke from the way that horny demon slammed into him. And you�ve even given Kyuubi some emotions to save him. I love you.

If you couldn�t tell, I cannot WAIT for whatever happens next. Your writing has me on the edge of my seat�..and my sanity. Of course, you already /knew/ that.

More hugs to both you and Kyuubigirl (because you understand how I feel). Sorry if this is too long. I really am quite a chatterbox. And Naruto is my anime twin. I swear.

Redwitch05
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From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on June 25, 2006
[my message got cut]

Unless you do both >.
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From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on June 25, 2006
Thank you Kyuubigirl. And yes, I am a /she/ ^^ Much huggles back to you ^.~ I am and was indeed having a meltdown. I don�t think I�ve EVER had a meltdown from a fan fiction. And I agree with you; I would HATE for anyone to intrude on my ideas and tell me how my fanfic characters should be��or how the story should GO for that matter.

My Naru-chan. I would just die if something happened to him. Even though I AM a complete puddle of gooey mush right now, I know that no matter HOW you end this story, that it will be for the best. And as much as I�ve TRIED to control myself of my emotions, I couldn�t help but cry silently while reading that 24th chapter. It was like �.you�re so unpredictable that if I tried to relax /just/ a little bit, then you�d resurrect someone, or bring back the remainders of the Akatsuki, so they�d kidnap Naruto. Oh god. If you could only be in my head when I�m reading.

I was so happy/excited when I read about how fast Naruto�s memories of Sasuke were merging. You ignited a spark of hope within me =^-^= But I wanted to MURDER Kyuu when he suddenly pretended to be Naruto. I can�t tell whether if something good will come out of it or if it�ll worsen the situation. Sasuke�s been with Naruto for a helluva long time, but he�s so desperate to see the Naruto that HE knows that I�m not sure if he�ll be able to see through that damn Kitsune. But then again, do you even PLAN on trying to make that damn mongrel make an attempting at fooling our Uchiha? probably, I guess. I simply don�t know what to expect. I have absolutely no idea how you are planning on progressing with the way things are. I mean, sure�..that shouldn�t be a surprise. You are an AMAZING writer. I can�t wait for the next chapter. And thank you so much for the speedy updates. If I wasn�t so busy with School, work, and babysitting constantly, then I�d be able to update my own story. And kudos to your beta on this story. They are doing an excellent job.

I�m agreeing with Jess here when I say that this is also my best Naruto story. Hell, it�s the best fanfic in general. There are different genres in writing , but it is by far the BEST Angsty material ever written. Brutal and very bloody and beyond mature content (I would say more along the lines that this story is made for people who want to cry for the rest of their lives.) okay, maybe not THAT extreme, but you get what I mean. Didn�t you say that you originally started this story to vent off some anger or metal stress? If that�s so, then I guess you can say we have a lot in common. I write down my anger rather than portray them through physical violence. Unless you do both >.
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From ANON - DevilLived on June 25, 2006
Well, I was silently cheering when the Kyuubi listened to the 'tightness in his chest' and saved Sasuke but then I was nearly throwing things at the computer when he decided to pretend to be Naruto. That tricky bastard, nothing can be easy with him, can it?

I wonder if Sasuke will be able to tell the difference?

Anyways, wonderful chapter, keep it up!
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From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on June 25, 2006
Kyuubi you bastard! You better bring back Naruto later!!

UPDATE SOON!
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