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By : arora1
  • From ANON - yumemi on December 08, 2006
    woah!! i really love this story!! angst, gore, hurt-comfort, !strong naruto and sasuke and orochimaru!! my fav elements in fics ^__^

    .....just wondering but between sasuke, naruto and kyuubi. will they have a serious case of oedipus complex going on? incest? >:3
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  • From ANON - pwnd! on November 22, 2006
    o ya i just had to right some of this in. after reading your story 4 so long i don't know if i just got used to it or it got better but u had way too many mistakes but once i got past the first chapter i was so in-love wit ur story i barly noticed the misspeeling and stuff. i can't remeber all the stuff i had to say but all i can remember @ the moment is that it bothered the hell out of me it's not gui its gai-sensai (thuogh im not sure how to spell sensie(?) so 4get that part) but still that wuz annoying lol o and umm is there n-e chance u wrote "ruby red chakra" cuz i read this one fic and if u didn't u can find it but in the kyuubi/sasuke first rape seen @ orochimarus, i noticed half the chapters were word for word the same as the fic. so if u didn't write it u can go look 4 urself. n-e ways ur great at writing! ur creative!!
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  • From ANON - pwnd! on November 22, 2006
    wow i havn't reviewed the entire time but i just finished your story. it was really good REALLY GOOD. i luv'd this thing all the way through and couldn't stop wondering about the next time i could get to my lap top and finish reading it .
    i was a little surprised about how subtle it ends though just him waking up as partially the old him and 3 months later he has a kid, his little sasuke lover, and so on and thats how it ends. preety subtle but n-e ways i luvd it ur really good!!!
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  • From ANON - Tainted Red on October 20, 2006
    started out pretty good and i luved the whole kyuubi going on a rampage part but orochimaru taking naruto to the sound village just killed it-ruined it, i stopped reading after chapter 7...
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  • From ANON - fireprincess59 on October 17, 2006
    -Cries- Oh my goodness! It's a happy ending. I thought you would make it some sort of half-sad half-happy ending type thing. I'm so glad to have been your beta, but I must ask, what happened to me being your beta?
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 09, 2006
    Well.and so it ends .Hurrah for you, and the fic.A true epic this in more ways than one!Hope to hear from you again!Maybe a one off of a willing Sasuke and Kyubi?
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  • From ANON - Havoc Tellenoi on September 08, 2006
    That was the coolest story ever! it took me four days to read and it was so worth it! i loved it! it made me cry, it made me laugh, it made me skip meals to have more time with my computer to read it. It was an absolutely divine storyline and it so totally rocked. i applaud your talent and look forward to reading other things you've written. truly, this is a work of art in the fanfiction sector. kudos.
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on September 03, 2006
    Awesome job, I loved how you came up with the ending. Sasuke deciding to take the Kyuubi's offer was so heroic and sweet and just a tad bit romantic! Great job.

    This story was awesome, you should be very proud! I can't wait to read more of your works. Keep it up, okay?
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  • From ANON - jazzy on August 29, 2006
    This story despite its beginnings, you felt the need to beat the crap out of someone or something to that extent, This story became one hell of an emotional roller coaster ride. I loved and hated every moment of this story.

    Thanks for everything you put into it.
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  • From Jackee on August 28, 2006
    I had my doubts about the whole mpreg thing, and while I'm still overjoyed that you went into that direction, I still have to admit that you did a wonderful job of doing it neatly. :)
    This chapter was beautiful. And just as the rest of the fic, it was really intense with the emotions and there were a few times when I felt so much of the characters' pain that I wanted to cry.

    You've done an excellent job!! This is one of the best Naruto stories that have ever been written.

    (although, i must confess i felt a little disappointed that you didn't write the Kyuubi/Sasuke sex scene in this chapter, lol! ;P )
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  • From ANON - silverkitsune06 on August 27, 2006
    I didn't like the ending. It went by too fast. It was an awsome story till the last chapter! blah anywho congrats on finishing.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on August 27, 2006
    i'm happy thata kyuubi got his wish, to get his own body. now he can love sakuke and sakuke will love him too. maybe not in the way he wanted, but still it worked. i liked this final chappie alot it almost made me cry when naruto said he wanted to leave cause he didn't know who he was anymore. anywho i'm glad that it ended on a happy note.

    ja ne till next time (hopefully in another story)
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on August 27, 2006
    Bravo!!! *standing ovation* Thats was a great ending!!! I love that Kyuubi let Naruto keep his memories of Sasuke ^_^ I wonder what Kyuubi will be like when he grows up. btw, I loved the way you developed Kyuubi's personality as well as Naruto's. You did a fantastic job!! It really fit him!!! Anywayz, Fantastically awesome and amazing job!!! It was one of the BEST fan fictions I've ever read and I hope to see more of your work in the future!
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  • From ANON - hanyou-elf on August 27, 2006
    the only thing negative i have to say about this story is to watch spelling. there were a lot of spelling mistakes, and if you'd like, i'd be more than willing to go over this with you, to help you correct those. i know you mentioned several betas, but they've missed the spelling. your grammer, punctuation, and continuity are amazingly polished, however, the spelling is lacking.

    otherwise: wow. that's all there is to say. wow. you wrote one hell of a wonderfully charged, emotional, beautiful, touching, heart-wrenching story. it was an adventure reading through this story, knowing that there should be some kind of resolution for the pair, knowing it wouldn't necessarily be happy. you did a such a wonderful job with this story. you have startlingly wonderful control over the characters so that they were in character while still living out the life you created for them in this story. so many times i found myself gasping in shock at something that had happened or impatiently waiting for the next chapter to load. i finished this story in the past two days, if that tells you how much i've enjoyed it.

    well, that's all i've got to say. other than thank you for an amazingly wonderful read and keep writing. you've got a wonderful talent. and good for you, serving the country.

    ja ne!
    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From ANON - Damp on August 25, 2006
    **starts going hysterical** **is blowing nose** OH MY GOD!!!!! I WAS JUST CRYING AND CRYING AND CRYING THE WHOLE TIME!!!!!!! I WAS LIKE ' BUT SASUKE IT LOOKS SO WRONG BEING PREGENATE!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD!!!! I WAS LIKE WTF!!!!! WHEN I WAS READING THE PART ABOUT SASUKE AGREEING TO SLEEPING WITH KYUUBI I WAS LIKE " NARUTO IS HIS LOVER NOT U!!! BITCH!!!" OH MY GOD!!!! **is going hysterical** **is crying** WAAAAAAA!!!!! OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!
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