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By : arora1
  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on July 13, 2006
    i just realized something after i submited my review before this one. that kyuubi said that naruto would fix himself, but it would take longer that is probably the reason why it took 3 months to wake up.


    ja ne i'll be going for real this time
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on July 13, 2006
    yay thanx for updating i loved it. are you really going to give kyuubi a new body or is he going to still be apart of naruto now that he's awake. i wonder what went on during those 3 long months. can't wait till you update again. this story is slowly comin' to a close and i have to say that i'm ganna miss it. keep up the good work. naruto seems like his energetic happy go lucky self in this chappie, beside his flinching.

    ja ne till next time and i cant wait ^ . ^
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on July 13, 2006
    POOR KYUUBI~! Dammit Sasuke why didn't you say yes?! It's only gonna be for nine months!

    UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on July 13, 2006
    yes!!! Naruto woke up!!!! and Sasuke didnt have to make that deal....did he???
    hmmm.....then how did Naruto awaken....
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on July 13, 2006
    damn another great chapter! i'm still feeling really sorry for kyuubi! which is a lil crazy since, even though he feels love now, he also still loves mayhem and destruction, etc and him having his own body prob wouldn't be good... (and yeah naruto would definitely not be cool w/that) and he wants sasuke to love HIM but sasuke loves (must love!) naruto ..but damn i still feel bad for him.. and that scene with sasuke and kyuubi and iruka was really touching, especially kyuubi holding sasuke after he couldn't kill him and whining for tsunade to heal iruka! but yay naruto's really awake now.. but since kyuubi didn't block his memories how will he deal now? will he ever feel comfortable really being with sasuke??? gahh i hope the next chapter doesn't take too long ^_^
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on July 13, 2006
    Ha, I'm having one of those mornings except right now it's 2:33 in the afternoon. OMG. I was just thinking last night there has got to be an update soon, and yet I am very glad this isn't the last one! Yay! Ok, super squishiness for the end, I am so excited about that! But I had go reread the second part because I thought it was talking about Sasuke, and I'm hesitant to say that I really need to know that at the beginning, because it was more of a surprise that you don't know who it is until a few paragraphs more. And then I was like, why would Iruka be talking to Sasuke? Oh, right! Teehee. Or I'm dumb. That's possible!

    Then I was like ugh Sasuke you bastard, you don't want to help Naruto just because you'll get pregnant? But yeah Naruto would never want Kyuubi to be free. I wonder if Kyuubi will keep the memories of Sound away from Naruto since he loves Sasuke so much, maybe he'll finally learn what love is? Probably not, he is a demon after all, and apparently Naruto kept some of those memories since he was talking about that doctor and whatnot!

    I just hate that Naruto still has all those scars, I just wanna put a big old bandaid on them and make them go away! :::wants to hug Naruto but will wait until Sasuke gets to first::: If only he had been walking by the room instead, but no he's gotta go out and train! Eep! I don't want to get too excited because I'm afraid you might think a happy ending is like selling out. Happy is not selling out! It's... sacrificing for the good of the characters? Ah, well, I guess I should get out of bed or something. I'm so happy about the end of this chapter! Squee!
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  • From ANON - Psylocke on July 13, 2006
    Beautifully written, that last part! I love mornings like that as well and i love how you wrote it.

    Great chapter, looking forward to the next one (although at the same time I don't because I don't want it to end! XD), and here's hoping that Sasuke is not pregnant.
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  • From ANON - JLO on July 11, 2006
    OMG! I just luv ur story, when I first found out about it, I read every chapter up till this one!!! I am hooked!!!!!!!!! I'm obsessed!!!!!!!! Plz pretty plz update this soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Or I will go nuts and commit suicide >< Grrrrrrrrrrr... Ok now, that that's out, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^o^
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  • From ANON - melissa on July 10, 2006
    I like your perspective on how the story could go. One of the peps in my yahoo group brought your work to everyones atintion . I think everone was happy to see something new in the lines of Naruto .Please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on July 06, 2006
    horray i liked the added chappies. Poor kyuubi he's not use to allthose emotions then coupled with the fact that the others' emotions aren't for him but for naruto must be hard. i wonder if they'll come

    to a compromise or something. can't wait till you add more this story must be butter cause it's ona roll! LOL anywho keep up the good work.^_^

    ja ne till next time
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on July 04, 2006
    Woo, a breather in between chapters where nothing too horrific happens save the screaming and tearing up Iruka all night! And woo, Sasuke is finally back in the scene. He better damn well save Naruto soon or something. Hehe, although that was pretty funny when he was like 'Oh yeah, I guess Naruto and me, yeah that would be kind of gay.' I chuckled. And I liked that the cutting of the apple thing made me think of their first big fight on top of the hospital building (uh in the actual naruto, not in this lovely fanfic). I have a feeling the next chapter is going to be emotional to say the least.
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  • From ANON - Psylocke on July 03, 2006
    I love this fic so much...!!! *gives you a bunch of red roses* Although, one part in this chapter made me worry a bit.... "It did not matter if the creature selected to mated with was male or female, all demons held themselves to the gender of male and the integral ingredient was not their sperm but the chakra infused in it that rearranged the reproduction organs to handle a demon whelp or made them if none was present." Please tell me there won't be any mpreg! *begs on my knees* Even if you were to write it I wouldn't be able to read it. :( Please don't have mpreg in this fic!
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on July 03, 2006
    yay sasuke got sakura to take him to see kyuubi.. i can't wait to read what will happen next... now that kyuubi knows HE loves sasuke, what will his reaction be when sasuke's right in front of him again? this chapter actually made me sad for kyuubi! can't wait for the next
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on July 03, 2006
    Awww...Kyuubi learned and enbraced the concept of human emotions! How cute~! But will Sasuke will to give Kyuubi some emotional lovin'? I hope so!

    UPDATE SOON~! UPDATE SOONER~! UPDATE NOW~!
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on July 03, 2006
    I LOVED this chapter. You really write your characters well.

    I really feel for the Kyuubi, because he's right, he can't get anything that Naruto has. And that really... really sucks for him. But he shouldn't hate Naruto for it! It's not like they chose this!

    Anyways, awesome job. I can't wait till the next chapter (though I am sad that it's ending soon) so update soon!
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