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By : arora1
  • From ANON - bhodi li on August 16, 2005
    i always look forward to your updates. i love this story about Sasuke and Naruto. I really like how Neiji is making Sasuke jealous but Naruto is still clueless when it comes to any sexual tension between him and Sasuke and Neiji. It's soooooo emotionally involving. I really like how the emotions come out to play. They are complex and the characters are very complex, this gives them so depth, even though Gai is still weirding me out. I hope to see more of Naruto's friends help Naruto out and make Sasuke more jealous. =) **patiently awaiting the next update**
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  • From ANON - Leasan on August 16, 2005
    Woah... I'm kind... like... speechless...
    That was like...the sweetest and hottest kiss ever...
    Oh, and speechless Sasuke, oooh, sooo cuuute!!
    The whole chapter is really great!
    It's really wonderful that you depict love, tenderness and pleasure as outstandingly as you did torture, hate and fear.
    Your story is simply enticing!
    Update ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on August 15, 2005
    Chapter 18 was your best chapter yet! I honestly can't put it in words...I just loved it! *gasp* And you're finally using spell check!! We are so proud of you!! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOONER! UPDATE NOW!
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on August 15, 2005
    YES!!!! I'M SO HAPPY FOR AN UPDATE!!! I really like this chapter, Sasuke didn't die and he kissed Naruto. He loves him, it's so sweet. I can't wait for the next update of this story. I can't wait til Naruto gets back to Konoha and sees that Iruka isn't dead like he thinks he is(at least I'm assuming he isn't). Either that or he mentions Iruka and somebody tells him that he's alive and he gets so happy that he runs straight back to Konoha so he can see him. Okay that's stupid but whatever, your the one who writes (and I have to say I'm very jealous of you, I wish I could write but I suck). Your grammer getting better, I didn't see any noticeable grammatical errors. And Gai was spelled correctly everytime. Anyways that's pretty much all I can think of to say. Can't wait for your next update for both stories. HURRY HURRY!!!!! Please, so good:D
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  • From ANON - Emma on August 14, 2005
    Nooooo, you can't stop there!!!!!!! More, more, more!!!!!!!
    *eagerly awaits the next chapter* =)
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  • From ANON - Tech on August 13, 2005
    GOSH SASUKE!!!
    You make Mr.Mack- er.....GAI SENSEI MAD!!!!

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  • From ANON - Leasan on August 13, 2005
    OMFG!!!!!!!!!
    all I can say right now is - UPDATE!!! U P D A T E S O O N !!!!
    God!! Overdose?! OVERDOSE?! Are you trying to kill Sasuke????NNOOOOOOOO!!!!
    We want LOVE, we want happy-commin-together!!! WRAAAH!!!


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  • From ANON - Fallingstar on August 08, 2005
    THEN WHAT HAPPENS???????????????? I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!! HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Carrot on August 06, 2005
    *screams!!* i can't believe that!? Naruto needed him and he just did that!!!! ARG! Stupid Sasuke! He better get better!
    ...^^ i love this sotry sooo much!^^ can i make a suggestion!? I love it when Naruto runs to Sasuke for protection, it's just too cute!!^-^ eeeeeekkk!
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on August 06, 2005
    omigosh..this fic sooo rocks..i was kinda scared by the gore..but the complex Sasunaru relationship is wayyyyyyyyy too good to pass up...can't wait for your updates..please keep going =)
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on August 06, 2005
    No!! Sasuke, what's wrong with you?! You were so close to being clean!! UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - The Empress on August 06, 2005
    O.O *gasps* Oh no! Poor Sasuke. I hope he'll be ok. =( I hope Naruto doesn't go crazy on everyone. Man, now I absolutely must read the next chapter. Update soon, please.=) I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - moonprincess90 on August 05, 2005
    OMG! I so didn't see that coming!!! >.< Dumb Sasuke, I can see why he did it but..... AARRRRGGGGG!! *rips out the hair on her head* I don't think he'll die but who know what will happen. I'm hoping the next chapter goes up soon.
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  • From ANON - bookworm51485 on August 05, 2005
    YES!!!! I am so happy for the new chapter and now I can't wait for the next one. You did a lot better with this chapter grammerwise and things like spelling Gai's name correct, though I did notice a slip up once with that. Wow Sasuke is being such a jerk, though I guess I can understand why he's acting like that with his history. Are they going to take Sasuke to the doctor or are they going to try to deal with it on their own. God I can't wait for the next chapter. Is there any way for me to get early copies of the chapter, I want I want I want. Anyways I just wanted to say good job and I hope you update soon, reeeeeeally soon. SOOOOOOOOON. Like tomorrow soon, or wait how about today. Ok that's unrealistic, but still soon please. It's so good:)
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  • From ANON - Tech2 on August 05, 2005
    *squirms*
    If you don't update really soon, In think I'm gonna explode!!!!
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