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By : arora1
  • From ANON - kitten53 on August 25, 2006
    I LOVED IT!
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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on August 25, 2006
    This was incredible and I love you *huggles* I was crying for the first half of that chapter too, believing that you'd actually be cruel enough to allow Naruto to disappear from this world. I don't know how to thank you for the way the story ended. I love it. It's the happiest ending in the world. I would never have dreamed that you'd allow it in such a way. But you did. I love you =^-^=
    You gave my Naruto his bubbly energy back. And now he's got a son. I am so glad that Sasuke put up with the Kyuubi. So Naruto has no more demon in him,...no more worries. You know when Kyuubi was telling Sasuke that Naruto wouldn't remember anything that had happened btwn them? I was soooooooo sad. I wanted to scream and damn the computer and then angst like an emo b/c it would be something that you'd do w/o a second thought. So obviously, that's how I believed the story would end. With Naruto never knowing what happened and with Sasuke holding a baby in his poor tummy. You really are something ^^ You have my props for one of the BEST stories I have EVER read. And your beta's did a great job as well. I can't believe that it's finally done. Finally over. It's so sad T.T But relieving in the same way.

    It was very nice getting to review this story and watch it grow into a beautiful piece, hope there'll be more like this in the future
    Btw, I love how you named the chapter. Fixed. What was Broken is now fixed. ^^ I worship you *.*

    Love ¢¾

    ~Ria ^.~
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  • From ANON - LISA on August 25, 2006
    YIPPY! I HAVE CLOSURE I'M SO HAPPY A HAPPY ENDING YIPPY.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi_No_Ryu on August 25, 2006
    It's over...all good things must come to an end!

    (Wished to have seen Sasuke admit to everyone he was pregnant but we can't have everything that we want now can we?!)

    That was an honor to see this fic through major-grammer-mistaken beginning to only-semi-grammer-mistaken rewrite to extremely-satisfying end.

    Good luck with whatever you're doing now, arora!!
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  • From ANON - agoodfan of all things readable on August 25, 2006
    This is one of the best fics i have ever read.

    And I should know I've read over two hundred. ^.^ w00t
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on August 25, 2006
    *WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLSSS* this is so super sad, i can't even handle this right now that it's over. honestly, i might be a little drunk, but i might have to cry a bit that it's over. even though it was super happy. sasuke wasn't a selfish bastard and gave in to the deal, and despite not remembering (which kind of hurts too because they went through so much) Naruto apparently chose to stay with Sasuke. And Naruto's not so messed up! I can't believe he was almost going to run away from it all. Sasuke would have been crushed! (or is that me? am i projecting much?) but hey, you started that new story that i really love as well, so don't forget to work on that! meh, and i was totally thinking about this story for a while now and almost thought something happened to you when it was no longer being updated. even though i knew it was the last chapter and all... but ugh, it's over. No!

    Anyway, wow it must be something to have this completed. Good luck with your tour and whatnot, and I hope all the men aren't complete bastards. Tell 'em to f off. I'm sure you probably can't do that, huh? Ah well, good luck and all that. I'll just go cry a bit and then hug myself for comfort. But it was happy! I bet that killed ya to make a happy ending didn't it? hehe THANKS!
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  • From ANON - smegal_rocks on August 25, 2006
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved the whole entire story. this was the first ff that made me cry like a baby... you are an awsome writer. i hated the waiting but it was well worth it..
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  • From ANON - Brandy on August 01, 2006
    Hey! I love your story and I was wondering, When are you going to add the next chapter? I can't wait!!!! XD *bows* *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2006
    This fic has come a really long way, and I'm loving every bit of angst and blood that is in it. I hope that you can update the story soon!
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  • From ANON - waiting on July 29, 2006
    waiting for the next chapter,
    please hurry.

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  • From ANON - dancingkitsune on July 20, 2006
    kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa! xD Naruto be back xD

    Wait, so did sasuke agree, or did kyuubi do hi end of the most recent deal anyway and we'll find out that naruto helps him somehow later?? That would be cool
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  • From ANON - mE on July 17, 2006
    I'd like it more if Naruto got pregnant with Sasukes kid.. That's what Sasuke wanted.. to revive his clan.. :D
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on July 16, 2006
    will you have a romance with sasu and kyuubi but what about Naruto? i like Naruto and sasuke , the demon well he can find his own love!
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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on July 13, 2006
    Incredible. Absolutely amazing. I love you ^^ Kyuubi's request startled me for a while, but I felt too bad for him to think it would be gross. I kinda wished that he had his own body. Now I feel so sorry him for Sasuke putting him back in his cage.
    For just the first paragraph where Naruto was waking up towards the end of the chapter, I thought that maybe Kyuubi blocked all the horrible memories b/c Naruto seemed out of it. He didn't know what he was in the hospital, and couldn't remember how long he was there. So then I thought maybe he blocked Naruto's memories so Sasuke would like him. Am I strange for actually feeling bad for the demon? O.o

    Ria

    Good luck with your next chapter ^.~
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  • From DevilLived on July 13, 2006
    Yeah! I really liked that chapter, I don't know why but I enjoyed it the most out of all of them so far. I love hw you have the important scenes, but you don't forget about some of the characters' silly personalities (like Gai's "Men cannot get pregnant!" line). I also giggled when Tsunade mused how she should've banned the boys from the room (lol, inner-yaoi-fangirl. We're all one at heart).

    I really loved how you wrote the scene with everyone and the Kyuubi, that was cool. You display his emotions very well. I also liked how you didn't have Sasuke agree with the offer, for that would'n't be really realistic if you did. This way, it stuck with the characters and kept it real.

    Loved how you ended the chapter, great job! The waking up part was very accurate.

    Overal AWESOME job!!! Update soon! I can't wait till the next chapter!
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