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By : arora1
  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on September 12, 2005
    That nice...if they started fighting Itachi and the other Akatsuki members in this chapter, it would have felt very rushed. Now we're ready for some Akatsuki fighting!! Is Shino jealous of Naruto and Sasuke relationship? That's what it sounds like to me!! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOONER! UPDATE NOW!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 12, 2005
    Showing some soliderity know here boys,excellent.Thanks for smut.It is always good,yup always.This is getting exciting eh?Wondering what the heck Sasuke has Planned.
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  • From ANON - tashasaphi on September 08, 2005
    Yaaaaaay ^^

    Whee for the squeeness. Poor Naru-chan ^^

    Apart froma couple of gramatical errors (heh, this coming from me >
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  • From ANON - God_ofShadows on September 07, 2005
    Awsome work, really awsome, i don't usually review but this fic really got me glued to the computer, especially the last few chapters...you portray their emotions so well and manage to keep them as in char as posible (especially sasuke) i luv the way he is so posesive when it comes to naruto.And the kyuubi part is very well writen too, it wouldn't have been plausible for kyuubi to not be a blood thirsty beast but it's not emotionless either...I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - jazzy on September 06, 2005
    uuuh excelant chapter, it was really good, I'll be waiting in anticiaption until the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - Nova Alexandria on September 05, 2005
    Personaly, I liked the chapter. Being a fellow writer, I only post on fanfiction through, I know that even if the reader likes it, the writer sometimes can feel like the scene just doesn't express what you are feeling the charctors should express. Like trying to find a word to discrib somehting but being unable to find it and using another word in its place.
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  • From ANON - moonprincess90 on September 05, 2005
    anther wonderful chapter!! I hope they kick some akatsuki butt. Will Sasuke face off with Itachi? I can't wait. Thanks for the great story
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  • From ANON - Skizz on September 05, 2005
    Hmmm...trap? home? love? Gah, you probably said what the word was and I skimmed over it XD;.
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  • From ANON - Leasan on September 05, 2005
    Jeeez... Konoha attacked?...
    But that's the chance Naruto need to show how great his shinobi skills became and how loyal he still is, right?...
    Anyway, I like this chapter, it's like atransition from 'terrified and helpless' to 'stronger and getting better'.
    Oh, and I really liked Neji's teasing :)
    Update soon, I can't wait for Naruto's rehabilitation in Konoha!
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on September 04, 2005
    I gotta admit...that lacked luster compared to the previous chapters. But I still can't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - Billy on September 04, 2005
    Can't type a lot have to go but still love it and need a whole lot more!
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  • From ANON - Psylocke on September 02, 2005
    this fic is so bloody good...i've been checking in several times every day to see if there's any updates.. ^^;
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  • From ANON - Courtney on September 02, 2005
    Wow just Wow..... the gore almost made me puke..... But It was worth it in the end its finally starting to show some sunshine!!!!! or... is it.... your mind is an enigma XDD please keep it up I'm always waiting for your new chapter to come out ^^
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  • From ANON - bhodi li on September 01, 2005
    i really this story..i just happened upon it recently and it's a very good story. i do hope you continue this story.
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  • From ANON - Emily Saeke on August 31, 2005
    Oh wow, ...but Ita-san is waiting for them! THey walk into a trap and Naruto get's hurt all over again! *cries* Noooo! Hey...did I just pull a gai? My gawd I did...well anyway I asoluty LOVE this fic, it is one of my Favorites!
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