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Reviews for Broken

By : arora1
  • From ANON - Aww... #2! on July 09, 2005
    I forgot to add, I'm reviewing chapter 14! (I think. -__-) You know, the popsicle chapter!
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  • From ANON - Aww... on July 09, 2005
    This chapter was so, extremely sweet. ^__^ And that one line about Sasuke being "his frozen popsicle self..." I actually lol-ed at that one! xD (I've always wanted to use "lol" like that.)
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on July 07, 2005
    You know what would lighten up the mood a little? If Naruto and Sasuke end up traveling the countryside with a horse-drawn ramen cart as their way to make money. We really need to mellow down on the angst...the two suffered enough as it is.
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  • From ANON - BloodandChocolate on July 04, 2005
    Blood: holy f*k O.O that was one of the best fics I've ever read, and I cried so much when Orochimaru got raped. And nice NaruxSasu lemon btw, ^-~ Orochimaru-bastard better stay dead too. Please continue/update soon!
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  • From ANON - germaine(2lazy 2 sign in) on July 03, 2005
    okay, beside for the spelling and grammar mistakes it's a good story...but one thing confuses me to no end....first you said that one of his eyes are ruined....but then you keep saying that he looks with his eyes and not his eye...and what confuses me even more is that if Kyuubi could replace internal organs why didn't he replace the eye?

    Oh well, continue soon!

    hugs germaine!
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  • From ANON - Emma on June 29, 2005
    This story is so good!!!! The only annoying thing is that - especially in part 12 - you're overrepeating yourself with calling Naruto for "the blond". I would also recommend if you used a beta reader, as you frequently write typos (evan instead of even, justu in.o. jutsu, for example). But other than that, this story is excellent!!!! I loved that you made Naruto use the frog boss! XD (Haven't seen him around in most fics..) Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Akira on June 27, 2005
    Holy hell... I couldn't stop reading this! But Naruto needs his eye back! Maybe one of Kyuubi's(sp) could become his? One blue one red? I love everything else in it! Now things need to get better. Yay! I hope Sasuke well be on top though. I think that could help Naruto. Sorry I always like to guess or add ideas ^-^. Keep it up! Let me know when you write more!
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  • From ANON - Yay! on June 25, 2005
    They made it out of Sound! Yay, yay! (does the confetti thing) Yay! ^__^
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  • From ANON - ku on June 25, 2005
    omg!!! That was the best chapter ever!
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  • From ANON - Tashasaphi on June 18, 2005
    More chapters like these! Aww loved that bit at the end. Sasuke being great and Nauro beign responsive. Poor Naru-kun gettin all brokded. Overall pleasing chapter. Likey likey!
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  • From ANON - Kiri on June 13, 2005
    Wow. You sure got it in for Naruto, don't you? I gotta say, from all this, you're coming out as an evil sadistic bitch. But its a good story, don't know why, but I love the angst. But, I love Naruto, and I was wondering if he's ever going to get a break from all this and die, or will this be an unfinished fic? Or will this one won't have any happy endings at all. I mean...Shouldn't Naruto be broken by now? Even from all his hyperactiveness, I don't think any living being can go through this, with demon or not. Blah, nvm me, just reviewing. This is not a flame, and I'm sorry for calling you a bitch, just thought to put my opinion out. So, yeah, thanx for the good story. ^^ -Kirilian
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  • From ANON - Chimi_Tenshi on May 22, 2005
    Me like your story lots! XP
    Wow, Naru-chan went through so much!! *sobs*
    He's escaping now, but will he succeed? and if he does, how will Konoha view the idea of having Naru-chan back?
    Me can't wait till next chappie!
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on May 20, 2005
    that poor baby is just cruisin' for a bruisin' isn't he? oh my... great chapter! and thanks for updating so fast! I hope you will be able to update again soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - redfox9t on May 19, 2005
    Please, Please, Please don't hurt Naruto anymore. I feel like I'm going to throw up everytime you do something bad to him. I hope Sauske doesn't become addicted to the drug, and if he does finds another way to get it. Please update soon, and don't let Naruto get hurt!
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  • From ANON - Psylocke on May 19, 2005
    *holds breath* and then what happens?? *huggles Naruto protectivly*
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